Link
chapter 2
THis is not Hyrule.
“Link! Stop playing that Ocarina and found us something to eat!” Yelled the white fairy as Link keep blowing into his magical instrument. He was testing each tune he learned and strangely all the teleportation tune were not working anymore. It was a real shame because it was his favorite one but at least he could still use a few other ones.
“Are you listening to me Link!”
The Hylian sighed before he nodded to his little companion, sometime he was regretting haveing wished a fairy when he was still living in the kokiri forest but at least she was kinda resourceful...sometimes.
As he walk into the forest for some fruit or a wild animal he could hunt, he realised that the forest seem a little...off, if he remember correctly the only forest in Hyrule was the Lost woods, and this one was surely not the magical forest where he has been lost more than a week. Just thinking about it made him want to shoot an arrow at the owl who told him to follow the music, what he thought nothing about was the fact Link was not an animal like him so he has no overpowered hearing to find Saria on the complete opposite way of the forest playing her ocarina.
“Link watch out!” Yelled Navi, interrupting Link and his wish of vengeance. “There is. A deer over there! You should track it.”
Link nodded, it has been a long time since he ate something else than fish that he could catch in the Zora lake or some pound of water in some cavern and he was salivating at the thought of taking a bite of fresh meat. Link hid himself behind a tree, trying to do all possible to stay quiet and make no sound, He readied his bow and made sure to aim carefully, he slowed his respiration but at the second he was going to shoot the deadly arrow, Navi decided to help Link by going flying around the head of the deer and unfortunately for Link, a yellow fairy flying around you is nothing subtle and the deer run away, leaving a hungry hylian and a confused fairy behind him.
“Let’s both of us forget that and let’s find out where the nearest INN is…”
***
Hyrule Field
Far away from all this, a mare named Epona was quietly eating some grass in the Hyrule field, waiting for her owner to call her. Unfortunately for her since he could travel a lot of distance with his Ocarina he did not need her as often as before. The last thing they have done together was a poe hunt in the Hyrule field and two weeks have already passed and she feel betrayed by this. The mare sighed before she trotted to the nearest water source where she looked at her reflection. Admiring her face which she took care of it everyday and her light brown mane which was by far the most beautiful mane on the Lon Lon Ranch.
“ So why he is not paying attention to me….?” The mare asked herself , even if she know the answer she would not accept it she would not accept that a silly thing like a different species could keep her from the dream of being with Link. She has heard of Zora married to Goron and Hylian being close with Gerudo so maybe all hope was not lost.
“Link…..”
Just thinkin about him made her heart beat faster, but for now she didn't have the pleasure to think much about him, she did not realise at first but while she admired herself on the surface of the lake, the sun set and the moon was rising up in the sky.
Panicking, Epora ran the fastest she can in direction of the Ranch but unfortunately when she arrived the two wooden doors were closed, blocking her way to safety. She kicked the door with her back hooves, hoping they will break or that Malon inside will hear her but no one came and the two doors still stayed closed.
Epona could hear behind her the steps of the skeleton walking slowly toward her, the mare started to whinny loudly, giving kick to each Skeleton who come near her but she soon became exhausted and the skeleton profited from this moment by jump on her and putting an end to her life.
The last thing Epona saw was a bright white flash before everything turned black.
***
“Maybe something is stuck inside the Ocarina! Have you checked?” Asked Navi while Link was trying for the third time to play Epona’s song. Usually it worked all the time but it seems like the Ocarina has lost more than half of is power since he was here. Link did as Navi told him and he blow into each hole of the instrument to make sure that nothing was stuck inside of it, when he was done he tried one more time. His finger moving swiftly on the instrument as he played the magical song. after he finished, he waited to hear the usual clip clop that epona made when she got close but the forest stayed silent. Desperation engulfed him as he realized that maybe he would never see his horse again but at the last second he heard the usual sound of her hoof step behind him, maybe a little more fast than usual, but she was there.
“There you are! You taken your time. what were you doing? nothing as usual?” Asked Navi to Epona. At the desperation of Link, each time he called Epona, Navi needed to say something mean to the jument, maybe because she nearly ate her when Navi sleep in a haystack .
“So where are we heading for Link?”
“You can talk?” Yelled the the white fairy while Link stay there mouth agape wondering what he have done to the three goddess for being stuck with the most annoying fairy and now a talking horse.
You should get an editer. Your grammar is horrid. I don't mean to offend, this story could really be interesting, but alot of the dialog is very mismatched.
3080461
I agree, the amount of misspellings are terribly high. I will still read, but I recomend you get an editer for some people aren't as nice as me.
You know, in a story that I'm working on, I decided to have Fluttershy be Navi. This is so funny that I'm starting to reconsider it though.
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3080461
Both these posts are ironic considering they both misspelled editor.
3081234
Well 1 misspelling isn't as bad as many, and I'm running on very little sleep right now.
