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Very interesting turn you have taken Loyal, are they really gonna try and change these worlds they go to now? I look forward too it if they are and how much damage they cause by doing so. If not well then.... keep on going! so i can figure out what you are up too.
Even the gods should be wary about changing the worlds that are not their own. Sometimes, even small changes are enough to cause catastrophes and if all the ends are not known, how can the means be assessed for their necessity?
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But is change to a world that is worse than theirs, such as the one Twi went to, better than letting the suffereing continue and doing nothing?
oh hey good to see we're heading down the 'crisis on infinite earths' storyline, that definitely wasn't a fustercluck.
Seriously, I get what you're doing, but when you throw in a multiverse and have interaction occur between the worlds, the whole thing ends up being infinitely more confusing.
Oh dear. This looks like it's going to end very badly. An effort to help other worlds tends to take a very bad turn when the balance is thrown off. Can't wait. ^_^
Now I imagine this Equestria becoming a sort of "halfway house for victims of the universes where Twilight screwed everything up." Hundreds of Celestias and Luna running around underfoot. Because hundreds of Pinkie Pies wasn't bad enough, let's do the same thing, except with beings that have huge amounts of power.
I look forward to seeing what sort of terrible results ensue. While hoping that they're not too terrible.
oh my god , honestly i dont like the well morbid theme this has , but i understand the use of it as a plot (nopunentended) device , im realy hoping you can get some , commedic releafe going , because all this deep intence drama at the first 2 chapters , its making me have a baked bads ( ) reaction
that said , im enjoying the story as a whole so keep up the good righting
I think there should be a 'not' after "could."
Looking foreword to more
Dude.
This is amazing.
I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! You've once again managed to get me hooked, just like when I read Archmage for the first time. I'm enjoying the darker tones, and I'm very curious as to where this is going. All in all, great read, though there are a couple spots with just a little mistake or two, but that's okay. Other people have already pointed them out Anyway, great story, I'm looking forward to more, whenever you post it.
Simple parody this time:
Daft Punks' Around the World:
"Around the worlds
Around the worlds"
Repeat ad nauseum.
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... Well, that was a... A uh...
Thing.
Welcome back?
It just seemed too perfect!
Then I realized those were the only lyrics...
Holy frak! This story is good. Keep up the good work and I can't wait to see more. I'll be sending more request as I think of them.
Yesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyesyes update!
Gimme moreee
Nicely written. I like how you portray Twilight, it seems accurate for her to consider all the possible situations.
Cap.
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