Twilight's life takes on a different tint when she fails to pass her entrance exam for Celestia's School. As it turns out, there are other ways to serve her princess and country.
Oh man, I only found this because you also wrote "Yesterday Is Today", which I just read—and only after finishing this do I notice that it's actually recent! That's ... fortuitous, I guess.
Asking Twilight to reconsider something she's been working towards for years at the very last minute? That's a Grade-A jerk move from both of them, especially since they didn't see past their good intentions.
"Can you fly?" Yes, Shining she can fly. There are spells to allow flight and even spells to give wings... She is amagic user, she cab do everything...
Yay! Looks good so far.
Nice to see this update! Can't wait for more. Liked the alternative characterization you have going.
Yay, a new chapter at last!
"You two do remember that Twilight has leaves tomorrow, yes?"
Something seem to be wrong with this sentence.
"staring at tall class filled"
"staring at a tall glass filled", I assume you meant
And it's over. I look forward to the next one! :D
Twi's really hung up on this Royal Guard stuff, huh. Good for her, she knows what she wants and by god, she's going to get it!
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Yeah, I tend to overlook prereading considering my haphazard update schedule. Thanks for catching all of those.
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You too!
A few more from this chapter, edit - most are now fixed but some might need 2nd look
a tall glass
barreled out of
has arranged you a job
(optionaly) waiting for me
Oh man, I only found this because you also wrote "Yesterday Is Today", which I just read—and only after finishing this do I notice that it's actually recent! That's ... fortuitous, I guess.
Is this dead? cuz i want to read it but if it's dead i might not.
5352683 Well, it's updated now!
Asking Twilight to reconsider something she's been working towards for years at the very last minute? That's a Grade-A jerk move from both of them, especially since they didn't see past their good intentions.
Intriguing~ I am liking this so far, its an awesome take on this universe, nice work.
and here we have it folks, zealotry.
"Can you fly?"
Yes, Shining she can fly. There are spells to allow flight and even spells to give wings...
She is amagic user, she cab do everything...
This is still a great story tho. And the updates gave me a reason to reread.
sorry it seems you missed one name change
love the story
Watch her get sent to equestrias fort polk.
Missed one.
Great story so far, wish I'd found it earlier.