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Modesty saved her native world. Good morals.
Great chapter, but this feels like it should probably end here already. Twilight is clearly devastated by what she witnessed and did, and even afraid of that mirror at this point. Why the hell would she ever decide to go back through it now.
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Who knows, it could be hundreds of years later and she feels an itch to see another world and does so. Of course, she'll be more careful in choosing what she wants to see.
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Because...
VVVV
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This.
Among other reasons. But we'll get around to that next chapter.
A well done chapter. Time seems to pass really quickly in that other world though, as 7 days in the alternate dimension amounted to what seems like only a few hour of dialogue, fighting, and resolution. Unless it took far fewer than 7 days for the portal to actually reappear, it's seriously rushed.
However, I'm left wondering a few things. What is next to see? What did Twilight do to give their world peace? I guess we'll just have to wait and see about that in the next chapter.
So, Twi, what happened on the other side of the mirror?
Well.... i.imgur.com/Zvhzz.png
i.imgur.com/fH5FO.png i.imgur.com/Wtyb9.png
Holy hay fries, what a start! I wonder what it's going to take for Twilight to even go near that mirror again? Then again, her scientific mind won't let her just walk away, I bet.
I do wonder though: Did she leave Celestia all alone in that world, or was Luna just the first to find release at Twi's hoofs?
Holy crap, that hit me in the feels. Also, Twilight wielding a sword made out of pure solar energy? AWESOME!
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>Lavender
The sun and the moon had no power in that world, so she used her own magic.
I hope that she killed the other Celestia too. Really, it was the only thing she could do for them, the only harsh kindness that it fell within her power to grant to them. I wonder what went wrong in their world; did they expect more of Twilight than she could give? Or did that universe's Twilight lack the cause to embrace immortality and, instead chose to follow her friends into the Undying Lands?
Well........ that was worth the wait
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Oh, whoops. Missed that lavender bit. Still, sword of pure light, no matter what color, is still completely badass.
...harsh
Wow.......what a way to start off the journey eh? I was expecting that Equestria to be bleak but nothing my mind thought up came even close . Powerful stuff man, the feels are strong with this chapter.
So, what I'm wondering is what happened to Cadence in the other world? She was never mentioned at all...
OK I'm sold, this is bad ass.
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Please tell me I won't have to wait a month for an update because that would suck.
Hah, sweet.
this is the quality that I have come to not only expect but look forward to form you. Words do no justice to you.
grim dark is a setting i try to avoid like Black Death , or STD's , but this feels ..... oddly satisfying , I'm left with tears in my eyes , vivid images in my mind , a heart overflown with compassion for the charictores .... WHAT HAVE YOU DONE .... WHAT HAVE YOU DONE TO ME ???" You are an amazing storyteller , and need to be recorded in history somewhere , now please excuse me while i find a small hole in the ground to go sulk in , because that story was more potent then listening to the birthday massacre and Marlyn Manson all day with no Smile.DK breaks
Oh the feels!
HOLY...
FUCKING...
HELL!!!!!!!
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Daaaaayum.
Good stuff.
Man, that inspired me to get back to writing. Got me some fresh Luna to write to mindbleach that!
Jeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesus christ! Man, that shit is CRAZY!
I like, must have more
Did... Did she just kill both Luna and Celestia? Merciful, I must admit but... that must have ruined her. Jeez. o.o
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She did euthanize them.
Although I don't get how her being a god would create an imbalance. Since there are many different meanings for the prophesy.
If she became a deity she would have lived with the sun and moon. As in the Sun and Moon Deities as a being of pure energy. Her living with the sun and moon as an Alicorn was only one possible meaning.
But ignoring that. This was an interesting chapter to say the least. Although if she was a Goddess of Magic, why didn't they use their magic to fix the imbalance? Or at the least start life anew after the fall out of the cataclysm? Even as a Goddess of all magic in the multiverse I don't think she'd take away magic, nor stand by as the world falls to ashes and the universe dies around her.
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Unless that was the idea and that the sun and moon felt it was time to to start anew with the newly minted player.
Oh my god.. That was... My mind is on the ground, it has been blown out of my head and shot out the building after that chapter. Keep updating please.
Commence read.
Just feeling a little off here.
I dont see how the prophecy was violated by twilight becoming a god, nor do I see how a vastly powerful and omniscient being could fail to protect Equestria.if I recall correctly, at the end of Archmage, the Day and Night even told twilight that as a god she would have thw power to protect Equesteia, but that is just going from memory, and it has been a while.
5905905 She became a god and the prophesy was left unfulfilled because someone has the power to do something doesn't mean they will. All it would take is Twilight becoming distracted losing track of time for the simplest explanation
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Yeah, taking in all the knowledge of the cosmos as they promised her would take quite a bit of time. That and everyone knows how obsessive Twilight is about learning.
Although I wonder what she'd do when she learned not only what she had wrought, but the loss of her love and second mother.