A Warning before you read.

It took a lot of re-writes, but the next chapter of Family is finally done and has been published.

Warning: there are references to darker themes, including suicide. I apologise if this offends anyone, I may need to up the rating in future, but I am hoping not to, as the next chapters will be lighter.

As a heads up, my editors, dukesofhazzardftw and Feo Takakari are moving on to other things, so if you feel up to picking up where they left off then send me a message.

Anyway, enough talking, go and read, then comment, it really does help.

Comments

[ferret]

Seems an odd thing to introduce, honestly. I had thought he was getting better, and the Apples have done nothing but good for his life, and his state of mind. Suicide? Maybe in a flashback, but it's not exactly fitting with the whole "recovery from disaster" thing currently going on. Not that a random pony can't come in who's suicidal, but it would seem really arbitrary, and jarring. Well, I'm just glad for another chapter to read, about being pony and their world and all.

The last thing I'd be offended by is suicide though, just saying. When it's played serious, it's horrifying, and when it's played for laughs, it's hilarious.