i cant escape this hell so many times ive tried but im still caged inside somebody get me through this nightmare I CANT CONTROL MYSELF! someone i you can see the darkest side of me no one will ever change this animal i have become now please believe! its not he real me! somebody help me tame this animal i have become! ————-————— i feel it deep with in its just beneath the skin i must confess that i feel like a monster!
Help me help me help me help me stop me help me help me help me kill me help me help me help me end this end me end me forever help me help me help me stop the pain help me stop the suffering help me help me help me I never wanted this help me help me help
She just needs to get this out of her system. After a couple more Changeling Queen loop runs, she'll be cool again, I swear!
So....did Twi's subconscious summon the comfort dopplegangers or was that The Swarm sort of collectively going "Uh-oh, The Queen is cracking up, we'd better tell her what she wants to hear"?
"Fluttershy" and "Mom"s words suggest the latter imho Self-preservation instinct to keep The Queen's head in one piece.
Dear Princess Celestia, Help me help me help me help me stop me help me help me help me kill me help me help me help me end this end me end me forever help me help me help me stop the pain help me stop the suffering help me help me help me I never wanted this help me help me help I’m so sorry, Twilight Sparkle
Damn. Lot of things been hitting me hard in this story, but I think that friendship report broke me. Worse than the novel in The Shining. Skipping work this morning to finish it off.
3984919 I think both. They sense how desparately she wants to apologize and stop being a monster, and they run with it. I wouldn't be surprised if she was subconciously sending commands to support her decisions and justify her actions, but they seem to be improvising.
At least Luna did not have to suffer for too long, though no length of time is short enough. And poor Twilight. She still has a conscience, crying out for help.
I can't believe I haven't finished translating this! Oh, well. It's almost done.
I mean, no kingdom is perfect, really. I still have plenty to be be proud of. I wish my parents could be here to see it, but of course they’re gone now. At least I wiped out the ponies that did that to them, I haven’t seen any evidence of the rebellion for weeks. They’re all dead too. All dead.
Second sentece. There are two 'be', one after the other.
Help me help me help me help me stop me help me help me help me kill me help me help me help me end this end me end me forever help me help me help me stop the pain help me stop the suffering help me help me help me I never wanted this help me help me help
I’m so sorry, Twilight Sparkle
Oh my god, that just sent a chill down my back. Geez, that is fucked up
Luna’s been distant lately, ever since somepony broke into our bedroom and tried to kill her. I suppose that isn’t entirely surprising, and I hate myself for having put her in danger even though I keep telling myself it wasn’t really my fault. Anypony who would do such a thing must be just the worst sort of monster, deserving of nothing but a slow, torturous, agonizing death as I slowly flay them alive. Still, she needs something that will give her hope again, and relight that wonderful spark I first fell in love with.
You know, at this point I realy don't feel disgust to twillight, only pity for her and Luna.
Then she snaps her head back as a tentacle rushes into the wall of the jar and sticks there. Pressing up against the glass we have a clearer view of its underside, covered in pale suckers, and within each little circle a quintet of tiny claws scrape against the glass looking for purchase to grip. Each contraction leaves little grooves and scratches visible in its wake, but there’s nothing that the claws are able to sink into. Yet. Luna’s eyes go wider and unfocus as she starts to hyperventilate while I return the jar to the table. It’s so cute how they’re already bonding! Soon they’ll be inseparable. She looks up at me, pleading, and though her mouth is moving no words emerge.
I mean, no kingdom is perfect, really. I still have plenty to be be proud of. I wish my parents could be here to see it, but of course they’re gone now. At least I wiped out the ponies that did that to them, I haven’t seen any evidence of the rebellion for weeks. They’re all dead too. All dead.
Double be's be buggin' me. And this chapter...to see how she's falling apart in so many ways.
> "Anypony who would do such a thing must be just the worst sort of monster, deserving of nothing but a slow, torturous, agonizing death as I slowly flay them alive."
She has so many mental disorders that I don't even.... Wha?
Oh god...Luna...Oh Twilight...Millions have wept.
This hurt to read; so sad
I was going to make a Starcraft pun, but the rest of the chapter sickened me too much to feel like it anymore.
Missing a word.
Oh, this hurts to read so much. Just put her out of her misery.
i cant escape this hell
so many times ive tried
but im still caged inside
somebody get me through this nightmare
I CANT CONTROL MYSELF!
someone i you can see
the darkest side of me
no one will ever change this animal i have become
now please believe! its not he real me!
somebody help me tame this animal i have become!
————-—————
i feel it deep with in
its just beneath the skin
i must confess that i
feel like a monster!
Looks like someone accidentally a word.
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AN entire brood, fixed.
This is just fucked up.
I kind of like it. An interesting, if dark, character deconstruction.
Metalocalypse reference?
She just needs to get this out of her system. After a couple more Changeling Queen loop runs, she'll be cool again, I swear!
So....did Twi's subconscious summon the comfort dopplegangers or was that The Swarm sort of collectively going "Uh-oh, The Queen is cracking up, we'd better tell her what she wants to hear"?
"Fluttershy" and "Mom"s words suggest the latter imho Self-preservation instinct to keep The Queen's head in one piece.
Oooooh!
(That letter was awesome and horrifying and awesome.)
You, know? You're a damngood writer of insane characters.
Most of times, Twilight is....'sane'. And I use that word with a lot of liberty.
But then there are those moments when she completely loses her mind, and you've done then very well. Specially since every single one is differente.
Oh
GodCelestia."Why are we in this story Curiosity?" Confusion asked with a face that was probably perplexed but was hard to tell since he wasn't there.
"It would seem Twilight is seeing things again" the creature that never was said to the figment of a demented mind.
Damn. Lot of things been hitting me hard in this story, but I think that friendship report broke me. Worse than the novel in The Shining. Skipping work this morning to finish it off.
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I think both. They sense how desparately she wants to apologize and stop being a monster, and they run with it. I wouldn't be surprised if she was subconciously sending commands to support her decisions and justify her actions, but they seem to be improvising.
At least Luna did not have to suffer for too long, though no length of time is short enough.
And poor Twilight. She still has a conscience, crying out for help.
I can't believe I haven't finished translating this! Oh, well. It's almost done.
Second sentece. There are two 'be', one after the other.
Ugh. Brilliant in its awfulness. 3rd time thru and I have chills.
Oh man that friendship report really freaked me out. You write spooky horror as well as you write cheerful pinkie pie narration.
Oh my god, that just sent a chill down my back. Geez, that is fucked up
You know, at this point I realy don't feel disgust to twillight, only pity for her and Luna.
I take my words back. I'm disgusted.
Author, you know how to write disgusting things.
Double be's be buggin' me. And this chapter...to see how she's falling apart in so many ways.
I agree.