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[Definitely you did! Actually, I was beginning to feel a little guilty. We, the voices, have grown in number over the course of the story, to the point where keeping track of it must be a lot of work. I thought about not participating for a bit—you know, to unclutter the process—but it's just so much fun! Plus, heh, our track record and all that!]
(We are once again honored by your responding to us from across the rift. We shall continue in our given task, and ensure evil returns to Equestria once more. Also, I'm glad you enjoyed the mead...I didn't think yours would freeze though Cryon. I will keep an eye out for any further dimensional tears...it's funny, no matter how many times I tell people I can't drink alchohal, they continue to send me more of it to fill the wine celler, it might as well have some use beyond cooking.)
(On an unrelated note. Scrying has revealed a stable portal linking two dimensions in the Crystal Empire, would it be possible to repurpose it into a "shortcut" into Tartarus?)
With Respect
Nomad
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((Nomad, they love you more than they love me. Could I borrow your space rift perchance? I would like to send them video games to enjoy. Fallout and Call of Duty would be my first choices.
The way I am to piece this together is like skyrim. We have a magical land, needing of a protagonist, free from outside influence and it has lore connected to it. We simply have to be evil. Not chaotic evil like discord (even though he is chaotic neutral), that would cause problems. We must simply "level up" our puppet to face bigger and badder things and the Princesses are our final boss it seems. Tartarus seems useful, but only later.
On another note, we are going to be having contact with civilization for the first time. We need to get this infectious star on the road, we need to start this like a email virus. Each touch spreads out the corruption. Make them sympathize with us, start to question the princesses. With Twilight's innocence, and the fact that Equestria is so innocent in general, we can turn the populace, and Twilight, on the Princesses. Obviously this would take time, meanwhile we could train blank slate. And start a... religious group of sorts. It would explain the mutations, we can claim he is the chosen one to overthrow the dictatorship of the two sisters.
A position of power, an excuse, a possible army, and most importantly, we don't have to kill Fluttershy.
And about the Main Six, we can use Twilight, and I will fight for Fluttershy until the death, but what do we do about them?
On an unrelated note, I think my explanations for the powers are getting more elaborate and stupid. At the same time, I think I might be the only one doing them. We need a discussion.
To the author: Please make a chapter that you would update, listing important information, goals that we decide and most recent significant event. This would also double as a spot for us to have conversations and debates on what should occur next. Edit::: Also put in major players or people in the chapter (by username and call sign if that's the case *cougharrogancecough*) so that the others can observe, learn, respect and if need be support them. (And inflate their ego.)
To Nomad again, you and Archivist are (no offence to anyone) two of the driving forces behind this endeavor. You for ideas and execution, me for goals and manipulation, and him for more casual ideas and our organization. If I ever rule the world, or I want to, or anything of any sort, I'm kidnapping you both.
The Chessmaster))
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(Chessmaster, sometimes your mind scares me. We are in agreement that we need to start spreading the Star's influence, but simple touch as the transfer mechanism seems like it will spiral out of control quite quickly. Sonics seem to have various applicatins in this world, what if we use this natural harmonic effect against them and give dear Blank an infectious song. It dosen't even need lyrics, we can simply use vocalization to resonate the tendrils of the Star to all within earshot.)
(In regards to the rift, sorry. It closed up after I sent the mead through. If I find another, I'll let you know.)
Nomad
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(As for the rest of the Mane Six, the first to join us should be Pinkie. Her very essence resonates with the world around her and is thus even more susceptible to the Star's corrupting influence. As a secondary note, if we could absorb some of her essence into our host, we could spread the influence of the Star via the fabric of reality itself.)
(Applejack is a problem, but there is a possible solution. We need to have dear Blank "accidentally" infect the Apple Family trees, a little blood on their roots during a training session should get that line of dominos falling.)
(Rarity...I'm not sure what to do with her. Maybe Archivist has an idea.)
(Rainbow Dash has one issue, she follows the crowd. Unfortunately, her crowd are her friends. In order to take Dash, we first need the other five under our sway.)
Nomad
((It figures this would update while I'm on guard and therefore unable to respond. Oh well.
[And also, a general sheet of choices made, ponies met, places been, and appearance changes, seems like it might be in order as well.]
