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((The chapter turned out fine, and stop apologising for schedule slip, no-one's paying you and no-one expects you to labour on it if the muse doesn't strike, or if they do they're arse-holes. As for the rest, yeah, I kinda figured that was how it was running, and for the record, I think you're an awesome GM.))
"What do you do?"
Why, you go get breakfast of course! Or, lie in bed and watch Zecora's plot as she makes it. That's good too. What's not good, is you're not actually in your bed at this time. Bucking Illusionist, she'd better apologise for her behaviour yesterday or... well, you'll think of something that causes the appropriate lack evidence.
After breakfast, well, Zecora mentioned she'd try to go into town today, you're clearly in no... shape... to follow her. Ask her to get a trench-coat for you while out. Of course if you get a trench-coat you need a bad-arse hat to go with it. You can't have a trench-coat without a hat.
During that time you can also make sure that The Great and Narcissistic is intimately aware of just how displeased you are with her behaviour. Afterwards start experimenting with you abilities, err, outside the house. We don't want anything more broken. Outside the bedroom window maybe? I'm certain Miss Third Person could use a demonstration out what could happen if she really bucked you off.
Archivist
You're still exhausted, even after sleeping like a rock. Good thing Zecora is apparently making breakfast; maybe she'll give you a little show like last time? It's so sexy when your Zebra works her toned body and you sit there and watch. Doubly so when she's working on something for you, makes you feel big and important! It's not like you're lazy, you just couldn't sleep well yesterday. And one of the reasons why is blue, bitchy, and angling to have you put more stripes on her butt than the butt you already sleep next to. Ugh. Let's hope Trixie is more reasonable this morning, or you really will have to put a muzzle on her. And a leash. And some cuffs, just to make sure. They would look good on her coat. And then watch Zecora teach the Small and Helpless Trixie some "tricks", that'd be fun...
ANYHOW! You still need to work on that anti-Changeling-Zebra mojo. Zecora might be hesitant to tell you much though, despite you deserving her trust. On the other hoof, you can show her that you're smart! Ask her whether there's some possible connection, or if they work similarly and could counter each other, maybe even fight off an attacking Changeling. Superponies need to be prepared! You really do want to learn what you can! If she clams up, well, then you need to bring this up at a later time; instead train your abilities. They really are a blessing, no matter what your Zebra thinks. They got you to meet the most important thing in your life: Zecora.
First, the most important meal of the day, breakfast. Make sure to watch the loveliness that is Zebra plot in motion while she works. Once that is done, it's time for you to train. Every Superpony needs to have a full understanding of his abilities and limits. Once that is done, make sure to put that arrogant showmare FIRMLY in her place. Wait until Zecora heads into town for supplies, then proceed to lay down the law. Ponies like Trixie need a firm hoof to guide them, or else they wind up getting into trouble.
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I agree with Archivist, make sure to talk with Zecora about a trench coat...and hat, the next time she goes into town. As a secondary thought, if Zecora happens to return with a purple maned white unicorn, proceed as follows:
1. Don't stare at her plot
2. Hold still while she measures you
3. Make sure the coat is in pegasus style so the rods can extend without ripping it.
(Rarity seems to own the only clothing store in town, if we start asking for a trench coat, Zecora would probably go to her first. In addition to that, Zecora would try to avoid the fiasco of leading our pawn through Ponyville; she would probably just bring Rarity out to her hut for the measuring and later fitting.)
Nomad
((Cause I feel that I can create comic relief with this))
... Did you really just trip over a rabbit?
Chessmaster
P.S. I haven't slept for a few days, I'll be up and running later. Probably. Maybe. Hopefully.
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Staring at that plot is BAD. BAAAAD. Now little one... make a new friend.
Chessmaster
(P.S. that's the second time I forgot my tag. Damn I really am losing it.
Grow a unicorn horn to achieve that goal drink the blood of the resident unicorn not all but a pint should be enough. Magic is an valuable asset and useful.
