Oh, man. A CoC x MLP crossover... I admit I am morbidly curious and will be reading it soon. We're not going to have to be seeing Kelt in this, are we?

.... MLP + CoC... Sold my friend! cant wait to see where this go's

3098511 we might see Kelt but as it says this is comment driven so i'd like some suggestions.
also this was originally going to be fluttershy and the cmc but now it is what it is

How fun planning on reading it soon

My curiosity has been peaked I do intend on reading this story through to the end

oh my Marae
dis gonna be good

while i am enjoying that this story is getting popular, as it says i need some ideas to start off, the main stuff i have planed for them wont happen until *fingerquote* late game. ideas are always welcome and i will most likely look at all of the comments for ideas.

Also if some of you are wondering i was originally going to have this as Fluttershy + CMC but i couldnt get the intro long enough to make it fully work, though depending on how many of you would like it i might restart that, but if anything it will be a carbon copy of this one just edited for fluttershy, though i could also have the same name as this and do AJ and her sister... but i likely wont

this shall be interesting.

Hm. Before we get to the important bits, some general commentary. Truthfully... your writing really needs work. Your grammar is mostly okay, though I saw an uncapitalized "I" and a misuse of "They're" and there are plenty of run-on sentences.

But the worst thing is how much of a rush you seem to be in. I know you've probably been harped at just like I have about 'show, don't tell' but in your case it's especially bad. I know you're in a hurry to get to the porn, but slow the hell down and pace it a bit, 'mkay? The intro chapter sort of reads like stereo instructions, and I'm hoping it's not a sign of things to come.

Also, Discord, ride a chariot? If the rush didn't kill suspension of disbelief, that would. Even if he wasn't assigning such a high threat level to it, he'd probably still go goof off and meet them when they got there, and with the high threat level, he's more likely to just *snap* "Okay, we're here!"

Hoping the porn bits are better.

Why is it called 'Corruption of Sisters', if it's Rarity that goes in the Portal ?
I thought it was gonna be THE sisters, you know ? Celestia and Luna ?

Also... >"Because I was not always like this, I used to be a normal Pegasus."
-BOO! For bad fan-cannon. BOO!