I'm curious as to how you plan to implement this. Are you thinking posting it as a chapter or off-site {Google Docs or something}, and in different versions or a live-doc? [A character sheet for easy reference] Tab-Data or Text-Block?
Sorry, I just got off work, and am still in that mindset.))
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(I agree that 'Mena would be the easiest to draw into our fold, if only because {if I interpret Cryon correctly} the nature of her environment changes her. So by making the world darker she'll grow darker herself. "(S)pread the influence of the Star via the fabric of reality itself", wait, spreading via contact-contagion would "spiral out of control" but impregnating the Star's influence into the underlying substructure of the 'verse won't? In this instance {I cannot believe I'm about to say this} I agree with Pyrus. In most situations having greater control over a small number of agents is more advantageous than minor influence over vast hordes.
Distilled Cider is a business-mare, but more than that she is completely incapable of admitting when she needs help. Provided we can make any problems seem personal, we can keep her isolated and effectively neutralised.
Rare... is probably one of the most complex of the Mane Six. My initial reaction would be to play up the "Ingenue"/"Beast" angle until we grow powerful enough to switch to Knight in Black Trench-coat. Thus playing off her biggest weakness, she thinks the world works on fairy-tale logic. In this case, Beauty and the Beast.
Dashie, Dashie, Dashie. You know what the trouble with loyalty is? Sometimes you're loyal to both sides. Even if we cannot convert all the Mane Six {and I have no illusions that we can}, if we break Harmony, Dash is neutralised.)
(A sonic contagion? Hmm, to build off Charming Tongue or Final Lullaby, that is the question. Charming Tongue would give us better control, but Final Lullaby would be less noticeable. I leave the choice to the mobile vulgus.
"I can't drink alcohol", you poor bastard. Alcohol is proof not all demons are malevolent.)
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(Innocent doesn't mean "moral" it means "ignorant". An innocent doesn't know the difference between right and wrong, Twilight specifically has had far to much experience with the, shall we say, unethical side of Equestria to be innocent. That said, her Purpleness isn't the most morally sound of the Mane Six herself {Make a Friendship Problem, anyone?}, and lands squarely in the "Screw what's right! I have Rules!" side of the equation. So corrupting her is more a case of manipulating the rules she functions under. As an aside, if we do go Evil Empire, she could administrate a great communist dictatorship.
"I will fight for Fluttershy until the death," ok, you can have the bi-polar psycho with a trickster-god boyfriend. Actually, it would appear that this Discord does view friendship through the lens of a psychopath, or NPD at least, "he has recently come to see himself as benefitting from 'Friendship' which causes him to perform actions that further this friendship," so if Flutters is on our side, so is Discord, and he'll have no objections to any of the evil we instigate due to being a "good guy" now.
As for explaining Slate's powers. Don't. It's not like he knows what's going on, why should anypony else? The biggest issue is if Starbutt decides to re-enact Feeling Pinkie Keen and subject us to lab conditions. That could be bad.
I'd also add Derpsby and Lord Siffer to the primary group, and crystal ball says Seth Speth will join in representing the "burn bucking everything" position in the future. And is it really kidnapping if I'm actively aiding?)
(Iesu Christus, that was a long spiel.)
(Archivist)
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(The point of my suggestion to infect the fabric of reality is to avoid the problems that would come if the spread was likened to a plague or disease. By spreading via the fabrics of reality, we darken the world and make it easier to be evil. Mistrust and aggression grows and the herd nature of ponies starts deviding a once harmonious whole into factions and bitter rivalries. Then, with all of Equestria falling apart, the princesses will be far to occupied "putting out fires" to keep our growing power base in check)
Nomad
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(As for the sonic contaigen angle, why not build off both. Use Final Lullaby to ensnare a crowd with minor control, and Charmed Tounge to further entrench that control in individuals of value.)
(Also, I must say that your method for dealing with Rarity seems quite sound. This plan has my support should we decide to implement it, though it would necessitate pseudo-romantic feelings between Balnk and Rarity. I recomend establishing a tighter hold over our two current thralls before trying to claim or influence a third.)
Nomad
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(Building off both seems sensible, actually if we add the Tuning Forks to the ability we'd possibly have a "Star Nuke" for use in emergencies as well. The problem with infecting reality is it would still spread from our location, and unlike a disease which you need to trace infected by infected to find patient zero, a "miasma", lets say, you merely need to find the epicentre. Which is the Everfree {well, technically Blank is the centre, but margin of error and prejudices will blame the Everfree} and the last thing we want at this time is to focus Day and Night's attention on us.
