I Fixed It! · 4:31am May 21st, 2018
The "It" in question being the earlier chapters of Desert Spice.
The "It" in question being the earlier chapters of Desert Spice.
Ok so chapter 1 of my new story Thr Case of the Broken Quill just went up and it has 4 dislikes and 1 like so I just have one question if you have read it. Is it that bad and what should i do in the upcoming chapters to make it better? Or is this story just shit and doomed to fail?
Hello my dear today marks another year
Time goes on but the message is still clear
The time we spent together brought us a joy that was so sincere
Why did it have to end why am I left her alone and filled with fear
Your voice still echoing in my mind
Burning your image into every picture that I find
Your smile still bright and shinning
Still bright and shining deeply in my mind
I still remember the day it all began
That magical day we spent in the orchard hand in hand
Yes, I'm about to begin proofreading and editing all five chapters of the Sean's Equestrian Adventures story.
Now in require help, so if you can please comment and I'll invite you all to google docs so you can help. Everyone who assists will be given a thank you in the Epilogue as well as have their names put into the story description. I'll be doing this till around 4:30 am Eastern Standard Time so I encourage you all to join.
My heart's a stereo
It beats for you, so listen close
Hear my thoughts in every no-o-o-te
Make me your radio
And turn me up when you feel low
This melody was meant for you
Just sing along to my stereo
Gym Class Heroes baby!
If I was just another dusty record on the shelf
Would you blow me off and play me like everybody else?
If I asked you to scratch my back, could you manage that?
Like yea [scratched], check it Travie, I can handle that
Pardon my dust; it has been a while since I last released a review set.
Hopefully, at least one of these stories will have been worth the wait.
Today’s stories:
Raven by SaintChoc
Friend of a Not-So-Different Stripe by Pascoite
Life Amongst the Living by Kamikakushi
The Contest by Cold in Gardez
Together by Silver Tongue
(WIP)
Guards, and friends, and Diamond Dogs, oh my!
Ok so a very personal story just went up. Its about a sensitive topic for both me and teens and kids everywhere. It brought back memeories i wish i had forgot. so yeah. I'm in a depressed mood now. On the upside the rarity clopfic will be done soon.
[Soft Singing]
All my life people have told me I was nothing
That my life was pointless with no meaning
That's when you came along and fucked me up more
I put up with your shit for six long years
Six years of this fucking hell
Now you're gone and my heart's in pieces
My mind bends and breaks at the thought of you
You’re a serpent of my hate
Now I lay here and Accept my fate.
[Screaming]
Fuck you and everything you stand for.
Now that you're gone my life has forever changed
Wassup Its ya boy Tempo here although now I go by Either Sword, Or Radi. Accompanying my new profile is a picture provided showing of How Radiant looks. and while his wings cover his cutie mark at that angle its Two Swords clashing with glowing blades and sparkles around the outside. So ya Just given y'all a quick update Peace.
Hey everyone my new glasses cam today so now i can write and type better than ever so over the next few days I plan on releasing the last two clop fics in Rom-Clop Series 1. To commemorate the completion of the series and my much anticipated return. I changed my profile avatar to reveal the "Real" Radiant Sword. So please enjoy my up coming stories and I look foreword to talking to you all. Radiant has Returned.
Luna's Loyal Servant,
-Radiant Sword
The Evil prince charged at Luna. In her weakened state she was unable to defend herself. As he galloped closer she closed her eyes ready to accept her fate. A loud piercing sound resonates in her ears. After not feeling anything for a few seconds she opens her eyes. The sight before her breaks her to the very core. Before her stands the human as he stares at her with blood running from his mouth as the prince thrusts his horn deeper. He smiles before the horn is forcefully ripped out as blood
It was a beautiful Friday afternoon as you put your books away in your locker and head out the front of the school. You always loved the weekend partying, drinking, and video games was a normal weekend for you and your friends. On your way home you pass a telephone poll with a flyer stapled to it that reads “Big Yard Sale at thirteen Forty-Eight E. Clinton Rd, This weekend Only.” Curious at what they were selling you pull out your phone to check your bank account. Thankfully your paycheck came
my dad is threatening to check every single thing ive done using our house's wifi ever and if he does I am practically dead
I'm gonna lay low for a bit and probably not go online at all just as a head up
hopefully this all blows over and I end up alright but if not I want you guys to stay safe and know I care about you
and in case of an emergency I might give my log in to an irl friend so she can keep you guys updated
thanks for sticking with me!!!
Ok so after reading my most recent Romantic Equestria Story a very helpful reader pointed out that its paced to fast so I'm gonna rename the story as something else and re write a lighter hearted Fluttershy story. Don't work for those who like Th Color Pink I will not be deleting it. I just won't be associating it with the Romantic Equestria Series so stay tuned for the newest installment The Rainbow Dash Story in which you the reader are a Josh gates/ Nathan Drake kinda charecter since Rainbow
Cat Litter Alternatives
I've been trying out some homemade cat litter alternatives since adopting a little stray cat named Boots. I will be testing out some ideas I found on the internet. I will let you know which one works best.
Here is a list of alternative cat litters I have found by looking on various websites and forums.
Hello everyone, just posting to advertise the fact that one of my friends here on Fimfic is in need of some art commission work. I can say that she's a really good artist and the work she does is well worth the cost, whatever that may be.
Here's an example of her work and here's a link to where you can find details if you're interested.
Ok so I'm wanting to start my own mlp fanfic web-comic however i need an 2 Artists, another story-border, and a proofreader. This isn't an urgent project just something i wanted to try so if anyone is interested please pm me for Inquires and other questions. The web-comic will be mature...ish
No time like the present to review more stories, eh?
I actually read so many stories I had to shuffle a couple stories out of this review set into the next one.
Today’s stories:
The Mystery of the Disappearing Siblings by Jay-The-Brony
Palimpsest by NorrisThePony
Best Friends, Too by shortskirtsandexplosions
Hatred by SapphireLibra3
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