A soldier has arrived in Equestria after being betrayed by his own military. He harbors much hatred after knowing his own comrades and friends have betrayed him. He begins to slowly let go of his hatred as he spends time with the peaceful ponies.
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God damĀ“it Discord. And James is out again.
Man i like this Story, i like this Story really.
5807142 Eeyup XD
... i....i i have no words
Awesome chapter! A little quick, but still awesome.
Shit...celestia+ mood swings= living hell...shiiiiiiiiiit...and if Luna is too...goodbye equestria... (._.) /)
Welp...
uh, oh
is this story alive
i hope so
will there b more?
5946211 The story is alive, I just haven't had time to work on it.
cant wait until the next chapter.
summer is around the corner so if you have plane to make more chapter then you can write more chapter, huh?
6026040 I hear that.
But even this kind of thing isn't unheard of in the real world but he made a real thing so unrealistic. (I'm talking about Polyamory If you hadn't picked up on that.) I'm polyamorous and I think this type of relationship is far to close to a misogynistic polygamist relationship that centres far too much around the males satisfaction of wants and needs over the females.
6026916 Yeah, that much I know and I've been working on a rewrite for this story as I finish it up.
6026940 Heh, all the stallions knock all the mares up. What next? Mr. Cake getting Mayor Mare pregnant with his kid? Or Blossomforth? Or Carmel getting Derpy knocked up with another foal?
While I appreciate that the story feeds my fetish, there's so much that gets glossed over. Like the whole Matriarchal societal structure, where mares have more legal power/ responsibility as they outnumber the males. Or how the males role is typically look after the children and bed his mares. Then what about the issue of sexual harassment for the males? Is that an issue for them? Is that a concern? Would rape be considered rape in a matriarchal society? What about a male's ability to have education, access to health care, or to be gainfully employed? And that's not even touching on the fact that he's an alien. Surely there has to be societal subtleties that escape his notice, being an alien and not having been among ponies long. What about hate groups? Groups that think only ponies should be with ponies and not an ape looking freak? Or hate crimes? So much gets glossed over in favor for having a clop scene with a bunch of mares and knocking them up. Yes, there are action scenes with fights, but even the villains/ antagonists are beaten way too easily. It's not like the fight lasted days, weeks or months, but maybe an hour, if even that. It really doesn't make me view them as villains, seeing as they were beaten so quickly.
6040018 You aren't the first person to address this issue, and I really do plan on fixing up everything that has been glossed over in the story. Chapters will be expanded upon along with those issues being addressed more in the story and how they play out.
6039331 LOL! LET DANCE!
Then he destroyed a robot. Next he will fuck everyone in the show. After that he will become all-powerful. Then he will be gary stu. At this point I cannot be bothered to read this story. It was good until this fucking random chapter
As zecora would say "You're doomed"
Give us picture of the robot so we know what it looks like.
I was wondering why this fanfic sounded so similar, I've read it twice accidentally, but I regret nothing; it's a great story![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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6585419 I can say that it doesn't Improve. I have it planned to fix everything that I've written for this story, but it's very low on the list until I finish my later stories that are better.
6600645 Yeah, I changed my tune to the point where my own story paints him in bit of a better light when he is mentioned.
Still no update?![:fluttercry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttercry.png)
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