Although, if they do focus on the Everfree and decide it has to be removed, we could resurrect an older {Ch 17} plot we had.)
(On Rare, we're already developing Slate's desire for a herd, and if we can convince Zecora to share with Trixie of all ponies, Rarity {one of the ponies she actually likes} won't be a problem. That said, I concur with the need to establish greater enthralment of our two current projects before we start another.)
(Archivist)
((3873647, the spiral out of control thing would be more of a hive-mind thing. We would say something like ::Hate Celestia:: (example) and it would be an objective for them. They still function as normal, we just control the horde. Think zombie apocalypse, controlled by a necromancer, but each of the zombies still have their own lives. We only would change their beliefs.
Pity, I liked that rift.
3873712, there is the beauty of Dash, she follows her friends. lets take a look at the show, she hangs out with Applejack, Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy the most. Sure she has other friends, but these are the ones she likes the most. Convince Pinkie and you have your best friend converted, that is a major separation to her loyalty. Fluttershy would be her oldest friend, and Applejack would be her rival. Getting two out of three would get her. Even one would work if we play are cards right.
3874424, I do know that innocence is ignorance, and that would work into my plans just as well, if not better than morals either way. Also, I do know that I can't interact with Fluttershy, I also know that none of them can interact with me. Thus, the reason I am so protective of Fluttershy is because of natural instinct. You can do whatever you want to her, just don't kill her or harm her without a plan first. injuring the weakest and most feeble is a one way ticket to being hated. Protect her however, and we are seen in a much better light. Discord does pose a problem though. Being a trickster god, and an old one at that, means that he probably knows about the Star. I don't know if the Star can infect him, so I would prefer him to be dealt with him last. Looks like we will have to keep from meeting Fluttershy until we know magic and how to hide the "superpowers" effectively.
Honestly, I'm not going to hold anything against you, but the way you phrased that section made me feel insulted. I'm fairly sure that was not the goal, but I just got that feeling.
3874892, I like that idea a lot actually. We would have to gain power first, so it seems like an endgame play, but definitely usable.
The Chessmaster))
((P.S. What do we do with other species?))
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(I apologise, I really need to learn to sleep before posting, that entire comment came-off as a rant. I meant no insult. Merely that I never got the impression that Equestia was in anyway innocent. And Fluttershy is crazy. She hides it better than the rest of Harmony {mostly}, but that just makes her harder to control. If it wasn't for her being our only lever on Discord, I wouldn't have anything to do with her. Not kill her, as you say, that's hardly helpful, but ignore her completely until such time as that becomes untenable.)
3877380 ((Crazy is good. Crazy can be manipulated. And turned evil. Remember Flutterbitch?))
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(Openly crazy is good. When you know what crazy you're dealing with I agree wholeheartedly. The problem comes when someone tries compensate for it. You're never able to predict if you're going to trigger the primary disturbance or the compensation mechanisms. Still, if you have a way around that, go for it. Flutterbitch with Discord wrapped around her hoof would be something to behold.)
(Archivist)
(sorry i have gone gone lately)
(brothers can lets say let the host find a dark dragon or more likly an egg dragons are powerful in a rights granted at times they are very stupid and prideful, or a demon that escaped the hell pit before it was desicrated with the holy works of mortals.)
( Pyrus even if it takes millions of lives and years the tarlutas will be freed of the the holy sluts of good evil most have back its true home and army o hate.)
host you are swred right now, and lets face it females are unknow to you so let your marefriend help you because she can help you, on a side note if you fail i will use your soul to become a demon to replace you welp.
Lord Scoro Demon of the warp
3869408 ( i agree first mission for host GET TH FUCKING HOME OF EVIL BACK)
3873712 ( yes yes he can sommon the armys of evil it could work)
3877115 (( the spieces is a good Question))
( vocius we are a coletive like washington the only difference from their evil ways is everyone sees it and it is effective there way is just talk someone to desth or never ask what they will do to help to world because it is the last thing on thier minds)
host the herd most grow, grow it for evil to grow you must have heirs to spread it. Trixie's can be used as a breeding slave.
