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The ending was so sad he had to kill his own sister
Oh..... damn... somehow I knew it was going to be like that.
Good chapter, horrible ending (but it was suppost to be horrible so good job).
On a different note, ~30,000 words? The chapters seem to be getting bigger and bigger.
DAG NABBIT DAGGED NABBED DAGGIT!
I saw it coming, but I kept denying it! And you had to put THAT music with it?! Burn it all, playing with our emotions!
Okay, got that out of the way. Carrion was a great addition, he reminds me a ton of Boone from New Vegas. Well, the effectiveness with the rifle sans the insanity. The music choice was stellar again except for the fight scene when their cover's blown (20 cookie points for 'Bloodpiss', that was a hoot). I know it wasn't too big of a fight, but the music was a bit tame for a sequence of 'Surprise PUNKS!' If ya catch my drift.
And now... time to nuke the raiders. Seriously, I'd haul the Fat Man into there. Worked for me and Lily at The Fort with Caesar. Gotta kill ALL the slavers! Good chapter all in all.
I got no words to say besides .................. none
Im sad now
got to go be sad some wear *sniffle*
I can't get enough of this story!!!
But so sad...
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Indeed, sad story is sad. I had to earn that sad tag somehow!! Don't worry, I did cry while writing this.
And you'll be happy to know my editors are happily blowing my face off at TF2 every chance they get for this chapter alone.
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Glad to hear someone else is enjoying this little story. Makes me happy to know its liked. No, I'm not a changling feeding off your attention. Don't be silly!
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The chapters grow and shrink as I go, the next two are not as long as this last one. I'm trying very hard to keep them long enough to be interesting but not too long to be silly. I think I sometimes fail at that last one though.
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Happy to see your still with me!
Now, back to work! Or actually, sleep. Then work, then writing, then blowing up Geth.
Only one broken link- the first link, 'Kanter City, a city of the dead and the damned'. I think it's the same user as one of the previous ones, as this one has also been deleted due to multiple cases of copyright infringement. The part of the title left over is 'Immediate Music...'.
I hate this chapter. But I love this chapter, too. It's brilliantly sad. I've been looking forward to it since I started rereading. Largely so I could get it out of the way, but the next bit is awesome and brilliant.
Very sad ending this one had, but I did like the reference to Project Horizons through Rampage. At first I was confused wondering why you picked that name (Like Rivets from the Steeledome) And then I remember that she got the armor and the name after killing a guy named Rampage.
R.I.P. Pipsqueaks, your friends would remember you, if you weren't so unremarkable.
Ah, you bastard. You really had me there, I didn't think you'd actually kill her off.
Part of me is relieved that this story wouldn't just be a neverending quest to attain an unreachable goal, but I'm also fairly surprised that this ended like it did. Shadow's sole motivation for venturing out into the wasteland is now gone, so I can't see what's supposed to happen next at this point in the story. I would assume he'd just go back to his Stable herd and live out his life with them, but that wouldn't for make much of a story, and I still have another 12 massive chapters to read through.
Soooooooooo rag rag ageist the dying of the light.