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The Story of Bluecloud

The story and life struggles of Bluecloud as he goes through life to find his true purpose in life. As he takes this journey, he experiences many happy times along with enough hardships. Will he find his purpose in life? Only the test of time will tell.

Special thanks to Drakus Fett, my Editor.

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DrakusFett

DrakusFett #1 · Jul 26th, 2013 · 1 · ·

You better start writing chapter II. Now so I can read it early :P

Bluecloud

Bluecloud #2 · Jul 26th, 2013 · · ·

>>DrakusFett

Of course, Drakus.

Bateman66

Bateman66 #3 · Jul 26th, 2013 · · ·

I liked the story, but something did bother me a tad. The chapter itself is pretty long and maybe you should think about dividing it into multiple smaller chapters. It's a bit difficult to read something like this in a single sitting, know what I mean?

Bluecloud