“Are you two sure you’re okay?” Midnight asked as she followed them into town. It had been a few days since the whole “Sleepy Applejack Incident” during which Rainbow Dash had been sent sailing clear across Ponyville not under her own power, baked goods had become ‘baked bads’, and a stampede of rabbits had infested the town. While none of these things had affected her personally, her new friends had fallen afoul of the baked bads. Poor Derpy had suffered the most. While all the other ponies had taken a few bites and then gotten sick, Derpy had inhaled four whole muffins before realizing how nasty they were. Nurse Redheart had only just released her this morning, and all were thankful that none of the foals had gotten their hooves on them. The only one not affected by the bad muffins had been Midnight. Although, based on Spike’s reaction to them, it was probably a dragon thing.
“Yeah, we’re all good now,” Berry told her.
“Nurse Redheart told me to take it easy and not eat anything too big or too spicy, or that would upset my stomach again,” Derpy told them. They both nodded. By hanging out with these two she’d learned that, while Ponyville was accepting of ponys’ differences, rumors and reputations still got around. Derpy was made out to be clumsier than she really was and Berry Punch was considered a drunk.
“Just because I own a liquor store and drink a lot doesn’t mean I’m a drunk!” she had wailed when the subject was brought up. Midnight had to agree. She was a heavy drinker too but that didn’t mean they were alcoholics. A drink could be anything from simple water to the hardest liquor and everything in between, so when she and Midnight said they drank a lot it simply meant they drank a lot of liquids. “Besides, how can I be a good mother to Pinchy if I’m constantly drunk?”
“Or to Dinky if I’m always breaking things?” The rumors weren’t exactly the best but for the most part they weren’t said with malicious intent, just as run-of-the-mill gossip.
“So, where are we going again?”
“Well, remember how we were supposed to introduce you to Lyra at Sugarcube Corner except they happened?” Derpy held a hoof over her mouth. “Well, Lyra also ate one, so she’s been home sick as well. But since we’re all better now, we figured we could try and introduce you two again.” As the group made its way through town they spotted something out of the ordinary. “Hey, is that a griffon?”
“Yeah, I think it is. Weird, they don’t usually leave the Griffon Kingdom.” Midnight said, trying to remember what she’d read about them. The trio stared at the rare hybrid as it checked out a stall.
“This stuff ain’t fresh dude.” She told the mare managing the cart before walking away. The griffon turned a corner, and the trio began walking again.
“Well that was interesting.” Berry and Derpy nodded. They rounded a corner of their own and the earth pony and pegasus waved at a table set up next to a stall. Sitting there was sea-foam-colored unicorn mare that had a matching mane with a streak of white in it. She waved back at them and they all walked over to join her. When they sat down they saw that she had already gotten a veggiplatter with dipping sauce for them to share.
“Lyra, this is our new friend and poker buddy Midnight Storm. Midnight, this is Lyra Heartstrings.” They both shook hooves. “Lyra’s working on her musical career and Midnight’s the new town wood cutter.”
“Cool.” Lyra said, eating a baby carrot. “How’s that going so far?”
“Could be better I guess. I know not many ponies use firewood during the summer but I’m making as much inventory as I can now so that come fall and winter I’m spending more time indoors at the counter than out in the cold.” They all nodded in agreement. “And how about your music career? How’s that going?”
“Still nothing.” Lyra said disheartened. “But, as Celestia is my witness, I WILL make the lyre the next hit instrument!” Berry and Derpy rolled their eyes which was a funny thing to watch Derpy do. Midnight had yet to ask why her eyes were that way, but unless somepony else brought it up, she wasn’t going to ask; out of courtesy of course. Suddenly they heard a roar from a few blocks away and a few seconds later saw Fluttershy flying away in tears.
“I think I know why griffons don’t visit more often.” The three other mares nodded. Turning her attention back to the platter, Midnight grabbed a broccoli crown with her claw and dipped it in the sauce. When she looked back up, Lyra was staring at her claw. “What?”
“Your claw…” Lyra breathed. “…it’s just like a HAND!” Berry and Derpy face-hoofed.
“Oh, come ON Lyra! Not this again!” Berry moaned.
“But it grips like a HAND, minus four digits mind you, but still!”
“Would somepony like to fill me in?” Midnight asked, a bit lost.
“Lyra has a thing for some mythical creature called, uh, what was it again?” Berry looked to Lyra, already cringing.
“HUMANS!” Lyra yelled. “They’re mostly hairless, walk ONLY on their hind legs, and their front legs end in HANDS that can grip anything!” As Lyra continued to rant, Berry leaned over.
“She’s not crazy, just… eccentric.”
“She does know about Spike right?" Midnight asked. "I mean, he stands on his back legs and has, well, claws, but they do what she says human hands do.” If Lyra heard any of that, she gave no indication.
