It was a completely normal day when everything went to shit.
Twilight Sparkle awoke from her beauty sleep, took out the curlers Rarity suggested she use, used a hair straightener to fix the damage the curlers did. Spike was still asleep, so Twilight very quietly crept to the kitchen to make herself breakfast.
She poured herself a bowl of oats, enjoyed it thoroughly, and set about reading the book she had left out last night, The Mating Habits of Dragons. She was in the middle of a particularly saucy part when she heard a cough come from outside.
Heading over, she cautiously opened the door, and had to suppress a scream. Sitting on her front porch, eyes slightly glazed over, was King Sombra.
“Oh, finally!” he said, perking out when he saw Twilight quaking in fear. “I thought you’d never show up!” Twilight tried to scamper away, but Sombra used his superior dark magic to levitate her back in place.
“Why can’t I teleport away?” Twilight asked frantically, flaining around in the aura of dark magic, her own magic powerless.
“My magic overpowers yours! Granted, it wasn’t easy for me to do so, you’re quite powerful. No need to escape though...” he said in his growling, low voice. “I just want to talk...”
“What could you possibly say to redeem yourself?” Twilight spat at him, turning around so she could look at Sombra’s smug face.
“Oh, I’m not trying to redeem myself. I just wanted to tell you that I’m going to take over Equestria and destroy the Elements of Harmony so nopony can stop me!”
Twilight Sparkle gave him a confused look. “Wait, it was the crystal heart that stopped you last time, not the Elements of Harmony!”
Sombra rolled his eyes. “Yes, but I’m taking precautions. I’ve got an amulet to guard against the stupid crystals. I’ve also enrolled in a rehabilitation center to overcome my crystal addiction,” Sombra explained. “I already killed your other five friends, so now I’m here to finish the job!”
Twilight took a moment to register this before her eyes began to fill with tears. “Y-you... KILLED them?”
Sombra nodded, a cruel smile gracing his features. “What did you expect? You guys blew me up! It was a pain in the ass to reform back together. But, my horn lived on, so I slowly re-solidified. Now, I’ve just got to kill you and finish the job...”
Twilight sniffled, everything moving too fast for her to feel the full pain. All five friends, gone... there was hollow, buzzing sound in her head, and her body felt completely numb. “E-even if you kill me, the Elements can be carried on by some other ponies!”
Sombra’s smile became wider and crueler at these words. “Ah yes, but I will also destroy the Elements of Harmony themselves! I’ve studied dark magic long enough to destroy all manner of magical artifacts!”
“They’re all the way back in Canterlot, guarded by the royal guard and the Princesses! It’s hopeless!”
Sombra smiled. “You really think I believe that? I know where you stupid ponies really hid the Elements of Harmony...”
Twilight’s eyes widened in fear.
“You’ll never get away with—” she started to say, but was cut off when Sombra used his magic to snap her neck. He dropped the body of the dead unicorn on the ground, and walked over to the the bookcase.
“Yes, I know where you hid the Elements of Harmony... where no one would ever dare to look!” He perused the shelves until reaching the “A” section, and levitated out a copy of Atlas Shrugged. Sure enough, when he opened it, the book was hollow and contained the Elements of Harmony.
After acquiring the Elements of Harmony, Sombra took to the streets and began announcing his new title as the King of Equestria. His minions, wispy pony-shaped creatures made of shadows that were creatively named “Shadowlings” went about hanging banners and passing out pamphlets about Sombre’s new reign.
Vinyl Scratch had been playing a gig in Ponyville the night before, when she got completely fucked up on pills. After tripping balls and smashing her DJ equipment, she woke up seven to ten hours later in an alleyway behind Ponyville’s only night/strip club, “The Plot Hole”.
“Dammit, what happened...” Vinyl rubbed her pounding head, then looked over at her DJ equipment, which had a Vinyl-Scratch-shaped indent in it. Her glasses lay next to it, one of the lenses shattered.
