Applejack wins Soarin in a charity fundraiser and now the Wonderbolt has to do whatever she says for the entire weekend. Which would be nice as long as her nervousness and secret crush she has for him doesn’t hold her back. Anthro ponies.
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I count Soarin' eating his pie as cloppable.
So Soarin' has a Cinderella style infatuation with Applejack and is trying to identify her by her apple pie? Hilarious.
And she's going to win him in the auction (we'd have no story, otherwise), and he'll end up helping out on the farm...and he'll eat her pie, recognize her, confess the whole thing...and then, with luck, eat her pie.
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No. She's going to totally lose the auction, and the story will end right there.
damn, that was a nice chapter. :3
hope to see the next chapter soon~ :3
Hello!
Here is a pseudo-review:
From what I'm seeing, this looks a little like Cinderella--the mare who baked that succellent pie he got from the GGG has to be his girlfriend. I do like the reference.
The scene where they are hazing Misty Fly is so reticent of Breaking Barriers when Rainbow Dash and Firefly were being initiated by the rest of the Wonderbolts (Soarin' included). To be honest, I kinda figured that it was gonna characterize Soarin' as the stereotypical playboy celebrity, who stays up all night, and really doesn't care which mare comes on to (or in...). Instead he seems to be a bit more than that. It's so sweet that he's wanting to settle down, or as the story says: One day, he would hopefully find that mare who would make his heart stop, only to be shocked back into restarting again with her mere kiss.
I was a bit surprised in a good way again that both Spitfire and Soarin are firmly in the "friends with benefits" part of their interaction. I originally was thinking that maybe the two were in a relationship that was coming on the rocks. And Spits (heh, Spitz) apparently is bi, with a preference for mares. Not important to the story, but it reinforces the fact that Soarin' looking for a sensible mare.
Back to Misty Fly, I have a little bit of trepidation with her. She seems to be the ideal example of a pony that Soarin is trying his damnest to stay away from. And the bit at the end where she sees that Soarin is pining for the still-unnamed-photographed pony Applejack, and is not showing that he's refusing to fuck her senseless, I can just about predict that Misty's gonna try to make Soarin' weekend hell--just how is the question.
Oh Soarin', boy, how your prayers are gonna be answered.....and in more ways than one...
And AJ, you better enjoy it, thanks to all of your friends , you hopefully will never have to deal with being lonely every again.
Onward to Friday!!
2883500 Fantastic Review! I give that review a 1323423249 our of 5
I have a feeling that by the end of this story, AJ will have made a 'special' pie for Soarin.
I really like how you bridged the connection between Applejack and Soarin' so that it actually makes sense! Good show, old chum. Don't make us wait a month for the next chapter, eh?
I hope the clop comes with a large gooey creampie. Gooey and thick,ready to be baked inside a mare's warm oven.
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Holy pony hell I was thinking the exact same thing!
This is really a good chapter. Can't wait for the next one.
Applejack Soarin forever in this story.
I see what you did there. I hope that Kingdom Hearts reference was intentional.
2883415 comment had threes in it half-life 3 confirmed
So when does he have sex with the pie?
Yo Soarin, just drop Misty off at my place. Sure I'm not a Wonderbolt, but I'll certainly give her a show!!!!
Ha. Nice idea using the Cinderella plot for this tale. It's going to be one wild night when Applejack and Soarin meet up again.
Also, there's nothing worse than a drunken mare high on her alcohol intake.
Great update, please do keep up the good work upon such a great tale.
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Soarin'xPie
I SHIP IT
2884589 Your avatar makes that comment infinitely more awesome and hilarious!
I've got to say that the way Spitfire is flirting with Soarin, something tells me that they once had something, or Spitfire wants to be Soarin's marefriend. If that's the case, then how about SoarinJackFire?
Pies make a few references in this.
Haha Soarin is searching for AJ, that's adorable. Really enjoyed this chapter.
So Soarin is looking for the pie that Applejack made. I bet he'll really like her "all natural" Apple Pie when all said and done. Get a good taste of it from both "tools".
Question: How do we know that Granny Smith didn't make the pies Applejack tried to sell at the Gala?
I have to side with Misty here, on your last night of freedom before being auctioned off to the public with a high chance of ending up in the hands (or chained to the bed ) of a Wonderbolts fan with no ability to refuse whatever fantasy he or she has planned its probably a good idea to get wasted because I have a feeling pies would bring bad thoughts
I really can't wait for the next chapter! Please oh please update before the weekend!!!
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It's not quite shipping if it's canon.
Well, I knew it. Around half of the comments are about Soarin' eating Applejack's "pie".
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I am equal parts aroused and disgusted by that statement... actaully, more disgusted than aroused...
Still, that one was clever.
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Well... Knowing Applejack, if he wants her pie, he gotta work her farm to earn it. Seeding, sowing, planting... Also he needs to water her garden too to make sure what she wants grow.
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You're lucky you stopped there. Any more puns, and I would have had to shoot you.
Speaking of which, if Soarin' accidentally knocks up Applejack, Big Mac is going to be all over his ass with a 12-gauge.
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I think Big Mac is too busy with planting Cheerilee's garden to worry or even hint about a shotgun wedding. Other than that I hope that it does work out for the two of them. They (hopefully) will have a weekend to lay the foundation for a lasting relationship. And knowing how life-changing a single weekend can be for a pony with a crush, imagine all the opportunities when Applejack finally confesses her crush to the pony she has a crush on. We saw what happened with Spike and Rarity, they are now inseparable since that special weekend together.
I only hope that Cupid does strike twice, for Applejack's sake at least.
Very well written and fun to read.
2887952 Answer: Because Applejack said she had made them herself in the episode
UPDATE PLEASE. LOVE THE STORY
May I please have MOAR!!
I have a question for you FlimFlamBros? when are you going to update this story.
or are you just writing the rest of it out. so you do. So you don't have updated weekly?
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He's just posted in his blog that most of its done, and he'll soon send it to his editors, though he's busy with new stuff he's bought (plus editors are not machines. They're people, they have lives).
I rate this line ten Asian elephants out of ten Asian elephants! Oh, wait this isn't Asian elephants we're speaking about? Screw that, I comment however I want!
Awww Soaren, your not a douche!
(laughing) Applegasm?!? Good one!