It's a nice morning, isn't it? Your beloved zebra is making breakfast, you didn't sleep uncomfortably, no rain, no cold, just you snuggled up to the mare of your dreams. All things taken into consideration, things really have become better ever since you got this "curse", haven't they? In fact, you've become a super-pony since then. Life is looking up.
But that really makes you think, doesn't it? You're stuck in the Everfree Forest, the most dangerous place in Equestria, your body has been changed and mutated extensively, and yet you're still better off than you were in Manehattan. Why is this? Because you were born without a cutie mark? Just think of how they shunned you because you didn't fit into their idea of "order", of how they wouldn't give you any chances. Isn't it true that you were cursed since birth, in all actuality? Cursed to live without a cutie mark, cursed to live as an outcast. But that's different now. Zecora's taken you in, shown common decency and morality. Unlike to Manehattan ponies. Zecora really is incredibly compassionate. Far more compassionate than, say Celestia. Just think about it, my friend! All those years you lived on the streets, starving, cold and sick! And yet at the same time sat this so-called "Benevolent Princess", wearing expensive jewelry, sleeping in huge, comfy beds and eating cake every day! She never helped you! All she did was help herself! You were left to rot while she lived the high life! But Zecora's not like that. Zecora's far better than those tyrants called the princesses. Hell, I bet you could become a far better ruler, especially with Zecora as your sexy, sexy consort. I'd say it's pretty clear that neither the princesses nor their followers have ever done you any favors. Why should you even consider them your rulers? None of them deserve your respect, your loyalty, or your obeisance!
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((Not relevant to moving our Pawn, but I wanted you to know that the image of Rarity being dragged through the Everfree by Zecora, while trying to keep herself and her equipment clean, has me giggling like a school-girl.))
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(He needs to ha e contact with the Mane 6 eventually, this just seems like the quickest way to do it other than the CMC visiting Zecora and THEN bringing their sisters/idol back later.)
(Nomad)
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(It would also make sense to bring Fluttershy. Making it after their spa day would be a decent excuse, with Fluttershy there, sseeing the "experiments" done on him, since hiding the wings from a tailor seems kind of hard, will bring him to Twilight. Before all this happens we need to mask the inevitable magic coming from the source of his power. I see two ways, one: Try to actually hide it, which will avoid all suspicion but mutations can't happen do to suspicion, and if there is magic in the "lesser" races, she will be suspicious regardless. My rating 6.5/10. Two: Claim evil person put a recurring g spell on him linked to his lifeforce. This makes it irremovable and lets him have mutations but Celestia might become involved. My rating: 8/10. It ain't foolproof, but we ain't fools.)
Chessmaster.
P.S. I'm going to start leaving options, possible outcomes and my personal ratings, you all can pick.
P.P.S. it has come to my attention as I was pressing post that I did not explain that I was still putting in a part, just the place where I see it can go two ways at will have my choices. And feel free to add to it. I may know everything, but I forget things. (Joke)
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(Not to mention getting a swanky hat and coat out of it! Plus, Rarity has both a romantic and a dramatic streak; she should be the most likely to eat up a story about him being an adventurer slash bounty pony who doesn't yet want the nearby town to know that he's around while he spends some time alone in the woods with his Zebra marefriend... and tries to train the Greatly Onerous Bitchy into a useful member of society. Even if she feeds on gossip like some sort of rumour vampire, making her swear on her honour not to tell anypony should work for quite a while.)
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((In hindsight, should have phrased that better. I meant the mental image of a
whiningcomplaining Rarity was irrelevant to our scheming. I fully concur that he has to deal with Harmony eventually, and meeting Rare in this context is the lest risky way to start. I would, however, be extremely cautious if Fluttershy shows up. While she wouldn't do anything without good reason, we don't know the end results of a conflict between the Stare and our control.Also, before we start spinning elaborate webs of deceit to conceal the Star, remember that our Pawn still has no idea what's happening to him. The complete truth as he sees it, ie. awoke in Everfree, gifted with strange powers and a tendency to fall into situations in which they're required. Now seeks to understand this strange event supported by the love of a beautiful Zebra, would actually work better at this point in time. Of course if anyone ever does work out what's going on...))