“Oh shit!” Vinyl Scratch caressed her damaged turntables. “I guess I should have listened when that weird dude in glasses told me about taking which color of pills.”
After giving her equipment a 21 wub salute with her pocket electronica-generator, Vinyl Scratch left the alleyway to find out when the next train to Canterlot was leaving. She needed to buy new turntables with some of her roommate Octavia’s money.
However, when she walked onto the streets of Ponyville, she found that the walls had been plastered with propaganda posters, most of which showed pictures of a dark colored unicorn wearing a thong and displaying his flanks to the world with the words “Serve the sexy shadow!” inscribed on the top. Another look around also revealed weird shadow ponies wandering around putting these posters up, and in the center of town was a large bonfire with six pony corpses burning in the center of it.
“Did the pills not wear off yet or something? Am I having that weird ‘sexy dictator’ dream again?” Vinyl Scratch wondered aloud.
Wandering out into the town square, the DJ saw many grieving ponies all staring mournfully at the bonfire. She took a good look inside, and recognized the cutie marks of the ones burning inside.
“Wait... those are the ponies who always end up saving Equestria!” Vinyl’s eyes widened. “But with them dead... who will solve our problems for us?” Vinyl fell to the ground, staring into the merrily crackling fire that was incinerating the former heroes of Equestria. Small droplets of rain began to fall upon Ponyville, because even a hostile takeover was not an excuse for the pegasi to neglect their jobs.
“WHO WILL SAVE US‽” she shouted up into the sky. As if the pegasi had heard her, the clouds cleared right above the square, and a beam of light shone over the town square. However, what descended was not a group of pegasi, or even one pegasi; instead it was two upright beings that were covered in far too much light and chrome for anypony below to get a good look at what they truly were. Their arrival was accompanied by sick electronic beats that Vinyl Scratch recognized. Could it be...?
They touched down on the ground right before Vinyl Scratch, and the light died down. Everypony could now get a proper look at the beings that had touched down. They stood upright, like Diamond Dogs and dragon whelps, but they were thinner and considerably less hairy. Not that anypony could tell that, they were covered in white suits from the neck down. The due wore helmets: the one of the left wore a helmet that was mostly chrome, with an eye vizor that stuck out a few inches from the rest of the hemet; the one on the right wore a gold helmet with a vizor that covered the entirety of its face.
The one of the left began to speak. It was fuzzy and glitchy, a weird babble of electronic words and noises. It lifted a hand up, and began to fiddle with the nobs on the side of its helmet, the pitch changing and odd static sounds filtering in as well. The gold-helmeted one banged its fist on the helmet, and words came out fluidly.
“Ah! Got the damn thing working. Hello, ponies from a children’s cartoon! We’re the French duo Daft Punk, and since we’ve recently been dubbed galactic heroes for our works on our latest album ‘Random Access Memories’, we’re here to save you from certain death!”
Vinyl Scratch fell to the ground, spasming in bliss.
“I came.”
Needs horse cocks.
2867723 you need horse cocks :V
scooby dooby doo da da da da ya ya ya
Needs some Kanye West.
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C'mon, Regidar. If you're not going to make it a diabolical, sinful, incestuous fic, then at least make it Mature.
8.5/10 would clop again, upvote.
No fave for you, though. Not quite.
DAFT PUNK FUCK YEAH!!!!!
I've always love listening to Daft Punk... (Along with Gorrilaz)
Now there's a fic on them...
FUCK YEAH!
You may live for another week.
,,, fucking beautiful.
Another one Regidar... That's it, I'm making you your own folder
Oh you, Regidar, oh you.
There are some things that money can't buy. For everything else, there's Regidar.
Not gonna lie
I didn't know who Daft Punk was until I googled it 5 seconds ago
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The one time he doesn't write about it and someone says he needs to.
~Skeeter The Lurker
REVIEW
Reviewer: Lophane
The following review is as objective as possible but could contain some subjective influences. I'm British by birth, Kiwi by blood, and American by home, take from that what you will.
