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Well-done. She trusts you, she likes you, and you have become far more persuasive. Now, force nothing on her, but should she decide to make a move of any sort on you, embrace it. Or should I say, embrace her? Heh.
Once she's had intercourse with you, she'll fall under your spell. She won't be able to refuse your commands, and you can do as you please with her. Now, the more sex you have with her, the harder it will be for her to break free, so I heartily recommend bucking her a few times to ensure her compliance. And don't worry, she'll retain her conversational abilities; it is more of a redirection of her moral compass. Instead of believing in the abstract concepts of "good" and "evil", she'll believe that whatever you desire is right and whatever would hinder you is wrong. A refreshing change from those who scorned you and felt that all you did was wrong, no? You're simply soliciting reparation for these injustices.
[I was actually rather impressed with the rhyme scheme. Writing Zecora is no easy thing. That being said, I can't say I understand your decision to center her dialogue; I feel it is somewhat distracting. However, it is your story, and far be it from me to dictate its course in any ways you have not authorized.]
Make your move in the morning, then she shall be yours.
Very good pony. You are on your way to winning this mares heart. DO NOT BUCK THIS UP!!! Zecora is a true catch. Charming and intelligent, skilled in healing arts which, lets face it, you won't last long without. Now, hold her tight through the night. When you wake, act the gentlecolt and apologize for the uninvited embrace, though I doubt she will mind. Go through the day, a touch of tail to side hear, a congradulation nuzzle there, and kind words and compliments scattered throughout. She will be yours. Remember, once you mate her, you have an Amulet to claim and a Dragon to fight. The corrupting influence of the Alicorn Amulet will aid you in truly claiming Zecora as yours...do not fail us.
(To Pyrus)
(I am guiding the pawn towards the dragon that makes his home in the Everfree. The dragons hoard will aid him in acquiring useful materials, and by/during the killing of the dragon I recommend gaining the ability to consume flame to heal as well as fire breath. :See Dragon Slayer Magic: Since you are the De-facto Deity of the dragons of this realm, I thought you deserved a heads up.)
Nomad
(I HAVE A PROBLEM WITH ZECORAS WRITING SCHEME! No, not really, I know how hard it is to write for her and you managed very well.)
Sweet. You got her in the same bed. Now, when you wake up, you will notice that your sense of smell has amped up quite a bit. After messing around with the ability a bit, you will find that you can control it. Two scents are clear throughout all others. Brimstone, and the smell of nature itself, pulling you somewhere. Follow the brimstone, and gain the breath and treasures of a dragon (Part of the Dragon Legacy). Follow the pull of nature, and gain the ability to control nature itself, in ways you had never imagined (Part if the Everfree Legacy).
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Following further along the Everfree Legacy will slow reaction times and make you an easy target for, say, the Elements of Harmony. Seek the brimstone scent that promises treasure and flame, but only after that zebra you tame. Make her yours, and you shall see, you shall thrive in the Everfree.
(Reliance on any one mutation or power threatens to overwhelm the host with the downsides of said mutation. Balance nature with flame, temper with additional nature later when the Flame settels.)
[Very enjoyable chapter! I think the idea of splitting the clop and non-clop versions is a good idea, too]
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While holding her tight, take your time and lick her ear. Just slightly, just once. Make sure she does not wake.
Then, whisper to her how much you like her- but more importantly, whisper to her how much she likes you. How she wants to be yours. Why else did she tell you about her people's "herds"? She wants to be yours at least as much as you want her to be yours, maybe even more! So quietly whisper to her sleeping form how fulfilling her life would be under you, as your... well, that depends on how she conducts herself, eh? Perhaps as your mate, but if she turns out to be truly subservient, slavish even, you need to call her something else, of course.
And do not worry that you're doing anything to her besides holding her and whispering. Princess Luna is the only one who can change ponies in their dreams; you are merely voicing your thoughts. Harmless.
(That's not the case, of course. Direct contact with his enchanted tongue should markedly increase the effect, hence the licking of Zecora's ear; plus, her sleep-induced vulnerability will make any suggestion take root deeply in her defenseless mind. He will condition her to see him as her master, but it will take a little time.
And if he is to ever see the amulet, she needs to see him that way. I doubt Zecora would hand as dangerous an artifact as this even to a loved one- that is, if she hasn't gotten rid of it in a permanent fashion already.)
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In many ways, Zecora and the Everfree Forest are one. You want her... maybe you want it as well? It is your home for the time being. Why not learn about it, about its wonders and dangers?
Think about it: nopony besides Zecora lives here, and nopony knows much about it. What if... what if you were the first to truly explore it? You could finally be somepony! No homeless bum anymore, but an esteemed explorer, greater even than Daring Do! You would be famous, rich, loved!
So use your new sense of smell to learn Zecora's craft as well as to understand the Everfree. Remember, you'll be somepony- you'll finally be somepony...
(I noticed we are trying to move him too fast. He's not a fighter- not yet. He has not interest in fighting. We need to slow down, and build him up first; and to do that, he needs an incentive that works for him. Cue my attempt to give him a chance to stroke his ego. Hardly anypony wants to fight, but everypony wants to be famous, especially one that's known only rock bottom his entire life.
So, in the guise of doing Equestria good, let him unlock the resources of the Everfree before doing something as dangerous as taking on a full-grown dragon. The dragon can wait. Let him master the forest as he masters Zecora: my vote is for the Everfree Legacy.)
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(It seems I have been outvoted. Just keep in mind that battle is inevetible and that strengthening his connection to nature will increase his sluggishness and lethargy as well as reduce his tolerance to flame and ice...the very elements of our benefactors)
The dragon can wait, seek the power the Everfree whispers of.
(P.S. The amulet is in the box he was staring at at the start of the chapter)
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(Ah, so it is. Good.
I understand your worries; however, moving him away from their sphere of influence will give us an edge should Luna or Celestia suspect their involvement. Among other reasons, of course...)
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(Be careful friend, nature tends to have a purifying influence on those it claims, just look at Fluttershy, connected at a deeper level to the creatures of nature and as pure and innocent as can be. And we all know the saying about too much of a good thing...)
I still expect you to seek the dragon when the time is right...something to balance out the abundance of green that is infusing into your being.
Nomad
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Who knows, maybe you'll even eventually manage a feat as awesome as defeating a full-fledged dragon!
(Agreed. The clash with the dragon is merely postponed. He will be dealt with the time is right.)