Twilight's life takes on a different tint when she fails to pass her entrance exam for Celestia's School. As it turns out, there are other ways to serve her princess and country.
Oh, dear, Sunburst. It does look like Trixie comes by her impulsivity honestly, too. (Wasn't he just berating Trixie for casting a spell on Twilight without telling her what it did?)
“Twilight sleeps like a box of rocks. She wouldn’t hear Trixie if Trixie let off her entire trunk of fireworks right beside her head.”
I have good news and bad news, Trixie. The good news is you're right, Twilight can't hear you! The bad news....
So excited this story is updating again! That scene with the rings is one of my favorite OP Twilight fic moments, and I really haven't been able to predict where the plot is going to go. Y'know, if all else fails, I guess Twilight could just sock Nightmare Moon in the face. She wouldn't see that coming.
Imagine their surprise when they see Twilight absolutely DRENCHED in demon blood, right next to an exploded demon corpse. Will probably make it fairly clear she's not exactly happy about being there, to say the least.
This story seems to jump themes every 4-5 chapters. Like you to 3-4 different stories and cut them up and pasted them together. It's not a very fun read. we have the original story about Twilight joining the military. Then we have some weird political story about ponies in power manipulating Twilight. Then we have some sort of attempted romance between Twilight and Trixie with no romance tag. Now we have Twilight survival in Tartaras story. Just one or two of those themes would've been good. Throw them all together and its just a mess.
11188495 I suppose not at this point. Please dont have the little shit imp be able to somehow summon himself and twilight back to the mortal planes. You cant summon yourself. Only someone outside could potentially summon twilight out of tartaras. Which is still a bit silly but more believable.
11189123 Doh! I’m getting my AU horsefic confused! Thanks But that one’s not it. :(! Edit yes it is!!! I’d lost it! Thank you!
when you’re reading empting different stories that have intermittent update schedules it makes it tough to remember what’s going on and keep it all straight.
"The mare knew that look in his eyes well enough to be stubborn for no reason." "The mare knew that look in his eyes well enough to not be stubborn for no reason."?
Well, the developments here continue to be interesting. :D Thanks for writing!
A kind of good witchcraft.
Is Sunburst going to project Trixie down into the Abyss? That would be interesting...
Oh, dear, Sunburst. It does look like Trixie comes by her impulsivity honestly, too. (Wasn't he just berating Trixie for casting a spell on Twilight without telling her what it did?)
I have good news and bad news, Trixie. The good news is you're right, Twilight can't hear you! The bad news....
So excited this story is updating again! That scene with the rings is one of my favorite OP Twilight fic moments, and I really haven't been able to predict where the plot is going to go. Y'know, if all else fails, I guess Twilight could just sock Nightmare Moon in the face. She wouldn't see that coming.
Imagine their surprise when they see Twilight absolutely DRENCHED in demon blood, right next to an exploded demon corpse. Will probably make it fairly clear she's not exactly happy about being there, to say the least.
Please, continue your witchcraft.
This story seems to jump themes every 4-5 chapters. Like you to 3-4 different stories and cut them up and pasted them together. It's not a very fun read. we have the original story about Twilight joining the military. Then we have some weird political story about ponies in power manipulating Twilight. Then we have some sort of attempted romance between Twilight and Trixie with no romance tag. Now we have Twilight survival in Tartaras story. Just one or two of those themes would've been good. Throw them all together and its just a mess.
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Is it really needing a romance tag if it's only mentioned in passing and it's pretty much one-sided? 🤷
It's alive!!! I shall eat the chapters up like cheese!!!
Mhhhhh cheeese
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I suppose not at this point. Please dont have the little shit imp be able to somehow summon himself and twilight back to the mortal planes. You cant summon yourself. Only someone outside could potentially summon twilight out of tartaras. Which is still a bit silly but more believable.
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Oh, that quasit has well and truly bitten off more than he can chew.
No, go on, tell Sol Shard. I want to see them rationalize their way out of this.
When do we get to see Rarity and Shining in Pony Nam?
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Wrong story, you're looking for Adventures in Magic (IIRC).
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Doh! I’m getting my AU horsefic confused! Thanks But that one’s not it. :(! Edit yes it is!!! I’d lost it! Thank you!
when you’re reading empting different stories that have intermittent update schedules it makes it tough to remember what’s going on and keep it all straight.
Alright, you shilled it, I read it, and I like it. Please continue.
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I always love a well written badass AU Twilight and this story delivers.
"The mare knew that look in his eyes well enough to be stubborn for no reason."
"The mare knew that look in his eyes well enough to not be stubborn for no reason."?
Well, the developments here continue to be interesting. :D
Thanks for writing!