Fifth Chapter of Tirek/G1 Ponies origin story is up! See how ponies became self-aware this chapter!
Fifth Chapter of Tirek/G1 Ponies origin story is up! See how ponies became self-aware this chapter!
Does anyone actually know where the tree came from? Well I had what seems to be an epiphany, The seventh element IS the Tree of Harmony! Boom! And it just might be planted on the sight of Sunset Shimmers burial... Soo, yup that is where I think is the Seventh element of Harmony went.
I really don't like the explanation for the Tree given in Shadow Play, Part 2. IMO, it reduces the artefact and removes much of the mystery and wonder for it. Instead, I find myself preferring another explanation. One much like this (with apologises to Arthur C Clarke):
Call it the Tree of Harmony.
Hey, everycreature!
Got some new artwork for A Second Chance, once again courtesy of LordShrekzilla. Once again, the man outdid himself
This is not a sign of me returning to fanfic writing just yet, just a little something to show that I'm not giving up on my stories.
Behold, Mothra, Queen of the Monsters!
Word to my followers and anypony who may see this: Time to read Fluttershy Monster in Me to see how scaring ponies in the Scare Master really affected Fluttershy!
Now, the conclusion of this episode was a bit weak - Twilight's problem of lacking direction in life was miraculously resolved by her realizing her destiny was to spread the Magic of Friendship (TM).
Regardless of whether you loved or hated Magical Mystery Cure and alicorn Twilight when you first saw it, it was still the Season 4 premiere that followed (Princess Twilight, Pts. 1 & 2) that made the overall story viable in the long term.
It's only two days anymore until Episode 3 of Season 9 airs and when I looked at the teaser screenshot that was released for the episode, I discovered something very exciting and unexpected about the Student Six' possible future role in Equestria.
I'll talk about that below the page break, to not spoiler anyone more than necessary.
New chapter is done. Maybe I'm in a weird mood but it just reads strangely to me. Can't tell if it's fine or the writing really is weird...
Chapter's done and I hope you enjoy it!
Holy crap this chapter took more work than chapter 8, despite being like half the size. I used to have this nasty issue of glossing over something that I didn't feel like explaining at the moment or planning on explaining later then forgetting. I didn't take good chapter notes as I went along.
*spoilers if you haven't read chapter 9*
Honestly, there wasn't a whole lot wrong with this chapter. Mostly some bland descriptions and not setting the mood properly.
Okay this time I admit I abused the "I did this..." rule a tone. There were other random sections where I knew I had a purpose for them at the time, but after rereading it, I had no idea what they were reffering to. I spruced up some of the descriptions, as a lot of it felt kind of...basic. I added in more emotion and tried to really drive home hoe the current predicament was psychologically messing with the Taraskans.
Hope you all enjoy and as always, thanks for being a fan!
Aaaaand there we go! This chapter was a little more tricky. I had some confusing numbers in the squads and made some writing errors. Also there was some context confusion about who was doing what. not sure if anyone noticed or cared, but I did. Tried to make it a lot more gut-wrenching and heart-breaking.
SPOILERS if you haven't read past this chapter.
Okay so my ending plot points are just...super messed up and I have to fix them. There's a lot of " Situation A needs to happen so person B can save person A, but person B can't get there until situation B and AAAAAAAHHHHH!
I thought I had resolved this, but when I started writing the chapter, I realized there's a few vital details I missed and changing ONE changes like three others so I'm taking time to figure it out.
Okay...it's almost here. I'm not gonna give numbers, but I'm so close to marking KOTD book 1 as completed. Like I'm on the home stretch where a lot of chapters are prewritten scenes from back when I first started writing KOTD. This point until the end is planned out storywise, with plenty of room for me to add new stuff. I'm so excited but a tad sad to see book 1 be done and over with. With the next chapter, I'm gonna crack down and edit a few more chapters.
Okay so I found like...two errors in this one. There wasn't anything wrong with it, and it's been that way for the last two chapters, so I think the worst is over. My main focus though, was to lengthen the chapter. It was sitting at a cringy 1600 words give or take. So I added about another 600. There's more plotting and predicting, as well as our heroes learning more about the world they're in. I think it looks a lot better, and I'm rather happy I decided to edit it tonight. My work keyboard
Have I been working on King of the Dead? Yes. Has it all been on the next chapter? No. The next chapter is like 90% of the way finished, but I keep getting these huge urges to work on some of the final chapters, which in my opinion, are going to be super badass. Thank you for being patient!