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Keeping Zecora in the dark while our hold on her is enforced only by her romantic feelings would be a greater mistake than I can describe. I speak from experience that when love and trust shatter, they can form the deepest hatred. No, we must keep her appeased with truth when needed, half-truths at the worst and omission only when necessary.
Once we have entrenched our will into her soul, we will be able to tell her only what we want her to here, but not before, and certainly not now when the wounds of perceived betrayal are still fresh in her heart.
Nomad
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I'm not ruling Trixie out. I'm just saying that if we better acclimate Blank's own natural magic to being used, we can reduce the debilitatating pain he feels when using magic.
Nomad
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(I'm with you on this, Nomad. Better not to lie before we can be sure Zecora either doesn't care about what Trixie has to say or accepts what Blank tells her like a good little toy.)
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(Yes, agreed! Trixie and Zecora shall both become his playthings, even if he doesn't know it.)
[[ To The Brothers]]
[[
Pyrus and Cryon.. It is too bad you can't visit. Why, there are so many lonely lovely shapeshifting succubi here who are just -dying- for a little attention. They would love to have any and every excuse to satisfy any needs you might have. Male, female... both.. They can be anything and everything you desire, and they are quite inexhaustable. Immortal bodies with loosely coupled souls can be quite useful in the erotic arts.
It's really too bad that you can't do anything about that pesky dimensional barrier. We do so love evil here, and we consider it our highest moral duty to spread it around.. And we're -all- about morality.
We love visting new and exotic locations.
But this is not the first time we've had to work through mortal agents. Really, it's a common thing, and I do appreciate the opportunity to work my craft.
Hmm, let's see.. Frustration? I have a favor to call in from Asmodeus... Just a moment.... Ah hah!
*Pop*
Here, have a selection of some of @#$@#$'s finest complimentary sex sleeves. I sent you three flavors and sizes: vanilla, chocolate, and tabasco flavors in tight, agonizing, and super succubus sizes. Do work your way up first; the tabasco can be quite aggressive.
Don't worry; they're self lubricating! And if you need more for a particularly lively session, you could always use blood in a pinch. I know I do.
Oh, and the tabasco goes great on sandwiches. Just hold it over your favorite trifecta of bread, some dead animal, and some living animal and let her drip!
Just Another Incubus Enjoying A Steamy Paradise,
Rod
]]
(To the Brothers)
(My lords, I bring to you a question of some importance to an upcoming goal. I am aware that the Everfree is, in a sense, alive. My question is this; just how conscious is the forest, scale of 1-10?)
(On an unrelated, but familiar, note. Another rip in space/time showed up today, and this one is semi-stable. I do not mean to be presumptious Lord Pyrus, but since your throne is...out of reach, I've sent you a temp. It's forged of Stygian Iron, has blood red velvet cushions[fireproof], a cup holder, and it reclines. For Lord Cryon, I apologize for the mead freezing, though I am glad you still enjoyed it. The chalice I am sending you is enchanted to keep any liquid inside it at a fixed temperature, which can be adjusted with the red and blue jewels on either side of the cup. To top this off, a barrel of my finest wine for you to split.)
(Nomad)
(To the Brothers Malefic,
I am unsure what the mutation rate of the Star normally is, however thirteen mutations in a week [well, six days], seems to me rather rapid. Not that it's per se a bad thing but I'm curious as to whether the Star could "lose control" as it were. That is if a sufficiently potent fuel were added could the Star just start throwing out random mutations and turn our pawn into, well, this, basically.
Archivist)
Through Our scrying into the past, We have come across a promising Evil which escaped a while ago. In the timeline that We are observing. What can you tell Us about he who is named Tirek and his brother. What about the rest of their species?
Greetings My Lords,
Recent, for me, dimmensional dissruptions have closed the rift I found. As such, the gifts sent will most likely by the last from me for some time. I am unsure at this point if our scrying has anything more of note, but we recently observed the unlocking of new powers for Twilight and the now former Element Bearers, as well as the forming of a new castle near Ponyville. My collegues have already brought the issue of Tirek and his brother Scorpan to your attention, so I will refrain from repeatin it.
As for questions, I have two:
1. Lord Cryon, it is hard not to notice that your physical form is that of a young colt. Is this done by your choice, or is it a result of deminished power?
2. If it is the latter, is there a way to restore your strength that we can effect through dear Blank?
Your Servant across the veil,
Nomad