“When I still lived in Canterlot, there was a rumor that Princess Celestia had a student before Twilight Sparkle. That student found an enchanted mirror that lead to the human world! Rumor has it that the student didn’t leave the academy but was sucked into the mirror!” The three mares looked at her.
“Lyra, even you have to admit that one is off the deep end.” Berry deadpanned.
“It’s true though! I found the mirror! I think; hard to tell with a bunch of royal guards tackling you to the floor.” Silence.
“Lyra, please tell me you didn’t.”
“It’s a conspiracy I tell you! Celestia knows!” It was at that point that Midnight decided that bowing out would be for the best.
“Well, I’m always interested in mythical creatures and such, but I really think I should get back to cutting wood. I look forward to our poker game!” With that, Midnight trotted off. Berry glared at Lyra.
“If she stops being friends with us because of your crazy conspiracy theories, I am going to BREAK that lyre over your head until all the crazy’s gone!” Derpy had simply gone back to eating her muffin. Where it came from only Faust knew.
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Despite Lyra and her humans, Midnight had had a fun time playing poker with her new friends. It was the day after and she’d just felled her first tree of the day when she began to feel hungry. At first she was puzzled since she’d already had breakfast and it wasn’t near lunch time but then she felt a very familiar craving. This particular craving occurred once or twice a month and was impossible to ignore. Sure, she’d tried to ignore it before, especially the first few months after she’d begun moving from city to city, but in the end each time she’d given in. Her current record had been three months, and it had NOT ended well.
After hauling the tree back and getting a drink of water, she returned outside sporting a very worn-out looking set of saddle bags that had turned black on the bottoms. She extended her wings and gave them a few test flaps, limbering them up for what was probably going to be a long flight high up. When they felt ready, she gave one giant flap of her wings and took off, making for a group of clouds just above the edge of the Everfree. When she reached them she sailed around them, feeling for updrafts and thermals to help keep her aloft with minimal effort. Just as she was about to bank deeper into the Everfree forest she heard a voice call out to her.
“Hey, Midnight!” Pulling back into her holding pattern, she looked towards the caller and saw it was Rainbow Dash. “Just saw you take off; still can’t believe how cool those wings are.” As Rainbow caught up with her, Midnight landed on a cloud where she quickly followed suit.
“Thank you Rainbow.” Midnight quickly covered the saddle bags with her wings as the cyan pegasus fidgeted a bit before talking again.
“You’ve been in a lot of different places, right?”
“I’ve been around.”
“Well, I was wondering if… you’ve ever met a griffon before.” Midnight tapped her mouth with her hoof as she tried to remember. Other than that one that was in town the other day, she couldn’t really say she’d seen another griffon, let alone met one.
“Can’t say I have. Does this have something to do with the one from yesterday? Me and a few others saw her walking around town.” Dash nodded.
“Yeah, it does. Speaking of which, why didn’t you come to Pinkie’s party yesterday?”
“Well, after a certain two someponies planted a few rubber trees, I’ve been trying to catch up on my work.” Rainbow snickered.
“You’ve got to admit that was funny.”
“Once: funny. Twice: hilarious. Sixth time: aggravating.” Rainbow waved a hoof.
“Alright, we’ve may have gone a bit over board on that one.” Midnight raised an eyebrow, but didn’t say anything. “Anyway, the reason I asked was because I was wondering what other griffons were like, if you happened to know any.”
“Well, if I had to guess, I don’t think they’d all make Fluttershy cry.” Rainbow cringed.
“Yeah, I should go apologize again. Before I do that though, how about we go flying together for a bit? I could really use a flying buddy right now.” Midnight shook her head, her hunger beginning to return.
“Sorry Rainbow, but I’m actually up here for a bit of solitude at the moment, but I’m pretty sure I can get some flight time in with you tomorrow.” Rainbow nodded.
“That sounds good, although I could have really used a buddy today. Oh, and you can’t tell anyone else about this talk!” Rainbow suddenly looked serious. “I mean it!”
“Okay, okay! I swear by the Faust I won’t breath a word of it!” Midnight promised, hoping it would get Rainbow out of her face. The cyan pegasus gave a satisfied nod.
“Good. Well, I’ll see you later then!” With that she dove off the cloud and headed back into Ponyville. When she was out of sight Midnight dove off the cloud as well, but in the direction of the Everfree forest.
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Mr. Squirrel had had a bad day so far. He’d fallen out of bed and hit his head on a rouge acorn, Mrs. Squirrel had nagged him all morning about needing even more nuts for the coming winter, even though it was still summer, and his kids just wouldn’t SHUT UP. Finally, before he beat all their brains in with a rare cashew he’d gotten while foraging near the pony homes, he got out of the tree and took a minute to rest his ears and hopefully sedate the forming headache with a nut he’d gotten yesterday. Of course, since he lived in the Everfree Forest, he made sure there were no predators about before relaxing on his branch. After a few minutes he caught a flash of movement up in the sky. Jumping to his feet, he hid behind the tree trunk. After he got his heart rate back to normal, he chanced a peek around the tree to see the predator.
