This is pretty much a re-post of this request: https://www.fimfiction.net/group/924/i-just-want-a-comment/thread/449503/trying-to-figure-out-what-went-wrong-with-this-thing

I'm looking for some feedback on a story:

TA Fading Mirage of Friendship

• MLP: FiM
• Comedy
• Slice of Life
• Tragedy

Twilight has everything going for her. She is an Element of Magic, has loyal friends, and now she's become the princess of the whole Equestria. It's like a dream come true. Too bad, all dreams must come to an end...

• Death
• Twilight
• Main 6

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This thing got almost no traction, and I'm trying to figure out why. I tried reading and re-reading, listening, and re-listening, but... it seems fine to me. I'm at a loss...

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Hey there!

As it so happens, today is my birthday.

And so, in a subversion of the usual tradition, I figured I'd give a gift to you all.

The thing is, when it comes to writing, I tend to be VERY sporadic. I'll have one idea, work on that for a bit, then get a second idea and work on that for a bit, and then I'll want to work on the first idea again, and then I’ll get a THIRD idea, and it just kinda spirals from there.

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Hello again! Been way too long, hasn't it?

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In an earlier post, years ago by now I am certain, I discussed some other story ideas I wanted to try out. One of these was what I called "A Ratio Approaching One," where certain scenes/episodes of FiM were re-imagined in an Equestria where the ratio of mares to stallions was closer to 1:1. A different take from the usual Rule 63 story where it's all flipped for everyone. The main point was to explore the different social dynamics that would be brought about if only some of the cast were born

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I have been wondering this for a long time now, and I'm sorry to say that I still don't know the answer to this question:

Should I continue making Morning Meir stuff?

Morning was my first original character for a storyline and when I first made her I loved everything about her, and was invested in her story. And I still am! But the question is....well, is anyone else?

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Hiya, lovely peeps!

February 2023 has barely started and I already wrote seven blogs and one 3k-word story! I am on fire, baby!

Alright, so welcome to today’s story:A Study of Smart & Social

(Long title, I know. Longest one I have, actually.)

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If you've read at least a couple of Unhinged entries, I would be much obliged if you'd consider taking a moment to provide some feedback.

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If [OPEN], I am accepting new requests. If [CLOSED], I am working on other things (check back later )

If you follow me, then you are likely aware of my ongoing review series. In order to mix things up a little, I am now taking requests for stories to review. Like everything in life, there are some caveats:
*Only request reviews for one of your own stories.

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