Once you’ve posted your story in the group A For Effort you’ve accepted to be reviewed. No review is made to humiliate the writer but to make him grow up and enhance his skills.
Name of story: How Daft Punk Saved Equestria
Grammar/Spelling: 9.3/10
I saw one mistake
*duo
100% original
Some wont like you killing the main characters, but it's your story, and you've never, never, let that stand in your way before.
Now only... How many more? You'll be top story poster as well as top commenter before long.
I'm really liking it so far.
Verdict:
Approved
Your story has been approved, it shall be removed from the 'under review' folder and put in the 'main' folder shortly.
Thank you for applying your story for review.
- Lophane
Raises left hoof. Puts it on face.
2867731
We all need horse cocks.
I certainly did came.
This is a work of original genius. So beautiful.
2868045
Punches Theatercritic.
Fuck you this shit's original gold.
So everypony dies and Vinyl gets a fan-gasm... Excellent first chapter!
2868255
Nope.
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You like this and you like it NOW.
2868290
Yep.
This shit's the boss. Regidar knows what he's doin'.
It's like Giorgio said. "You have to free your mind of the concept of harmony."
2868570 quite so! Sombra is following Giorgio's teachings.
2868645 He better put a click on the track.
2868677 It's his final boss move, but don't tell anyone.
2868712 I can only hope he's beaten by loosing himself to dance.
Guys, I'm not sure about this, but I have sources that say that the next chapter MAY be named "Better".
Again, this isn't confirmed, but I have reliable sources.
Speculation is a go.
2868734 pfft
as if
2868745 Damnit.
Alright, back to the drawing board, guys!
I came.
Thank you so much for this. Now I'm just waiting for the second chapter, which I'm guessing will be named "Better."
2869011 Just you wait
WHOA
REGI FINALLY REALISED HOW SUPERIOR DAFT PUNK IS TO THOSE GARAGE ROCK BANDS
2869134 Ah, a Daft Punk fan I see
2869139 Oh sheesh.
I almost said you shouldn't have the human tag on there because Daft Punk are robots. Does that make me transphobic?
2869219 To a point.
Best story on Fimfiction confirmed.
2869134 Garage rock bands were the start of everything! They started the rap b.s., the dubstep crap, Green Day, Nickelback, Cascada, Kelly Clarkson, Britney Spears, even Justin Bieber!
They were the pioneers in modern music! How can you say that Daft Punk is superior?!
i don't usually fave fics were the mane six dies in the first chapter... but daft punk
2869493 Whoa, I realise my mistake. Pardon me, I was not thinking clearly.
I choked and died from laughter right there.
2869497 You're not superior if you're not better in every way. Since Daft Punk started nothing, but garage bands did, then Daft Punk isn't superior to them. They would just be, in someone's opinion, better in some or many ways, but not all.
2869720 No, you are superior if sum of every ways is bigger.
Too much alcohol mate
2869868 Exactly! You just said it, quoting me! Since Daft Punk started nothing, but the original garage bands did, they are, therefore, inferior!
I'm not trying to hate on Daft Punk, I'm just stating the obvious, that's all.
2869956 Wait, you are not kidding? Daft Punk are like fathers to french house.
Anyway, that is not relevant. You do not judge musicians by "how much did they influence". Most of my favourite artists are relatively not-known. But are amazing.
2869971 Good point. Ruppina didn't influence anyone, but she is one of my favorite musicians of all time.
When you say 'Fathers to french house', please don't tell me you mean 'house step'? Because that isn't music....
2869992 What the fuck is house step
Also, everything can be music, I am not in place to judge. Although "step" usually does not mean anything good.
2870002 Most people shorten house step into just house. I thought that's what you meant.
In that case, I have no idea what french house, but is it any good?
P.S. By dictionary standards, house step and dub step actually ARE NOT music. That's why I said that.
Dafuq did I just read?