As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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rex doesnt follow "THE laws" himself either
I haven't read this in ages... I've got at least ten chapters to catch up on, I just read this one. The way Rex's hive mind works is very similar to how I normally portray mine, so most of this makes perfect sense.
Those games sound suspiciously like war games. Except without the board. And possibly the 'game' part too.
Always glad to help.
Again. epic. just. epic.
Just read the firs paragraphs and i have two words: TERRA FORMARS
Just go
a page or two forward
would have put the image boxes but i don't know how
Wow!! that was a great chapter. lots of new elements to the story. I can't wait to see how this is going to play out. You have dun a good job in keeping the story interesting while making the necessary framework for the story to work. Now that you have added more of Equestria to the story.
Are you going to show the meeting in the dream world? You have showed mostly Rex's perspective. Are you going to take the time to show Lunas perspective? or Princess Celestia? Queen Chrysalis is all so a big player in the story. What are the experience of the elements of harmony that Chrysalis control. Is it a constant struggle to keep them under control?
What is good for Equestria is good for the Changelings in that the more happy the ponys are the more love there will be for them to eat. It not like the changeling will endanger there food. This means it is in there best interest to help as much as possible to insure that the elements of harmony win against Sombra.
What is the number of ponys that are needed to safely feed the one changeling without hurting the ponys that are being fed on? Can the Changeling use love poison, increasing the amount of love that can be harvested from the ponys? Wood it be good love for the Changeling to feed off of? Wood it put a strain on the pony life energy? It seems that putting ponys or humans in a cocoons is only a short term plan for feeding the changelings. If the human or pony lives a short life span when cocoon. It is like they are battery that have only so much power to give before dying. As for there protein needs, why can't Rex buy a beef ranch for trading good for Queen Chrysalis to feed her changelings? There are a lot of different types of animal in Equestria that can be use to feed her changelings if she did not want to work with Rex.
Will keep up the good work you are doing no this story and I look foreword to the next chapter you make.
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You have a lot of questions... Wow.
So, some of those questions will be answered soon. You'll get some other perspectives next chapter.
Let's see, changelings and food. Feeding works different on humans an ponies. Since draining emotions drains energy, ponies lose magic while humans lose life force. A changeling feeding the bare minimum could survive off a single loving pony or crowd of happy ponies indefinitely without ill effect to the pony. If the changeling takes more, then the pony gets fatigued. Humans, on the other hand, age. Again, a 1:1 ratio is all that is needed for the bare minimum. However, unlike a pony, humans don't recover from a feeding. The cocoons are a method of maximizing the efficiency of love collection.
Love poison creates a false emotion, which tastes gross to changelings; their venom works better for that. For the same reason, they do not like the want-it, need-it spell.
Rex and Selene would have no problem taking down Victor if they worked as a team, though I suppose she is still a kid. And also I can't tell whether Rex under estimates himself or you just made him weaker than he should be. With hundreds of minds at your beck and call complex problem solving should be so easy for Rex, he should be extremely intelligent considering all that brainpower. (I'm not saying he's dumb, but still I feel he shouldn't panic as much as he has been.
Anyways despite my misgivings the collab is going pretty good so far. Keep up the great work.
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There's a big "Yes, but..." here:
Imagine, if you will, that you tell 850 untrained civilians that they have to disarm a nuke that will instantly explode if they fail and might otherwise explode at any other time. Yes, Rex has hundreds of times the brainpower, but he also has hundreds of time the potential for panic. And, since none of his changeling have any experience fighting another magic user, let alone a dark one, 850 x 0 = 0.
Also, it took two alicorns just to seal Sombra away. Rex's fear is justified.
Don't worry, his panic won't last too long.
Awesome new story pic.
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Thanks!
This story is basically one giant roleplay. Nice.
I just tried to comprehend Four Dimensional space.
MY GOD IT HURTS MY BRAIN!
I think I get it though
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