The love of your life, the pony you loved most in this world, is gone. Through tears and screams your world comes crashing down on top of you as you hold your love. Your worst fear has come true, and what's worse, is you did it to her.
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This is absolutely beautiful. I can't express it in text. Amazing job.
This is one of my new favorite stories, You really did a fantastic job! Thank you for the wonderful experience!
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2965870 Thank you. I am really glad you liked it.
2967091 Thank you Swingobjects. I tried my best to make the story good.
2968136 Remember the Nightmare Door?
2968685 It's a door that King Sombra made. It shows your worst nightmare. In Twilight's case she failed the test. She didn't know what test or how she failed, but that she failed.
hey I taken a copy of this for a review so i'll leave you a link
https://www.facebook.com/pages/Slash-wing-my-little-pony-FIM/339895572794546
hope i can make you happy
ow ow ow ow the feels they hurt soo bad
you deserve a grammy for this. BTW the last part got me
So from what I understand, the biggest complaint is closure. What do you guys think? Should I add one for a separate chapter?
I have changed it to incomplete, so I will add another chapter. Do it this way so people who like the story as is can still enjoy it like that, and for people who want closure, can get that as well.
2971993 Glad you enjoyed it, and thanks for the grammy.
2971926 As long as it doesn't kill you, that's good. Right?
Rainboom punch right to thefeels in the last chapter... dang.
3162041 Really happy you liked it