As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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Hold up, is Rex dead?!
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Duh, no. The story would probably end if he was.
4633099 ...Hmn. Second Time Rex was shot. It could be signaling the end of this story, his story. You never really know.
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But I still have so much more to write! The big reveal is still to come, and that won't happen for a long time yet...
4633481 Hmnphf. Oh thank god, I thought you were killing off the character.
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The main character? Nah...
He's the only one who even has a chance at living in the end.
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4633539 Why would you tell me that?
...I hadn't said anything yet, but you have a decent story here despite the plotholes you leave unclosed. You should/could try to fix that through an edit.
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Or maybe I am a liar...
Or I could have said something true but misleading...
Anyway, would you kindly point out said plot holes (maybe in a PM)? It's hard to see them when you already know the ending. I'll fix what needs fixing, and retcon the rest later.
Do keep in mind that the crossover chapters with IB are hard because he keeps adding his own backstory stuff. If it gets too out of hand, maybe I'll kill him.
Victor, I mean. I'll kill Victor, of course. What did you think I meant? That I would kill IB because he disagreed with me? Why would I do something like that? No one but Christians and Muslems and Communists and Nazis and Dictators and Drug lords and Crime bosses and average joes do that, and I am definitely not one of those...
4633642 Maybe. I'm pretty sure you realize every chapter taken from an alternate perspective can and should be expanded upon.
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I know. I just get all touchy when someone insinuates that I have a problem with my story. Mostly because I'm like, 'No! I worked hard on that! I swear that I fixed everything!'
Then I get more antsy when people won't tell me where the problem is, and then I cannot fix it. I know that there are multiple interpretations for everything, but sometimes the fans are right and the way I put my story on paper is stupid.
If you, and that goes to anyone that reads this comment, see something wrong with my story, PLEASE LET ME KNOW!
4633725 You can't see me, but I'm pointing to my previous comment. HINT, HINT.
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*Face palming hard* Thank you.
4633784 Uh-huh. If I spot more, I'll try to send it to you. I'm a bit preoccupied right now, though.
Should have been more careful. I am sure he will get out of it alright. Rex has not been killed yet.
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No, he's genuinely, honestly dead. But he has died before and come out alright.
Everything I do have is a reason.