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Nice wrap up Loyal. It got a bit jumbled up there for a moment but then it all came back together. I do enjoy the 'Yes I am fucking spike' bits as colorful humor to Celestia.
I lost it here, Brilliant.
I also love the way Twilight and Celestia communicate with each other, Instead of Student to Princess where Twilight is careful with what she says or does around Celestia. Its now Princess to Princess. Twilight tore down all the walls around her regarding the behaviour towards Celestia. The quote above shows this brilliantly.
All in all, Good work Loyal
As awesome as always. Celestia was hella funny there... But now I'm impossibly curious about her and Spike/Cronos' relationship. I would love to see more of them, if Cronos managed to make Celestia glow as a mare... damn that must be one hell of a special thing. Also I might want to see their bedroom encounters... I mean seriously not even a mountain could wake him after that?
I can't say I'm happy with how the story is going, but I'm just a cynical bastard. It all seems too happy, and the "romance" is a dry, token attempt at best. Guessing we'll just have to wait and see how this pans out.
Good story but god do I hate this Prophecy stuff, it smells of an all powerful being making up what it believes should be done. And if you don't follow its 'prophecy'-coughorderscough- it blows you and -if you really unlucky- everyone else to hell and back like it throwing the mother of all temper tantrums. Smells Greek to me...
But other than that I got no issues with the story.
Pfft... Bwahahah!
God, that was hilarious!
I thought that was funny until I read the next part.
I died laughing.
Here's the proof:
i.imgur.com/r4HvT79.png
My ghost is typing this.
Aaah, so good to see this story return, it's one of my top ten along with the original Archmage. Good chapter, hope to see more soon
You're teh best Loyal!
I knew you didn't abandon us! I always kept up hope! Can't wait for next chapter!
*of
Is the lack of 'a' before 'prophecy' intentional?
Ah. So that's how she knows everything gets f****d when Twilight ascends. She just doesn't know how bad? I mean both Celestia and Luna before the fallout thought they could rebuild, Tia and Luna of the first horrible world tried making things right (before getting killed), so ... is there any medium where things get rebuilt like the sister's thought they could do?