((Archivist))
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((I agree, the Stare would be a major problem. My assumptions of its power lies in the fact that anything and everything that meants Fluttershy automatically knows she is kind, gentle and caring. Take that away in a split second and the resulting shock would be similar to the effects of the Stare. As proved in the situation where she used it on Discord, he was not effected in the slightest. I believe it is only for misbehaving animals.
On your other point, I'm going to relate that to poker. New players are often gifted "beginner's luck." But they don't know how to play yet. They could trade a royal flush for a pair of twos and not know what happened. Besides, its better if he doesn't know. Mind reading spells would be horrible.
At the end of this, I had gotten an idea, granted I don't know how it would work. I will put it out there for others to play with or disprove. If Celly or Luna have to much experience, control and power to be affected (that's the second time I wanted that word but it's different... one of them is spelled wrong) by the Star, Cadence is less experienced, showed by her marriage even though she is immortal, she hasn't lived long enough to feel loss yet, she has almost equal power, fluctuating from weaker to stronger depending on love, and she would have no previous knowledge to counter it. She could be controlled by us. And I mean Us, not our pawn (really should have him rank up after he gets better. Skipping knight though. That would be weird.) With her under our control, we can have her help our pawn. It would be harder since we have none of the benefits that we have now, but I believe having that position to throw the government into chaos, either by political force, or shock and anger at Cadence, will be worth the extra work. Gotta love when extra credit finally pays off.))
The Chessmaster
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((Affected is an emotion expressed "He affected a visage of horror". Effected, to have been influenced by, is what you're after. Honestly, I'd avoid the Princesses, well, most of them. For obvious reasons it may soon become difficult to completely avoid Starbutt, but we should still limit interaction with her as much as possible. As for us controlling Mi Amore, I'm curious as to how you plan to do that?))
((Archivist))
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((Simple, once we achieve contact, such as a hug, (need help on how to meet her, hugs are easy to get ) and immediately, as soon as contact is made, infest her mind and soul with the ability to hear us. I'd go with {}'s for Cadence. But when doing so we have to be even more clever and manipulative. We have to make our pawn more powerful with her while keeping her from suspicion. Or, we could leave her in wait untill that chaos from earlier is needed. Now that we are talking about this like it's possible, why not Discord? I'm going to make a separate comment for the brothers.))
The Chessmaster
(Hello again brothers. I apologize for "calling you stupid" I did, in fact, not intend that in any way shape or form. I was stating how well thought it was to create an object, while still in power I might add, with the ability to use the combined knowledge of one of the most evil, chaotic and manipulative species. With that said I must ask you a question about the extent of the power of the star. For one, if He archives physical contact with a pony with little to no knowledge about you or your power, would we have the ability to influence them as well?)
The Chessmaster
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((An infectious Star of Woe? Hmm, I have some thoughts but will hold off on them until after confirmation from the Brothers that it's possible.))
((Archivist))
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(Chessmaster, while we are addressing the need for trench coat, why not expand on our piece's belief that he is a superpony. Let us have him craft a secret identity/hero persona so we can better disguise him as a force for good while he carries out his work.)
(To the Brothers)
(I second Chessmaster's question. Can the Star, if properly motivated, become infectous? If so, gaining followers will be much easier, and having an Alicorn, even one as young as Cadenza, under our sway would be quite the boon.)
Listen up pony, you have an issue that needs to be addressed. You're a superpony now, what do all the comics you read as a foal have in common about superponies? Thats right, a secret identity and a disguise. The trench coat will be a good start, but no one can know who you are.
Nomad