The mature version of my story "Ready for Commitment" is now available. In the original, it went straight from Fluttershy and Colgate arriving at her cottage after their big date where it is implied that they had a raunchy night before breaking the news of their engagement to Fluttershy's friends and Colgate's younger sister Lyra.
Just taking this oppertunity to wish you all a Happy Halloween and update you on my progress with the next chapter.
I must admit to being one of those bronies,I view them not as ponies but as people. I do not think in terms of a harem. One woman is plenty enough. I would drive myself into the grave trying to give my everything to everyone.
1. Princess Luna (obviously)
Me, writing this meme at 4am
Yeah, yeah, yeah.
I was editing a story by Chapped and I noticed that he kept using tags around mouths and teeth: "she grinned", "her lips upturned", that kinda thing. So at some point, say, 4am, I was like Hey, what if I wrote a small story that just went into so much insane detail about teeth?
So that's what I did!
Today I'm here to tell everyone that I've got a new story out! It's something that I've been working on for a little while, inspired by a thread that I created several weeks ago, where site users were encouraged to vote on five characters to appear in a story together!
I have made some progress on chapter 4 but at this moment i'm stumped. Ch4 is being written a bit differently since it's the first chapter with Colgate being around for more then a hooffull of paragraphs..
But i'm not sure if I should use this method for the entire chapter, or only part of it.
It took a lot of re-writes, but the next chapter of Family is finally done and has been published.
Warning: there are references to darker themes, including suicide. I apologise if this offends anyone, I may need to up the rating in future, but I am hoping not to, as the next chapters will be lighter.
As a heads up, my editors, dukesofhazzardftw and Feo Takakari are moving on to other things, so if you feel up to picking up where they left off then send me a message.
Hey all,
So, my last story was, bad. Let's be honest it was pretty phoned in. Main reason? I was about 3 tall glasses of whiskey in and pumped it out in a single night. No proofreading, or anything of the sort.
That being said, I've gone over the chapter, cleaned things up. Somehow added around 1k more words. Simply adding dialect, or descriptions.
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