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RashallFiremane

RashallFiremane #1 · Feb 19th, 2012 · · ·

Being a Warhammer 40k/Fantasy reader I must say this short satisfied my fascination of gore and killing. In the end however it was short and to the point all that I could ever ask for.

Pleaseworkforonce

Pleaseworkforonce #2 · Apr 30th, 2012 · · ·

welp this only farther proves my point twilight is the best pony she sacrificed her self the pain relief (showing pain is shown to reduce how much you feel) of screaming from the most painful semi natural death there is so fluttershy would have the morale to continue on
but it is terrible she had to die to farther prove it granted im glad RB used her brain and saved fluttershy so it wasn't in vain
and it was very well written and great plot (do i smell a sequel and prequel?)

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