When Applejack reveals to Fluttershy that she plans to ask Rainbow Dash, Fluttershy's old marefriend from years past, out on a date, Fluttershy gets jealous and seeks to keep the blue pegasus for herself. Will love conquer all in the end? Will friendships be strengthened? Will they be broken?
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Warning, this literary work contains Appledash. If you are not here for the Applejack x Rainbow Dash flash fanfiction even, leave now while you still have the chance! This is my first fic, therefor it is probably really bad. The story is most definately worse than the description. I have almost no experience in creative writing to begin with and writing isn't even my passion. Close your browser window, turn off your computer, bash it with a hammer until it is a steaming pile of slag, bury the contents in a forty foot deep hole and move out of the country!
Unless, of course, you came for Appledash in which case may Princess Celestia have mercy on thee. M̴̱ͅụ̴͓a̴̳̫ ̶̤͔h̴̭̗a̵̗͚ ̶̠̣h̶̪̰a̶̻̫ ̷͚̘h̴̥̩a̸̯̜ ̸͍̥h̷̬̲a̸̪͍ ̵͎͇h̸̹̠a̴̡̤!̸̢̲
But seriously, feel free to let me know what you think in the comments.
I like it.
“You silly pony,”
I see what you did there...
Hint.. hint...
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Did the warning should not come first than the fic?
I like it.!
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Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed!
As for where the warning belongs, I put it in the author's notes because I think that is an appropriate place to put it. I apologize for being new here, but is there a way to set the author's notes to appear before the fic?
2807437 I been asking my self the same thing
2807437 Nope. You have to put it in the description. Sorry bud.
You should continue this. We want to know where:This Golden Romance will take them, and what Fluttershy has planned.
I personally think you should do a more drawn out version of this story
(the content could literally cover 3-5 chapters at least)
(also, love triangles are the best)
also
so much yes
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Thanks for the feedback guys, it's good to know that someone likes my fic. As for expanding and continuing the story, I think that that would be a great thing to do at some point. I just want to let you know that while I would very much like to continue writing, this is probably something which is not going to happen soon as I will not have much time to write for a while. But if I end up with inspiration for where I want to take the story and enough time, I will be sure to work on this.