A soldier has arrived in Equestria after being betrayed by his own military. He harbors much hatred after knowing his own comrades and friends have betrayed him. He begins to slowly let go of his hatred as he spends time with the peaceful ponies.
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thats not a payment mark and a random shield. thats two cutie marks!
this human is gifted. watch out for GS, though
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I plan on watching out for GS but if someone sees it pop up some how please let me know so I can change it.
I have to say that I like the story and hope to see more of it. I can say that you gave a lot of stuff about the girls. Having chapter after chapter to point out each girl was overkill but still good. I can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the good work you are doing.
Dragonfox
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Thank you kindly. That actually means a lot to me.
3578179 OVERKILL MAN
Magic *snort* *snort*
3578864 the fire is awsome
Dude am I the only one worried about how pissed
The princess is going to be when she findes out he stole from her she is already super hostile this is only going to make it worse
So, that room is like the Hyperbolic Time Chamber from Dragonball?