As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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For the question concerning the mafia or politics, a wise young Latina girl from a taco shell commercial once said: "why not both?"
I hope something is gonna happen soon. The story has been really boring for last few chapters.
Politics are mafia so whats all the fuss about?
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Damn. Is the pacing too slow? Not funny enough? More action? What would make it more fun for you?
Mafia or politics?
The answer is easy, both!
I follow the trend of my fellow bronies by saying: Do Both !
By the way, you screwed up the numbers in your author notes.
3662433
Thank you. I fixed that!
3662437
No problem.
I'm suspecting that Canterlot actually exploded in cheers and not in some crazy changeling magic burst.
This is still awesome but you're being too slow with these chapters now And I'm going to get behind the "both" option on the mafia vs politics thing
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I was being literal. Chrysalis was holding a remote detonator.
Politics...always go for politics
3662506 In that case this should be the end of the fic perhaps with an epilogue about how Twi and Cady are now stuck with Rex who doesn't know what happened to Chrysalis.
Abot the song. Personally I think it turned out great. Although the timing was a little off because all the syllables didn't match up, but it was still very good.
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You stole my comment, yet I love you, somehow with either all or none of the homo.
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How about no. Why would Chrissy blow herself up?
So is the writing challenge different from the 700 word thing?
Mafia
3662376 All of the above. Pacing is almost ok, but the dialogue is boring as hell. You are just retelling same ting as told before in form of a dialogue. Also the most interesting part of this is a retelling of the show, witch I have already seen, so there is noting new or funny/exciting.
3663827 Well she was in Canterlot, and Canterlot exploded, so um... I dunno why, but apparently she did?
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Yes. It is two separate challenges. The first is under 700 words, but the second will be explained later.
Politics. A weird bug from another world can't be worse then the guys we have now.
3667949 Agreed, indefinitely.
Canterlot exploded. Yes folks you heard right, exploded. Just make sure your not facing the explosion or your not a bad ass