Bullshit. SamusXLeviathan Seed is worst pairing. EponaXLink is cute in a creepy and weird way, but still cute.
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3080461>>3080920
What is that fancy thing you are talking about? Grammar? never heard of such a thing....Maybe because i live somewhere where they do not teach you english and i need to learn it by myself Would you both please tell me what or where are the errors for i could fix them.
Thank you
From a Quebecois.
3081301
i squee so hard at this picture....wait...samus and...
I was wondering if i should turn Epona into a pony....i think that picture give me the answer i wanted
3081044 I would have put Pinkie as Navi. She's got the capacity to be much more annoying.
Please allow me to discourage further hate comments with a quote,
"those who criticize are insecure themselves."
This won't end well...
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But Fluttershy could slip away without being noticed more easily. She accidentally goes through a portal, meets the Deku Tree, and then goes with Link on an adventure. But that's the side story to the main story. It just helps make everything more logical without being logical.
3081301
Well, at least any of those pairings would be a better love story than twilight.
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Sorry, but I'm better at noticing mistakes than pointing them out, but why not look for an editor on this site to help you out.
3081301
Also, there is one huge problem with that picture. The master sword's hilt is purple
A few mistakes in the first paragraph,
“Link! Stop playing that Ocarina and found us something to eat!” Yelled the white fairy as Link keep blowing into his magical instrument. He was testing each tune he learned and strangely all the teleportation tune were not working anymore. It was a real shame because it was his favorite one but at least he could still use a few other ones.
The mistakes in red are fixed in the paragraph below.
“Link! Stop playing that Ocarina and find us something to eat!” Yelled the white fairy as Link kept blowing into his magical instrument. He was testing each tune he learned, and strangely all the teleportation tunes were not working anymore. It was a real shame because they were his favorite ones, but at least he could still use a few other ones.
If you want more error fixes on this please find an editor, because I don't have enough time on my hands to edit an entire chapter
God job
EponaXLink? Crazy but worth looking into, as for the story, I hope Link, Epona... maybe not Navi gets back as they still have a job to do.
Awesome!!
but killing epona was harsh dude
3087831
Meh just give her a pink fairy and she will be alright
*slowly backs away from webpage*
...
*runs*
3193163
that is the reaction i wanted
Ok one problem, playing the Song of Storms again doesn't stop the rain.
3232741
yes it do!....well...wait a minute i will go turn on my N64 and test it
seems awesome, tu me fais rapellé des souvenir de ma N64
Well... this is odd.
3324038
Well Duh, Odd is liek the ebst thing
All the spelling and grammar mistakes are making me cringe far too often to enjoy this fic. It doesn't seem all that... Elaborate, either. It's a nice idea of a fic, i'll give you that, but the execution so far is kind of... Meh.
Since i'm not exactly for thumbing down, I'm not gonna do that; however, i'm not going to do my usual routine of thumbing up and favoriting either. It's a harsh truth, but the best medicine is often bitter. *shrug*
*picks up candy*maybe if i throw this at the screen,a new chapter will appear!*throws candy*work stupid candy,work!!!!
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I prefer cookies.
3430485 *bakes a batch of cookies* NOW WORK
The cover art. Chicken, Scootaloo...I see what you did there!
plz plz plz moar!
Please more.......but dude.......you need an editor.....
3507395 Still funny, still dated.
Hey.
you needz editor
You need an editor.
Whatevs
Whatever
douche
Anyway, I could be your editor. One of the wonderful uses of the iMac.
i don't like the fact that Navi gets alot of hate. remember, Link ares for her as seen in the manga, and the games. in the manga, she was really funny and sweet and kind, and in the Majora's Mask manga and game, Link was looking for Navi after she left at the end of Ocarina Of Time. Link cared for Navi enough to consider her a dear friend. remember that.
4100566
ho but and do love Navi, she with Midna my favorite character but this story try to be humorist and well It more fun to hate her than love her
3193163
*Sitting on bench reading comics*
"...AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAUUUUUUGGH!!!"
"Whoa, dude, what's going on with you?"
"REVERSE BEASTIALITY! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA..."
"...Huh."
*Goes back to reading*
"You'd think a Brony would be used to that sort of thing."
4888366
that comment alone make me want to restart writing on this story
4888366 I avoid 99.9% of the Brony community.
Y u no write more chapters?
4989238 NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO WHAT HAPPEN!!!! THE STORY!!! MUST BE BACK!
4888366 Do you have any idea what the hell was up with that guy?!
He just screamed in my face.
4891003 More, please.
I hate fucking waiting...
I think you mean best ship ever
Anywho, read this and I have to say it has promise... but grammar is... absolutely atrocious, and the dialogue is a bit wonky.
But! Getting an editor will totally fix things up, just have someone look at the next chappie whenever its done.
Meanwhile, I'll give you a favorite and an upvote and hope for an awesome update.
Till next time~
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Well, I've heard of stranger ships.