When he saw what it was, he sighed in relief. It was just one of those flying ponies, and they weren’t dangerous at all. As he chuckled to himself, he lost his grip on the nut he was holding and it bounced off the branch and fell to the forest floor. Turning to where it fell he scowled to himself. Damn pony made him lose his snack.
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Midnight circled above the forest in a lazy clockwise arc. A few minutes after leaving Rainbow Dash she’d set herself up looking around for targets. She’d quickly seen a squirrel, but it ducked behind a tree. She cursed at herself, but within a few circles the rodent had come back out, apparently deciding she wasn’t a threat. When it dropped its acorn, it gave Midnight a perfect shot. Just as her turn faced her away from it, she folded her left wing in, causing her to drop and turn. As soon as she was aiming for her target, she folded her other wing in, but neither were in all the way as to keep some lift and control for the pull out.
The squirrel didn’t see what hit him. Midnight was on him so fast he didn’t even have time to react to her shadow on him. Surprisingly, the impact that killed the rodent barely made the branch it was on quiver. Midnight flew up and out of the canopy, her meal held firmly in her mouth by her, now extended, fangs. When she returned to cruising altitude she opened the saddle bags and dropped her first catch of the day in. It was going to take more than one measly squirrel to satisfy her; maybe if she caught a few rabbits...
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Two hours after she took to the air Midnight returned home, diving out of the sky and quickly running into the shed she’d made. She spent another hour inside the shed with unfamiliar noises escaping from time to time. When she was done she emerged, not with her saddle bags, but with a few opaque freezer bags gripped in her claws. When she reached the house she put the bags into the back of the freezer. Two squirrels and three rabbits; she’d eat well tonight, and there’d even be some left over.
I hope when Fluttershy finds out about Midnight's meat eating tendencies, you don't make her freak out too badly.
I would think she'd be a little understanding since she has like, a bear.
Really good story so far, the only thing I'm dreading is the Celestia chapter.
Sounds a bit like she's gona be a lil racist.
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I actually plan Fluttershy to be the most understanding, because, as you pointed out, she takes care of carnivores (i'd sooner site the birds of prey, since bears are technically omnivores, so she could just be feeding him berries)
As for dear old Tia... I'll leave you in suspense
How is this not more popular? I'll have to see if I can get some of my followers to check this out. Until then, I await the next chapter.
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thank you for the fav and the praise.
I think the reason it wasn't found sooner was because it didn't have a cover image, and I say that because before I had a cover image there was about a single fav per chapter, same went for likes, and I had a top daily views of 49. I uploaded my cover image and then posted chapter five, and everything just exploded.
also, thank you for spreading the word!
P.S. - My other story is giving me issues with uploading a cover image (it won't let me upload or link to one), and I was wondering if you've had this problem before and if you were able to fix it.
3123287 I posted a blog entry. Hopefully at least SOME of my followers will give this a try. I have over 500 so you should get some new favs soon.
I never had that problem before. I'd PM a mod.
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Thank you! I've already got some more favs and a watch!
I've PM a mod about it, but they havn't got back to me yet.
Shirotora brought me here.
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and how have you liked the story so far?
3123485Still reading it right now, but I'm really enjoying it. There are a few technical grammar and spelling errors here and there, but nothing too distracting. (If you ask for specific examples, I could go back over and find them.) Nice to see DT getting what she deserves, btw
but... but...
PFUDOR!!!
Have yourself an upvote, fave, follow, and– well, there was a cake, but someponies ate it
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I will definitely have fun with that episode.
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I've got a proof reader, so I'm aware of some of the grammar errors, though due to the way I write, especially conversations, I pulled rank on her.
I honestly hate DT (I know it's a strong word) more than all the other villians put together. She's just so... IRRITATING!!!
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I honestly want that as a ring tone, and so far I've driven my sister crazy with it.
trust me, I do not like not writing her in, but I just couldn't find a way around the whole "Tia finds out, sends Screwball to meet her father" issue. Maybe after discord either gets free or reformed I could write her in.
I like this, quite nice indeed. Grammar/mechanics are pretty good, I personally didn't notice any mistakes. I like the premise of the story and Midnight is pretty cool, though methinks that She wouldn't be quite as accepted at this point in Ponyville's history. This is before Zecora was accepted in P'Ville, so I wouldn't think that she would be welcomed by as many. Derpy, from fandom and possibly cannon? Yeah, she would be more accepting. Twilight? probably yeah. Some of the foals? yeah. Other than that though... I don't know.
