Paul's Thursday Reviews CXV · 8:52pm May 10th, 2018
What’s up, folks? You all hanging in there?
What’s up, folks? You all hanging in there?
Hey again, sorry for the delayed blog post. I release so many chapters, its hard to keep to the energy to write these. I knew you must be tired of hearing these dumb excuses. Anyway, Chapter 10 marks the end of Forbidden Symphony! I feel I may have made a few missteps while writing it, but overall I am very happy with it. I feel I have really improved as a writer since the early days. I won't spoil what happens, and I hope you enjoy it.
While many Nicktoons make it to air, there are some that do not. These were publicly announced in press releases earlier, but were cancelled before production began. We will mix the obvious with cartoons that I'll bet some of you didn't know were pitched to Nickelodeon.
As promised a little while ago, let us now talk about the release schedule for "Journeys and Destinations: A Friendship for Eternity", the spiritual successor of "Princess Flurry Heart, Destroyer of Worlds!"!
Apple Bloom was hoping the success would continue to pass all these potions that were a result of trying to get her cutie mark on to somepony else.
This sentence..... I'm in love with it. I'm in love with it and I want to make many foals with it. This is the most elegant sentence I have ever written.
It conveys excellently four different things:
Been a bit remiss in doing reviews since the last writeoff, so I figured I’d climb back on the wagon today and catch up on some of the stories I’d missed.
Or rather, we have to change and adapt now. Recently, Lemon Crumble has done a great, heroic deed for Equestria. But this is not the only surprise we received in the Season 9 Finale.....
Today, it is time..... Good things come to those who wait and if you waited until now, a very good thing is coming your way to reward you.
But there will also be a storm crossing your path, because today, I will start to tell the tale of Tempest Shadow's journey..... A journey that lasted for twenty years and that brought forth one of the biggest threats in Equestria's long history of villains, monsters and darkness.
Sorry for this late blog post. Sometimes I get lazy and don't want to do these. I am terrible at this social media thing. I promise not to slip so badly again. Anyway, I like Scavenger taking the center focus. He's turned into an interesting character. His stand is pretty cool. It's a bit basic when it comes to its abilities, but it has a lot of utility and is not to be underestimated. Why does it have that power specifically? I wanted something very different from Break's power and I thought
Sorry for the late blog. Again, no real excuse but I have been a bit busy with life. I'm training for a half-marathon and that plus work and writing keeps me a little busy. Anyway, I didn't really plan for Robin and his crew to reenter the story at this point, but it made too much sense not to. I am trying to bring everything together after letting some plot points slip away from me, but hey we are about to have a full on stand battle that's exciting. Expect the next chapter very soon.
Hello again. Another big update. I must be writing too quickly because it's hard to keep up these blog post with the crazy amount of chapter updates I'm doing. And chapter 38 of Fallout Equestria is almost ready to be released. I just need to edit it.
Chapter 5 of "A Storm on the Horizon of the Arcane World" will be released a week from today and that means it's time for Teaser #2!
In today's teaser, Fizzlepop learns something about her mysterious rescue from the pony who saved her:
"A Storm on the Horizon of the Arcane World" returns in two days, this time for good and with a reliable, monthly update schedule! You can read the details about its return below!
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And here we are, this story baby is finally back on track! This time for good, "A Storm on the Horizon of the Arcane World" will continue with monthly updates and a new chapter on the first Sunday of every month now!
Chapter 1 has gotten a rewrite since its initial release in August; it's almost 1,000 words longer, the old scenes are expanded, there are a few new scenes and many boring sentences have been replaced with more creative, more exciting and more innovative sentences!
A month has passed since the return of the story and Chapter 4 and now it is time for Chapter 5, "Comfort", to release!
In the previous chapter, Fizzlepop's exploration of the outside world experienced an abrupt, and painful, interruption. But not all is lost and Fizzlepop finds rescue by the hooves of a mysterious pony..... Who is this pony? Where is Fizzlepop now? And how far away is she from her chosen destination, her cloud paradise in the sky?
What "A Storm on the Horizon of the Arcane World" needs the most is more advertisement and more awareness that it exists. From now on, I'll make monthly reminders for each new chapter in the week after release for those who might not have noticed it, as part of a strategy to promote the story and get it the attention it deserves.
So, here is a reminder for the release of Chapter 4, "A World That Wants Her Dead":
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It's risky business, going out your door.
And here I am, doing it again!
Just finished packing, and I'm gonna catch my flight out in a few hours, and then, day after tomorrow, it's Ciderfest time, baby!
And hey, if you haven't heard, I'm gonna be a Community Guest this year![/preen]
It's almost time. Just a few hours more and Chapter 5 of "A Storm on the Horizon of the Arcane World" releases, at 10:00 PM EST! And to shorten the rest of the wait just a tiny bit, here is your final teaser for this month!
Fizzlepop Berrytwist still has a very important destination. And her new company might be able to tell her how to get there. Unfortunately, Fizzlepop doesn't receive the answer she has hoped for.....
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Only one day left until the release of Chapter 4 of "A Storm on the Horizon of the Arcane World" anymore!
You probably thought Teaser #3 wouldn't happen, as I had to pay tribute to sleep that consumed nearly my entire Friday after working on a chapter for "Letters to Cozy Glow" during a sleepless Thursday night and an equally sleepless Friday morning, but you were mistaken, for this story cannot live without teasers!
Today is Release Day for Chapter 4 of "A Storm on the Horizon of the Arcane World"! Only a little over 10 hours anymore until the story returns to its monthly updates, on every first Sunday of a new month!
When it looks the darkest, some help comes for Fizzlepop by an unexpected ally and she gains new energy to go on further:
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