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Little edit you have to make here :
Other than that, I liked this chapter. It did address the question I had about Luna & Twi marrying and, once again, was well done. The part regarding Twi's counterpart having a daughter made my jaw drop momentarily (Wouldn't be the first time you made it drop with this story and the prequel) . Look forward to the next one.
OMG example of healthy relationships. So rare in modern MLP fandom.
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I pity their local sheets-maker
Now I wonder if Twi and Luna might have kids...
Nice, relaxed chapter after all he drama fro the last few... I like it!
Yes! More updates!
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Nice chapter. I'm a bit sad that Twilight didn't interact with her otherself.
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I don't, they're probably making a killing off of them as clients. Probably make were smart enough to make them in bulk so that they could make bits over hooves every few days.
This might need an edit.
Wonderful chapter, so glad its being updated, really hope that the 'child issue' is addressed. The two of them actually having a child might have too much of an impact on the story, but a little exposition/passing remark on the difficulties of alicon reproduction would be nice in a later chapter. Or, I dunno, you could throw in an adoption in the last chapter, tie it together nicely. These are just little suggestions from a fan, feel free to disregard them if you dislike them, keep up the good work.
I just had a weird idea for a random bonus/side chapter/oneshot crossover:
Twilight goes through the mirror, and ends up in the Moonstone universe. Much jealousy ensues.
With as many times as Twilight goes through the mirror and finds herself in a relationship with a pony other than Luna, I'd like to see how she reacts to seeing another Luna having fun with somepony who isn't her. Especially the sort of fun Luna gets up to in Moonstone
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Such a diabolical cross-over may rip the fabric of space-time, not to add more stuff to my pre-read queue for Moonstone.
It also intrigues me to no-end.
For some reason it doesn't read like you enjoyed writing this chapter.
Is my assumption erroneous in nature?
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I struggled near the end, but not enjoying writing is kind of par for the course these days. Depression is a mean cunt.
one commonly made error that I noticed in the time line, a ponies gestation period (time of pregnancy) is eleven months and you have Twilight's at 9
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Ponies also reach sexual maturity in a few months after being born irl. It's a give and take between fact and fiction.
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Luna needs to find a way to give Twilight a child.