A soldier has arrived in Equestria after being betrayed by his own military. He harbors much hatred after knowing his own comrades and friends have betrayed him. He begins to slowly let go of his hatred as he spends time with the peaceful ponies.
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Still woulda found it frickin hilarious if twilight hadn't soundproofed the room yet XD "mommy,what's that noise?"
Twilight 's mind:"OH SHIT!"
dude i love this so much
I love this story, you deserve a moustache
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Thank you.
4176945 Thanks for your comment and I will say that you aren't the only one that has mentioned this. I have been giving it some thought to get an editor to clean up some of the story because I also want the first chapter to be a little cleaner. The only reason that it hasn't happened so soon is the reason is would the people that disliked it even try it again after the clean up. I would still clean it up just to make it look nice but just because I am kind of certain those that have tried and gave up wouldn't give it a second chance makes it kind of low on the list of when it will be done. Thank you very much though for your thoughts and being honest.
k so i'm just curious but does this follow along with the main plot if not do you know any stories that do? I'm still reading this story just curious.
4286015 It follows closely with the main plot with a few changes to keep the story in context with everything that has happened. As for other fics that follow the main plot, I know of none. Sorry for not being helpful in that part.
4286038 its ok I can't wait to get started should be epic
this is a great story keep up your momentum
Whens the next chapter coming out or are you just bussy with work or school?
4425947 School is finished for now until I start up my college courses. Should have a new chapter here soon since I have down time for the next while.
4425954 yay
4439758 ether that or hammer of dawn
4440931 I'm pretty sure we saw how well that worked in Gears of War.
4440958 true lol
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And Twilight accidentally mixes the sound suppression spell with a sound amplifier spell.
The kids should have their own chapter
9 filly 8 colt
What wrong with the last name?
where family name?