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fuck yeah! new chapter!
and i recognized all of those except for th' alicorn medic. who would that be?
really good chapter and yay Shadow is back at it again
This was awsome and adorable i loved every moment i'll be sitting on the edge of my seat for the next chapter. Keep up the amazing work.
What can I say. Wow. Simply wow.
The way you put emotions in there is simply magnificent and I love it. It's good to see Shadow and his "gang" back in action.
Can't wait for the next chapter, though it's more than worth the wait.
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That'd be Snakebite Tourniquet from FoE: Misfits
A shame he stopped working on his story. It was really good.
2229017oh, i know that story. i just didn't recognize th' description.
Wow things are going to be epic.
Great chapter mate.
I can't wait to see what going to happen from now on.
Its going to be intersting getting back to where the Prologue started out at.
~Reggie
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Yeah, that was the theme of this chapter. While it's only been a little over two chapters since Shadow 'retired' in San Ponsisco, it's been longer for our hero. I wanted to make a big deal out of him heading back out. Suppose it worked.
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Sugar Pie does make everything adorable. I should maybe make a side story of her sometime, but then no one would be able to read it due to sure amounts of dawwwwing
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I'm actually surprised at myself really. I dunno how I'm doing this emotions thing in my story. It seems to be what a lot of folks comment on here about and my friends tell me as they read the story. Emotions. How Do Y work?
Really? He stopped writing that story? Awwww I really liked it too, all the characters I included in that scene were from stories I love to read. To hear one of them stopped is sad.
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Indeed, it's going to be awhile before we reach that scene in Chapter One, but perhaps not as long as originally expected. After all I have recently stream lined some of what I had in my head. Or maybe I just forgot some of it... ... anyway, it may still take me another year and a half to finish but I think it'll be worth the wait.
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Indeed that was from Borderlands 2, as was the song I used on the train ride to San Ponsisco. That scene inspired me a bit, though there was a lot less exploding trains and robots in my story. Oh well, maybe next train ride...
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Well a year and a half seems about right for this story. I really want to see how things get around to that scene but I guess I will have to wait.
And correct me if I'm wrong but wount Shadow start dating Balefire's sister, Sunburst?
The descripition sounds the same from that first scene as it does in this chapter.
~Reggie
2230934 yup yup it did
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Indeed it is, though they don't seem to have hit it off quite so well to begin with. When she appeared my second editor responded with the following statement...
'YEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! FINALLYY!! WHOOOOOOO!!!!"
I'm not sure, but I think he's happy Shadow might finally have a social life. My response was of course very tactful.
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I just want to see Wildfires reacton to them now sex jokes as far as the eye can see.
Also that seems about the most common reaction I've seen.
But really mate, good chapter and can't wait untill Shadow gets back out there in the wastland.
Dude I was just dying out of extreme cuteness from Tiny!! My god how i laughed so hard. And the part when she says wildfire explained to her with 'Doing it' it was just so hilarious man! All of you who made this chapter amazing.
I applaud to you all, really because I can't do nothing else.
All of you again great job.
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Yea, some kinda writers block and his other fic seem to be the main reasons for that.
Happens.
Wait, how does a sugar rush lead to a slippery atrium?
Wow this kept me up late. Still didn't finish it by the time I went to bed. Dangit, I have things to do.
"Trust in your friends; in this new world we live in, friendship is more powerful than any gun. Treat them well and together nothing can stop you."
Somepony show this to needsmorepony. He thinks he can take on Terramorphous the Invincible alone.
"I'd just like to point out to all the single mares out there, he is single."
You and your character Wildfire would get along well.
hmm, this story looks interesting. You got yourself a new reader
... I've got lots of catching up to do
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Welcome! Pull up a chair, and I hope you enjoy your stay! Just ignore me as I hover behind you soaking up any and all comments you might make while reading. Feed on attention? Me?? Never!!!
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hmmm... strawberry flavor....
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Well, we really didn't get into the details of that, but I believe it has to do with somepony deciding the Stable needed a indoor pool/water park.
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Thank you for the kind words, I'll be sure to let my editors and prereaders know what you said, unless they seen it already themselves.
