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The truth behind your Princess.

Luna's side of the story. You'd be surprised by how long the struggle had truly lasted. The night was cast in the "Shadows" for too long. Were Celestia's actions truly just?

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Chapter one: Should I tell her? · 8th Jun 2013 · 1,343 words
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Chapter two: A faction struggle · 4th Jul 2013 · 869 words
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Wheremymaresat

Wheremymaresat #1 · Jun 8th, 2013 · · · Chapter one: Should I tell her? ·

I'm curious to know what you guys think. I mean, I can tell you don't like it. But in detail. I want to know where I needed a boost for this story. Honestly, this was a minimal effort story. I just wanted to share some headcannon. and obviously it isn't finished yet.

Darth Wedgius

Darth Wedgius #2 · Jun 8th, 2013 · 1 · · Chapter one: Should I tell her? ·

I didn't downvote, and I can only guess why some did. It looks like another "Celestia is really a power-crazed pony and Luna the innocent victim" story, which will remind some people of the Lunaverse, though that was an AU story. Your story seems (to me, anyway) setting the canon continuity for this, with it being a secret past, and a lot of readers might not want that done to their idea of Celestia.

Note that I'm only guessing what is motivating other readers.

Wheremymaresat

Wheremymaresat #3 · Jun 8th, 2013 · · · Chapter one: Should I tell her? ·

2694854 Alright, that's my theory too, but truly it's a different kind of story. I do see why people would think this though. The first chapter is a bit anti-Celestia. But it's a story of a much larger tale. I hope that there are some who would give it a chance when it's closer to finished.

Silent Wars of Minds