Twilight's life takes on a different tint when she fails to pass her entrance exam for Celestia's School. As it turns out, there are other ways to serve her princess and country.
twily allow me to present your bad ass card the holder of this card is entitled to kick ass and chew bubble gum (please note you are permitted to still kick ass in the event you find your self lacking gum to chew)
Damn, this Guard Twilight is getting more and more badass. It reminds me of the transition of Twilight to badass in the ‘Twilight of the Royal Guard’ series.
10298907 The old Hulk, his pants always held together. The new Hulk, no. They don't show his hoo-hah, but they CAN show that he's naked. Anyway, he goes into a restaurant & pulls a hunk of money from.... somewhere. "Hulk has money. Hulk want pancakes." "Where....?' "Don't ask. Just have the kitchen make pancakes" "No shoes, no shirt, no service." "ARE YOU INSANE?! Is THAT your problem?"
10298937 Love the false hydra. As soon as you first mentioned it I had my suspicions but this confirms it. Spooooky.
Also is it possible that this story was also possibly inspired by black clover? What with twily not really having magic, and instead just using brute telekinetic strength and gaining a massive fuck off black and red sword?
(I didn't do error spotting this time, though, since it looked like that for at least the previous two chapters wasn't implemented. Not complaining, just letting you know; it did save me time during reading this one, at least.)
Cough, LUS with the necromancer, but names are hard so fair do. Twilight must have eaten the book. Clearly she must have hidden it or else they would be up in arms reprimanding her for causing damages to the team. Actually it just fused into her stomach since it's evil like that. And I am waiting until she raises a skeleton army by accident.
Hmm, with the unnamed necromancer out and about for Twilight's head, I can see the necromancer being the type to gloat. Probably laugh about the dampener on her horn with her magic useless and then she chucks something heavy at it.
10307523 The necromancer has purple magic, clearly no other pony can have anything purple: skin, fur, magic or otherwise, and they don't seem to like to share since they only have undead minions. This is my best deduction for the side target they have, what else does the necromancer want to do in Las Pegasus? -- couldn't tell ya. But it definitely does not like sharing purple; could be wrong, but I don't think so. But really, the necromancer seemed to have a personal grudge, I wouldn't put it past it to want to get revenge personally.
bad ass runesteel blade check
book of necromantic combat magic check
several years of military training check
military commendation check
wicked looking scars check check and double check
twily allow me to present your bad ass card the holder of this card is entitled to kick ass and chew bubble gum
(please note you are permitted to still kick ass in the event you find your self lacking gum to chew)
Where did Twilight hide the spell book? Docs should have found it if Sunburst didn’t.
Damn, this Guard Twilight is getting more and more badass. It reminds me of the transition of Twilight to badass in the ‘Twilight of the Royal Guard’ series.
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I wonder. >.>
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The old Hulk, his pants always held together. The new Hulk, no. They don't show his hoo-hah, but they CAN show that he's naked. Anyway, he goes into a restaurant & pulls a hunk of money from.... somewhere.
"Hulk has money. Hulk want pancakes."
"Where....?'
"Don't ask. Just have the kitchen make pancakes"
"No shoes, no shirt, no service."
"ARE YOU INSANE?! Is THAT your problem?"
And that's how Tempest Sparkle was born...
Every guard needs a good sword, it'll serve her well.
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Love the false hydra. As soon as you first mentioned it I had my suspicions but this confirms it. Spooooky.
Also is it possible that this story was also possibly inspired by black clover? What with twily not really having magic, and instead just using brute telekinetic strength and gaining a massive fuck off black and red sword?
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That's a manga, right? I've seen it in passing, but not an inspiration.
I don't think there can be a Twilight that's "bad" at magic. This is just a Twilight that's behind the curve.
And yeah, False Hydras are awesome.
You should ask Navanastra, he does great drawings.
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Really solid story so far, your doing great with the pacing.
I forgot I was waiting for this to continue. Loving it all so far and looking forward to more.
Loving the story so far, it was a nice addition to hook Twilight up with some decorations too, can’t wait for more!
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Same
Are you AUing Las Pegasus? In canon it's a cloud city but it doesn't seem to be one here.
There seems to be a word missing after 'scream', maybe 'when' or possibly 'as'?
Glad to hear that there isn't anything particularly dark in that book Twilight has.
Still enjoying the story; thanks for writing. :)
(I didn't do error spotting this time, though, since it looked like that for at least the previous two chapters wasn't implemented. Not complaining, just letting you know; it did save me time during reading this one, at least.)
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Cough, LUS with the necromancer, but names are hard so fair do.
Twilight must have eaten the book. Clearly she must have hidden it or else they would be up in arms reprimanding her for causing damages to the team. Actually it just fused into her stomach since it's evil like that. And I am waiting until she raises a skeleton army by accident.
Hmm, with the unnamed necromancer out and about for Twilight's head, I can see the necromancer being the type to gloat. Probably laugh about the dampener on her horn with her magic useless and then she chucks something heavy at it.
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Brave of you to think they're after Twilight. 8)
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The necromancer has purple magic, clearly no other pony can have anything purple: skin, fur, magic or otherwise, and they don't seem to like to share since they only have undead minions. This is my best deduction for the side target they have, what else does the necromancer want to do in Las Pegasus? -- couldn't tell ya. But it definitely does not like sharing purple; could be wrong, but I don't think so.
But really, the necromancer seemed to have a personal grudge, I wouldn't put it past it to want to get revenge personally.
I'm satisfied with what I've read and it was totally worth the wait!! I can't wait for the next chapter.
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Purple is more the color of dark magic itself. I'm sure the Necromancer's natural magical color is something else.
Anyone else want to know what has happened to Twilight's neck?
sorry had to do it