Still, a good story. I'm looking forward to more.
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Firstly, thanks for the fav AND the watch!
When it comes to Zecora, head cannon for the story is that, since Twilight wasn't around when Zecora first came to town, rumors were allowed to florish and nopony sought to dispel them. Since Midnight came around after Twi came to town, she was able to keep rumors from getting started. And nopony has mentioned Zecora yet because, well they haven't. Twi doesn't know about her until the episode, and neither will Midnight.
3123664 Seems legit to me!
3101547 500 k is nothing. There is a story out there, my favorite one in fact: Diaries of a Madman. It is currently 1.2 Mil words long, and probably not even half way through. I loves it. Also aother good one is The Sweetie Chronicles: Fragments. It is 200k, and worth every word. Shameless plug of my two favorite stories is done now...
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I will concede that my favorite fanfic, Past Sins, is a 200k story, but with a 500k story we're talking around 40+ chapter! Lauren H. Faust man!
Then again if you're really into the story it doesn't feel that long, and it IS just numbers.
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Nice pick Shiro thanks for bringing me here!!!
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thank you! and thanks for the fav!
3123680 The longest fanfic in the world (last I checked) was a SSB or Mario one at, like 3.5M+ words.
*some time looking for it later* Ah, here's an article about it from earlier this month: http://www.buzzfeed.com/josephbernstein/meet-the-college-junior-behind-the-longest-fan-fiction-ever
I can read (without skimming) up to 31,000 words an hour, give or take. (roughly 100 pages in a book, given that the average word count in novels is 300-350 words per page.) This would take me over 100 hours to read. If someone finds a longer fanfic, let me know. I still need to test the limits of my insanity
3124092 already like it and i haven't read it yet
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then read it and you'll love it!
I like this story, moar please.
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ah. thank you
great so far, I will continue to follow and read it.
A Kirin huh? neat, maybe I can meet her later, but for now I am stuck in orbit trying to fix my dropship. It's conrols decided to blow up in my face.
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chapter 6 is almost complete! just need to finish it and have my proof reader... eh... read it.
should be up by tomorrow morning!
I find myself quite interested in this; looking forward to the next chapter.
I must say, I really like how, as others have mentioned, Midnight is no Mary Sue. She has traits most people LINK to Mary Sues, but they are mainly cosmetic in this story it seems, aside from the conflict these traits have caused in her past. To our knowledge at least.
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When I decided to make a story about her, keeping her from being a mary sue as ALWAYS on my mind, despite how I made her look. I know how alicorn ocs are looked at by the community. besides, I think I like the LOOK of an alicorn more than the ABILITY, which is why I kept the horn.
thanks for the fav too!
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No problem! And I know what you mean about the 'look' of an Alicorn versus the power often associated with one. They have a very striking image.
3124341 I can manage about the same rate of read, though I've not measured yet. I know when I read Diaries for the second time it took me about a week, with working a 50 hour work week. The only other fiction that I've heard of that is long is a pokemon one that is just over 2 mil, called Brave New World. It is also apparently the sequel to another story that is over 1 mil called Latia's Journey. I've not read it yet... too busy with FIMFiction.
kirin dragon pony
ninja gaiden
dragon ninja
ninja dragon pony hhmmmm
3124492 he at least y our ship isn't half destroyed and under a garage
Wow. 65 likes already! Hopfully it'll break 100 by tomorrow. If only people actually READ blogs you'd already have over that.
luving this!!!! More!! More more more!!!
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meh, steal a pelican or a phantom. They're reliable.
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hey, this is a HELL of a lot better than what I was doing! I owe you one man!
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well, if my proofreader would stay up just 30 more minutes, I'd have the next chapter up by morning! Hate to say it, but just wait until Saturday morning. sorry.
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really? how about the guy who told me to change all of my "!?"s to "?!"s?
3126599 When you get popular, do the same for some other talented writer that needs the love and we'll call it even.
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you got it!
I figured Midnight wouldn't go vegetarian.
This story is amazing!
needs flufflepuff.
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And now that is all that i can think of. PFUDOR
3126649 moar quickly please
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thank you!
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dear Faust now this is going to haunt me
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I'd have a chapter up today, but my pre-reader! She won't read! (yeah, she had to go food shopping, and go to work to pay for food, but the chapter!)
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I'm trying not to. I really am. The idea is that she will change gradually over time, but she definitely will not end up like the mane cast. Life's just been too mean to her for that.
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yes. yes it will. even if flufflepuff makes a brief cameo I'll be satisfied.
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well, like I said the only way I feel is right to get one into the story (the fluffy pony was to be another OC Midnight was going to name Fluffy Butt) is when Discord and Screwball are loose (or redeemed), so y'all are going to have to wait.
In the mean time, I'm going to go play PFUDOR in my sister's room until she hurts me.