As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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Things seem to be moving along swimmingly. Good chapters take time to make. ;)
When did Texas become a country again?
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I mentioned that in an author's note. This isn't our Earth. There are more inconsistencies that I have yet to mention, places that shouldn't exist, events that never happened, etc.
so they are gonna force gatekeepers to join, what if one as powerful as sombra appears and is all like "nah im good"
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Odds are, Vitctor will be like, "join or suffer." Rex, on the other hand, will be like, "Here's my card. If you want to make some good money on the side, call me," and then spy on them.
Now that was a great Chapter. Hope to see more! Keep up the Great job you are doing.
Dragonfox
Wonder when Discords counterpart comes up...
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Keep calm and flutter on.
4530457 I think you might have misunderstood me. What I meant was that I wondered when the human version of Discord would arise.
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No, I understood you perfectly. The human, though he already exists, won't do anything until his counterpart (really an extension of the same being) is freed from stone in KCAFO.
Now that I'm caught up, I can finally give my full opinion.
I honestly expected something completely different than what I got. I expected more history involving the Gatekeepers and more relations with Chrysalis.
However, what I got was even better than what I expected. I love Rex/William, even though he isn't that sane/good with politics. I also like most of the characters in the story.
My only two gripes are these: I expected more with Catherine (I think that was her name.) And I also would love to see more interactions between Rex and his daughters (I'm a sucker for family stuff, okay?).
Overall, a great story.
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I plan to explore more into the relationship between Selene and Klika. This current story ark is just ballooning larger than O expected.
I noticed just one mistake with the Spanish. When taruk said“Sorprende a los tres de nosotros. Estoy seguro de que un hombre como usted tiene un gusto excelente.” he should have said 'estoy segura' since he was Waring a female body