As Earth and Equestria are drawn closer together, Gatekeepers connecting to their other-world counterpart start to appear. This is the story of Rex, bound to Chrysalis as a Gatekeeper, and his quest for survival as a changeling on Earth.
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Such Stanley Parable. Many office.
Great chapter! I'm almost done with my first one, so I'll send you the link when it's complete.
Hypothetically threaten to murder your negotiating partners... brilliant. You'd think that after Dave's murder he would be more sensitive to other's emotions, or at least realize that the nature of Equestria means that ponies aren't used to the idea of murder as a topic of the day. I hope the princesses figure out the difference between their worlds before they decide Rex is an unrepentant ass. Which he kind of is sometimes.
okay one: oh crap theres a discord now 2: telling twi to look at her mentors books oh boy i cant wait to read about that 3: lol how much do i owe for three years of late fees
Brick Jokes are the best kind of jokes.
I am picturing a self-fulfilling prophecy. Discord doesn't want to cease to exist but knows he's the father of oblivion, and knows it's coming unless something is done. So in his efforts to prevent it, he inevitably actually CAUSES it, thus bringing about Oblivion. If he'd done nothing, it wouldn't have happened. That's what I'm predicting at least.
As to last chapter, nothing wrong with artistic license. It was certainly different, but not in a bad way. Although chapters such as that I would suggest not doing regularly. Every once and a while is fine, too often might only make things more confusing.
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There's probably a 15% chance you will ever see a chapter like that again... But damn, that was fun to write. Maybe a supplementary blog post or something.
4016316 This story is definitely one of my all-time favorites, keep it up, man!
Also, now that I know that there is a Chekhov's Gun and a Red Herring in this chapter, I will probably be spending an hour looking for the 'gun' but will probably find the 'Herring' ...
Curse you...
I do to. Keep thees chapter coming. I need More!
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Uhhhhh... You really need to read what you wrote. I think you meant "coming," which means "arriving." Instead, you wrote "cumming"...
No, I refuse to ejaculate on my computer to type this story. You have no idea how hard I'm laughing right now... Because I'm not. It's much too awkward.
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I am sorry when I use the wrong words but homonym do catch me from time to time. I do hope I haven't offended you.
Dragonfox
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Nah, I'm not offended. It was just really, really weird sounding.
Anyway, I'm glad you like my story; you are one of my more regular commentators. after all. I'm almost finished with chapter 50. it needs about 600 more words and to be edited, then I will post it.
So John De Lancie is actually Discord in disguise?
Don't worry Disco, I'll help! Just let me grab the IDTT and an auto-shotgun.
So Rex decides to start off negotiations by hypothetically threatening Sunbutt's student, then go in to detail about it? You'd think he would know not to do that, but oh well. It is funny seeing ponies squirm, though.
You are evil.
DISCORD! I'm howlin' at the moon!
Awesome chapter, kinda ruins my whole argument with Beneath the shade and all but still, awesome.
And I called it with him sending changelings in, even if I was wrong with the quantity. So I didn't completely screw it up!
I really do love how Rex has seemed to finally take up the mantle of 'king' in this last few chapters. And you really do capture the hive mind perfectly. Rex no longer has just one body he is quite literally more than one person, and I feel it's portrayed perfectly in your writing.
Anyways: BUCK DISCORD I WANT MOAR CHAPTERS!
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You have the perfect profile picture for that comment.
And yes, I know.
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Rex is an idiot when it comes to politics. Unfortunately, that is more of an author flaw than character flaw; I'm an idiot when it comes to politics. I have a tendency to speak my mind, regardless of whether or not the situation requires me to shut up.
But, it can be played for drama...
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The current chapter that I'm typing just crossed 6500 words and it's not done yet. Trying to conclude it, but there are things that need to be addressed.