As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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what.
4646508
Exactly.
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4646508
Yeah you are not that far off.
Is this another one of those chapters that won't make sense for a ridiculously long time? Like an endgame sort of thing?
4646921
No. It's pretty straight forward, although the consequences will be both immediate and far-reaching.
Basically, Oblivion took a bite out of the universe. That's it.
so basically rex is the legit bad guy hands down, sombra is trying to be the good guy, and luna has to deal with being mind linked to an infant. i think luna got the short end of the stick![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
Lol I just immagine a obsidian eelwith a shitton of mouths eating with a hp bar and nameplate, showing Oblivion.
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Selene is a perfectly normal-minded, if excitable, 12 year old.
If you asked the changelings, you would find that Rex and Chrysalis honestly have the hive's best interests at heart (because they can feel when the hive suffers), but are quite underhanded in how they go about their business. Humans/ponies would call the kings monsters anyway.
While Sombra may have been brought back to sanity, he's still the same greedy tyrant as before. Victor is no nice guy either. While he does have the best information about the events of the story of any character save Discord, he's also a crime lord that tortures, murders, and casts mind-warping magic over countless people.
The only named character that aren't shitty on the inside are a few random changelings, Sal, and Selene.
Question: what does that say about me as a person, that most of my world's characters are monsters of the worst kind?
4648036
Add squid-like tentacles and giant, organic harpoons with mouths on the end. Now make it a color that doesn't exist, and you have something really close.
Ps, don't forget extra eyes as well.
4648783 you clearly need to let out all of the thoughts your mind creates to make you a nicer person, it beats using them to threaten people.
4648793 reminds me of the warnings of people slipping out of warpspace when warping.
4647263
Sorry, I wasn't specific enough. The universe-eater(s) taking a bite out of the universe(s) was fairly clear. I meant the rest of the chapter (as well as the other Discord/Oblivion chapters).
4648783
A) Evil people are fun to write about.
B) Most humans are inherently neutral on the scale of morality. Most of your evil machinations, instead of actually going through with them, you have some characters in your story do instead of you (in most scenarios, this would be an unconscious action). This burns off your "evil" quota for a little while so that you can be a good/decent person in day to day life.
C) All of the above
D) None of the above (other)
4648783
that you believe the world to not be completely happy and lovey and that as long as justice exists there will be monsters set to test that justice.
side not: i dont see your story having a happy ending, but maybe you will surprise me![:rainbowwild:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowwild.png)
4650011
Well, discord realized that something was wrong and he didn't know what. He's going to be fighting extra hard for his freedom.
Second and Third are devising a plan so that they can spend more time with First without him needing to sleep for their ultimate defense. Of course, they can't act upon it just yet.
4650037
I've been considering a few different options for endings. Some are happy, some are dark, and some leave it open to sequels. I'm not sure myself what will come of this. I know the framework of my story, but sometimes the specifics that emerge when I'm in the flow surprise even me.
Do you know of the Infinite tsukuyomi from the Naruto series? I am debating that as one possible element of the story ending - Oblivion grants mercy and obscures the end with illusions so that they don't suffer. Again, it is an option and not set in stone.
4648793 I find it disturbingly hard to picture a color that doesn't exist.![:fluttershysad:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/fluttershysad.png)
Sigh, seems like i need to start looking into purchasing some high end drugs.![:pinkiecrazy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiecrazy.png)
Edit: Being intrigued enough i actually went searching on the internet and it turns out that there may and equally maynot be a color we perceive that doesn't actually exist.
I find it hilarious picturing Oblivion as a nice bright pink which funny enough is the same color as pin..ki....... Oh god, that explains so much as to how she's able to do the things she does and is in equal measures extremely terrifying.
4652799
I heard that there was some extra color that you get with rapidly flashing/alternating lights, so called "forbidden colors." This is due to eye strain, but you can get colors like reddish-green or yellowish-blue, or even blackish-blue, which are all different than the component colors if they were just mixed.
Here's the wiki article: http://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Impossible_colors
And now I feel bad I blew off the canon side story idea that we had. This is getting fucking awesome.
Shgla'yos plahf mh'naus.
Ywaq maq oou; ywaq maq ssaggh. Ywaq ma shg'fhn.
Gul'kafh an'shel. Yoq'al shn ky ywaq nuul.
Not sure if thats exactly accurate, but it seemed appropriate, especially considering the stuff thats happening (a cupcake for anypony who knows that reference
a dozen for what it means
)
Also, as to the ending, why not make multiple ending and just tag them on the end as extra chapters?
4658536
You could either make it non-canon or work around the earlier timeline. If it's good enough, I might go back and consider editing in minor references.
4658994
Heh, alright. Currently I'm working on a new story, but I'll probably get writer's block so I might return to it. :P