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Hmmm a new chapter, though i haven't started reading...... Yet
I enjoyed every bit i was like then i was like then i was all like and then finily.Loved every bit and i am happily waiting for the next chapter. Keep it up!
Another amazing chapter! Keep up the good work
This goes to show that you don't need insane action scenes for a nice chapter! Brilliant as always!
Kinda wish i could like this story again after reading the start of act 2, only now realized how much I ,missed this
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Thanks guys, means a lot to see those comments waiting for me after a long hard day of work. You guys are the best!
Also, I'm sorry to everyone who may or may not have gotten notifications about this updating. I recently re uploaded Chapter One after one of my newer pre readers went through it and fixed any mistakes, but there was some problems and I was forced to save and re save it as I attempted to fix it.
Do I smell a Pink Eyes reference?
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most excellent chapter! good to have this story updating again. :D
SUGAR IS ADORABLE!!!!!!! you made me smile and laugh a lot in this chapter i REALLY enjoyed it. Thank you!
Another great chapter and perfect start for act 2. You really have a great talent to create atmosphere and depth in the story, and that's what I really like about it, besides the awesome characters and storyline of course.
That scene with Wild and Stone, combined with the music was just...hhnnnnnngg gimmemoreofthat! Not to mention the heart attack on four hooves, called Sugar.
She's just too cute.
It's nice to see them having a kinda normal life now, even though I know this will again go up in flames and gore in about two chapters max...
Love it!
>“Momma?”
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Firstly, what is wrong with them being sterile, why would they need to be fertile? Secondly, why does it matter in context to this story? Lastly, your language taints the nature of your arguments. I know you are upset (though you haven't given a good reason why, just ranted about the fact that Equestria is a different universe, so automatically they shouldn't be infertile. I'm perfectly fine with them being either, really, but I don't see why this is so important to you, or at all. Please explain yourself.
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Oh. My. Celestia! My first negative comment... er... mostly negative comment... heck its someone not agreeing with me!! I'm so happy!!
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I understand where your coming from with this, about the number of genes and so forth... okay, that's a lie, I suck at that sorta thing. But I believe I get the basics of it.
I will honestly say I just went with what I'd already read before, from PH about zonies and what little I knew of hybrids from real life and Hollywood (yeah, I know, they're SOO reliable) via sci fi movies and tv shows.
I spoke with my editor and one of my pre readers about this, and while editing it neither really gave it a second thought... well sept for my editor. He counts nearly every bullet Shadow uses and was calculating the amount of food I'd need to feed 30,000 ponies. He keeps me honest. As honest as a story about brightly colored ponies using magic and mouth firing weapons can be. His opinion on the subject is, well none. He doesn't care either way, so is leaving it up to me. Dammit, now I got no one else to blame! I'll just blame Avi.
At any rate, I'd rather not lose a reader that's been here with me since the beginning over something that, to me anyway, is such a minor thing to the story at large. Zony's do not play a major roll in my story beyond Second Sight and perhaps a back ground zony or three here or there. It may or may not get mentioned ever again.
However, as I said I do understand it upsets you, and for that I am sorry and hope you'll stick with me.
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Indeed you do my good sir. Just wait until next chapter. References. References everywhere!
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Sugar is the reason this chapter almost didn't get edited, she kept causing my friends to OD on cuteness. As I said above, just wait till next chapter. Sugar Pie on Nightmare Night in a costume. Bring your insulin. You have been warned.
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Oh, don't worry, this story shall be full of parts just like that in all the right places to make you
Glad you liked it, I was a little worried since it lacked the big action scenes everyone seems to like. And I'm also glad to hear of someone else enjoying the music I link with the story. I was beginning to wonder if it was only Bronyken and myself who listened to it.
Oh, and your about right. Things do hit the fan soon, but in a good way.
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What can I say... I played one to many RPGs as a kid on the NES. Its like the meat and potato of any good story. Villagers need help with something, hero deals with something, hero lvls up and profits. Well, sept Shadow doesn't take caps for his good deeds.
Deathclaws I don't think exist in the FoE universe, I think that's where Hellhounds came from. Course, doesn't mean I might not add'em. I do love to toss new creatures at Shadow that wanna kill and eat him.
And indeed, punching a ghoul in the face is instant badass points.
Your getting close to the dreaded Chapter Eight I believe.
May Celestia have mercy on your soul... and mine cause I'll never be able to play TF2 with you again... like...
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What would that even look like? Wait, don't tell me. Not sure I want to know. :)
HHHHNNNNNGGGGG!
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Solid music as always, just adds that nice touch. Still worried 'bout that storm a'brewin' though!
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Well, you got your wish. A few days ago I seen a spider pony listed on the featured story bar. What have you done?!
And glad to hear your going to be sticking it out with me.
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Yeah, thus far as I know, none of the big names in the FoE game have given any mention to everyones favorite lovable scamp. I figured it was high time, Pipsqueak had his 15 minutes of fame in the setting and since most of the other background ponies died HONORABLY I decided to let him have a happy ending.
But then, raiders killed and captured his decedents...
Yeah, medic Pip was best medic pony... may she rest in peace in that big hospital in the sky.
And I wanted this to have a slightly more western feel than other FoE stories, hence the location of the story. Equestrias Wild ( or Mild) West. At least what little the show hints at for the Wild West. But than, this is hardly cannon. I dunno if its even fannon!
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It's building out in the west, and moving slowly in... we have another few chapters before it hits the fan. Here, have this handy dandy map of where the storms at.
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Next Chapters up to 15k words atm, hit a bit of a issue with a couple scenes but they are working themselves out.
Gah i keep checking everyday for a new chapter even the first day after the latest one was brought out! I can honesly say this is my favorite Fanfic yet. To me i enjoy this as much as i enjoyed FoE, which was ALOT. Cravings must read more!
Well, one thing that's absolutely clear is that Wildfire DEFINITELY left an impression on Shadow.
Also, I want there to be a zony ghoul just so I can say "Zombie Zony".
“There’s actually a fair number of ponies who can cook like your Uncle Shadow. They’re called stallions,”
Ya know, I'd resent that if I didn't set off the fire alarm when trying to cook a frozen pizza. Yeah, I can't cook. (The pizza was still frozen when we got the alarm shut off.)
Also, as someone whom was sent to the principle's office a LOT for defending myself as a kid, I am in approval of Sugar's actions.
Woo! All caught up! Now to join the crowd in waiting. Shouldn't be long with what I've heard from the pre-readers.
Still loving this story. I think it's replaced Heroes as my favourite incomplete side-story. Maybe.
I had a discussion in a Fallout: Equestria free-form roleplaying universe where I have a donkey character about hybrids, and it was eventually decided that they are fertile, but that's mainly because somebody else already had a Stable full of fertile hippogriffs (pony/griffin hybrids).
Also, I haven't read the next chapter yet, but if Sugar Pie isn't going out on Nightmare Night as the Marshall, or Uncle Shadow, or Stable Security in some form or another, I'd be slightly annoyed if I didn't accept that whatever happens has happened and no matter what Tiny will be cute.
No broken video links, though personally I'm not a fan of DannSonn's style of music. That just means I close the link after I click it, so I still enjoy the story.
R.I.P. Twist. She had one last fight in her, and she made it a good one.
also, i know this is the wrong chapter but, in the train scene three ponies were buried, and a empty hole for those who died in Kanter City, what about the pony who got shot on the train, it said three ponies died of their wounds but that guy died of a headshot. WHERES HIS GRAVE?
Man, that was cute as fuck.
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