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Jan
25th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #18 — Bitter-Sweetie · 7:41am Jan 25th, 2016

Jun
6th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #27 — Palimpsest · 11:17pm Jun 6th, 2016

Jan
21st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #16 — So You've Just Slept With Your Best Friend · 12:42am Jan 21st, 2016

Aug
25th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #7 — Lost and Never Found · 3:10am Aug 25th, 2015

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Today’s story relies on not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is incredibly blunt, I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.


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Oct
31st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #12 — Just A Simple Story · 8:28pm Oct 31st, 2015

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I don’t like catering to holidays, but here’s a review for Halloween anyway. Any time is a good time to review Dark fic.


Title: Just A Simple Story

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Jan
25th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #37 — Sister Solstice · 11:39am Jan 25th, 2020

Feb
10th
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #30 — Gnosis · 7:59am Feb 10th, 2017

Feb
12th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #22 — Changeling Courtship Rituals · 3:29am Feb 12th, 2016

Jun
26th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #28 — Indigo Hooves · 4:01am Jun 26th, 2016

Nov
13th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #13 — Why Don't You Tell Them? · 6:42am Nov 13th, 2015

May
5th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #26 — The Hays Code · 2:24am May 5th, 2016

Sep
8th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #8 — The Sun's Torment · 12:57am Sep 8th, 2015

Jan
27th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #19 — Old Friends · 10:12am Jan 27th, 2016

Jul
22nd
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #44 — The Rise Of Chaos · 10:24am Jul 22nd, 2020

We finally return to my series of critiques about the ISII entrants. We continue down my list of “finalists”: stories which I considered awarding points to. I would like to stress, however, that I only ranked them because FanOfMostEverything made me; they are all excellent.

I've suspected for a while that I would not be able to critique every story in the contest. At least not in long form. I suppose we'll cross that bridge when we get there.

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Dec
21st
2019

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #33 — Fang and Flame · 11:21pm Dec 21st, 2019

Jan
30th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #38 — Miles to Go · 7:49pm Jan 30th, 2020

Dec
30th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #29 — The Mage and the Filly Fair · 6:31am Dec 30th, 2016

Apr
24th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #25 — Dash Academy (Webcomic) · 5:20am Apr 24th, 2016

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At the time of this review, the story is on the final chapter, but not complete.


Title: Dash Academy (also hosted on the user’s deviantart page)

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Jul
19th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #3 — Lies to Foals · 12:37am Jul 19th, 2015

Jan
28th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #20 — The Savage Way · 10:20am Jan 28th, 2016

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