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Awesome chapter!
So...fucking...awesome
Well that was grand, the untold amounts of shipping taking place was quite interesting... and Twilight picking up one of her counterparts quirks is a nice aftereffect. Now, I would be proposing one of the next visits to be in a world that is on par with the show... but thats just boring. I would like to see either a space faring pony race, or a world close to ours; one seeped in technology, where magic is a myth... Damn this setup it has the potential to make me drink and use lots of substances that end with 'phetamine' or 'pony'
Great job as always Loyal, enjoyed the random pairings you made and the little quirk with Quill. I am curious if Twilight is gonna 'fix' every world or leave some to their own devices. (I know she said she wanted to help everyone but still curious how it works out)
Keep up the good work!
To quote RD: So...Awesome!
But where was spike in all that?
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Let's do a bit of a timeline here:
Archmage (The original story) took place seven years after the events of Season 3. (Excluding the finale', of course.) At one point near the end of this particular chapter, Rarity mentions that it had been ANOTHER seven years since Twilight had been offered the position of Archmage. Now, at the beginning of Archmage, Twilight curses her lack of an assistant, meaning Spike had left sometime during the seven-year gap between Season 3 and the beginning of Archmage. In this world, an additional seven years had passed, meaning anywhere from fourteen years to seven had passed. Dragons have a century-long nap to worry about somewhere along their lives, and Spike left for his well before Archmage started.
In short,
Our favorite little purple dragon is asleep during this chapter.
Oh, but I have something planned for Spike. Trust me, the next chapter will kick off the first 'story' in Beyond the Crystal Mirror.
What is it with you and Rarity, Loyal? Every fic you written her in you put her through hell. I enjoyed this chapter quite a bit
>.>
Are you still taking requests for this fic?
I hesitated with reading this for a long time... But finally got around to it. I gotta say, this is really good, even when it is sad. And Twilight finding out that their immortality is a spell was... interesting idea.
So, I couldn't help but notice that there was a minor plot thread in the original Archmage fic that never really got resolved, one about Celestia seeming unhappy because she didn't have what Luna and Twilight had. Is that ever going to be picked up, because it would seem kind of weird if that thread was just dropped entirely...
I still like where you're going with this story, I was just wondering if that's leading up to anything.
well writen , the rainbowPie story side was cute , and i loved the way "base cannon" twilight reacted to "this univers;s" twilight solving her love problums , all in all
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Ah, alternate!Twilight, you clever dog.
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CALLED IT! (sort of...)
Twilight
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The Cakes
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Twilight
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3320256 idea was pretty cool sounding, and it could be in a pt2 / return to ... of this (well pt 2 several chapters later / when ever Luna sends her back to this AU. Which I'm thinking Twi will need with some of the darker stuff), and with Celestia "needing a Seemstress", could have Rares as a lover in this particular AU.
cap.
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