And Sugar Pie. Oh, Sugar Pie. For a character I expected not to get a whole lot of lines or attention, she sure seems to have taken over the story for herself. But then, she wouldn't be Sugar if she wasn't doing that!
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You bet your sweet tush I did xD Well done again on this, Storm. I still have all sorts of shivers for the lead-up of that awesome upcoming fight.
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Well, both those questions sorta require the other's answer to make since, so here we go.
This is set on the west coast of Equestria, about as far away as I could make it from where Little Pip does her thing, as well as from Blackjack and a couple of the other heroes. In fact, I'm likely more close to where Heroes is set than anything else. I did this so I could take some liberties in coming up with locations and monsters of my own, such as Super Mutants.
As for Alicorns, they are largely located along the east coast, and even more around Maripony. Settlements and cities further west have yet to have the honor of meeting large numbers of them as my story is set thirty years before the original FoE. This also gives me some liberties in doing a few things outside of what Kkat wrote.
Now, since Alicorns sorta took over the role of Super Mutants in the original FoE and since my story is set before the original and far away from it I needed something to take over the role of Alicorns. And the Super Mutants are back in the game!! Er, story...
There's another story that has Super Mutants in them, FoE: Rangers of Wintertrot and I will be mentioning a few locations from that story in mine since he used them first.
I will also be explaining where the Super Mutants came from as well.
So, I hope that explains about the Super Mutants and where the Alicorns are. Now, back to work on chapter seventeen!
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
I'm only halfway through chapter three and I'm LOVING THIS THING
Seriously, that part in chapter two (I think) where poor Sugar had the bad news told to her... had me in tears That whole sequence had a lot of both emotion and action in it, I was literally going WOO YEAH KILL THOSE RAIDERS one moment, then crying WHY JADE WHY I KNEW YOU FOR TWO SECONDS AND IM SAD YOU'RE DYING WHYYYYYYY
I wish I could write battle scenes like that. And of course Shadow's motivation for adventure is prime and awesome. Those raiders better not have done anything to Shade (ha, fat chance, she's prolly traumatized at the very LEAST). In any case I'm loving this story. And that prolouge is ominous...
Anywho, I just wanted to feed you the attention you so obviously don't need Now back to reading!
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Glad your enjoying the story so much!
Yes, readers sure seem to love my action scenes and more recently my more emotional scenes, which pleases me greatly. When I first started writing I was afraid both, as well as everything else I wrote, would come off bland and uninteresting. I am pleased to hear it continues to capture new readers attentions.
Yes. Poor Jade didn't get a lot of screen time. She's sorta like that awesome space trooper or solider in a war movie who never got any good lines, but suddenly they just kick a lotta flank before going down all heroically.
And you'll find out Ebony's fate soon enough at the rate your going.
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Glad to see another reader, and also happy to hear your enjoying what you read.
Atm I have a good number of editors and pre readers, but if I do need some more help I'll keep your kind offer in mind. Thanks! And hope you continue to enjoy the story!
And finally, to my two newest readers, along with all those who have continued to read, comment and keep my spirits up to write more...
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I swear one of these days Stormcaller. I'm going to die from extreme cuteness from Sugar Pie. And really Sugar on sugar IS A AD IDEA! Oh and i have to note. Little Marshal Sugar Pie! She was so cute and awesome protecting her friend on Nightmare Night it was so frickin' EPIC!!!! I'll die i swear I will from her cute antics if you continue doing this!!
LOVE THIS!!! IT'S SO EPIC KEEP IT GOING!!
Go, go gadget-Marshall! And his posse.
And I knew Tiny would be her Uncle for Nightmare Night.
Didn't recognise the alicorn heroes, but I have just added Misfits to my read later list, even if it's currently on hiatus/stopped. Also, another hero that is directly inspired by LittlePip is Mach, of Fallout: Equestria- Outlaw.
The video linked in 'By the time we arrived in the Market District' is unavailable. I loved the scene with Second Sight, and hope she pops up again. I don't have time right now to finish my re-reading, but I shall do so as soon as I possibly can. This story is brilliant, and I want to read chapter eighteen.
(note to all) name all the heroes in this chapter GO!
Sad that most of the stories the fortune teller seen points at are cancelled. If the really are needed to save the wasteland the the wasteland is screwed