Can anybody judge my fanfiction, please? · 10:27pm Nov 7th, 2019
Sorry to bother anybody, but I need your opinion on what I've written so far. If you have opinions or advice on what needs to be improved, let me know.
Sorry to bother anybody, but I need your opinion on what I've written so far. If you have opinions or advice on what needs to be improved, let me know.
Note: This blog was inspired by one of my favorite authors on FiMFiction: Johng117
Unknown POV
Darkness...
Bubbling...
That's the first thing I see and hear at my birth, if you can call it that...
Hello everyone, for those of you who don't know me, my name is RockinBro and I have been asking questions about a story I want to post on here and I've almost figured out everything that I need to know. I would like to thank one user, The Descendant, for helping me and answering my questions. I hope to get my story written soon. If anyone here is very good with editing and knowing where all punctuations go, mostly semicolons and regular colons, that would be of great help.
So yes, I have seen My Little Pony: A New Generation. Saw it the day it dropped on Netflix and the only reason I haven't talked about it sooner is because lazy and busy, I guess.
I'm a month late to this, but here's my take on MLP: TNG (or whatever we're calling it). I was underwhelmed the first time I watched it, but I gave it a second chance, and it started to grow on me. I think my mistake was watching Raya and the Last Dragon just a few days before the G5 movie. Both movies have similar themes and plots, but they handle them differently. More on that later.
I really really hope that because her alicorn form in glowing and transparent is because it's fake and temporary.
If not then I'm pretty sure it's just writers probably going lazy and choosing a very easy route. They probably didn't want to create a whole arc/seasons of Sunny becoming worthy of becoming an alicorn so they just gave it to her.
My most popular story on fanfiction.net (Observational Skills) would be the 4th-most viewed story ever here. Granted, different site and different fandom (Naruto vs. MLP), but I suppose lack of potential readership is another reason I've never posted a fic here - or even ever finished writing a pony story.
and it looks like we're going to see a familiar face
Okay anybody remember what I said on my last blog My first and only fan fiction Story when I said "I'll probably be one of those one hit wonder people or something." Yeah that age poorly because I made Another story with a little help so I'll be posting the story very soon I just need to make sure everything is okay the spelling and everything so stay tuned.
So, Sunset Shimmer plays video-games and is a comic-book artist...
... awesome!
For me, at least, I want to see more of Sunny's past explored, and more information on her father's research. I like these new characters a lot, but I wanna know more about Sunny the most.
What are your thoughts?
I have a quick question. Minor spoilers. But should write the flashbacks or have characters talk about or hint them. Let me know. Thanks.
…that we as a species have evolved to the point where we could produce a character as pure and adorable as this cute little peanut.
And I'm still working on the next chapter!
Note: The main review contains several spoilers. However, I'll be putting a shorter review at the end that contains no spoilers.
The Plot
One of my favorite scenes from the movie
Before ya ask me to design a character please read my terms here. For those that need help on a project (a comic, fanfic, animation, or game), and ya are in need of a character designer please feel free to DM me. I'll design a character for free, and I'll design characters for normal MLP content and horror content! These are not regular requests. A person must have a project (the ones mentioned above) in order for me to agree to design a character for them. I'll design both AU versions of
(Courtesy of Games TV)