Last time, on the OC Apprentice. The two finalists: Coalstone and Reneigah discovered presents on their beds from Gob. Here, they open them.
Now, I present, part one of the OC Apprentice Finale!
Before we get started, I want to explain how blogs like these will play out. It'll be written somewhat like an episode, with both submissions from each team being posted here for you all to read and finally a bit written by me to tie the two pieces together. In this blog, it will describe each character meeting one another and arriving at GOB Estate with GOB himself explaining how things will work for the contest. I hope you enjoy it.
#Shrekt's submission:
I used to LOVE Reno 911 a few years back. So did my mom, so I'd watch it with her... Because I love her and I'm a mama's boy, you got a problem with that?
Anyway, does anybody else remember watching this show? Please tell me I'm not on a lonely island here.
It's been quite a while hasn't it? I'll admit I never thought I'd be saying this once more, but I feel as though you all deserve to know what's going on. As you all now, I've been contemplating leaving the writing game on FimFiction to focus more on my personal projects. Well, that's still true, however, I have had a change of heart recently. I''' still be writing stories for FimFiction, however, they'll come out longer from one another than usual since I still want to work on my own stuff. So
Recently and unfortunately, certain people, I won't say any names, got into a heated argument resulting in one dropping out due to hateful words being traded. The person who said those harsh words was dealt with and has been punished. Prior to this, another player has dropped out of the contest willingly. Gumball2 has left the game. The list below consists of the remaining competitors and their OCs.
Cambiato
(First Spark)
The Fan Without a Face
(Coalstone)
Last time, on the OC Apprentice; the contestants finally arrived to the GOB Manor and eventually met GOB himself. Coalstone tried to attack the God but was instead kicked to the curb. GOB gave them all the scoop on what will be happening in the future and wished the players luck. Since then, the contestants have been getting comfy in their new home. Some more comfy than others…
#Shrekt's Submission.
Okay, since I can't find the submissions sent to me and frankly I have zero energy to go looking for them, I'm just gonna recap what happened.
While her submission was probably the most entertaining, Cambiato COULD have made off with a win, but has decided to drop out of the contest.
The Fan Without a Face easily came in second with a pretty impressive show of his work AND a great character arch along with a deepening relationship between Coalstone and Sentinel.
Where we last left off, the contestants were turned back into children and were sent back to high school as freshmen. All except one; Nova Blaze. Here, the five children reenact The Breakfast Club.
The freshman sat in silence as they all sat rigid in their seats. The “detention room” was empty, save for them, and was all too quiet in general. The noise was broken quickly as the sound of squeaking shoes could be heard coming towards them.
Fact #1: While I can't sing high notes, I'm quite alright at singing in general. I can hold a tune as some put it. It makes for use whenever I'm singing along with some of my favorite Disney songs.
XxX_Illuminati_XxX's Submission:
The roles were assigned. Sentinel was the guard due to his normal job and experience in the matter. Coalstone would ensure no one was caught with a counterfeit pass. That left Reneighah to pull the cart.
For a while now I've been talking about some personal projects such as "Three Doors Down" and "Cleo the Wanderer" and how I want to focus more on those instead of pony fics. This is very true and I'm not changing my mind on that. However, there'll be something that'll take up what little time I have for pony fics... Sorta. Depending on what happens and how I'll be scheduling the whole deal. When I say I want everybody to know who Walter Stummelson and Hannah Gotstein are, I mean that. Which is
Team Illuminati's submission:
The team was sent to a small town in the human world nestled between a couple mountains. A beautiful rural town with friendly locals. GOB had told them that the reading would be at the town’s library.
The three entered the building to see the children waiting around a chair. They looked eager to hear the story they were promised.
“Alright, Sentinel you’re reading right?” Reneighah asked.
XxX_Illuminati_XxX's Submission:
It was Sentinel's turn to sing. He had thought of this for a long time. What to sing was easy.
Something casual? Nah, no one want’s casual. Something Classic? Good, shouldn’t rule it out. Something hip? No, by Celestia I hate hipsters. Something…..that says, powerful but something ponies like. I’ve got it!
Here are the team's break challenge submissions. Enjoy.
#Shrekt's Submission:
It had been a while since Golden had gotten a good night’s rest. His worry over the meeting was overshadowed by the happiness he felt for his team’s victory. Despite his joy or rather because of it when they returned to the mansion he went straight to his room for rest. He assumed his teammates did the same.
Once again, this was a solo challenge, and each player submitted their work.
Coalstone's Submission
“Once again I find myself in a shitty situation on the cusp of this ridiculous game. And just after I was humiliated in front of my teammates, friends and everyone else.” Coalstone grumbled to himself as he tried to reign in his infamous temper, whilst seated at a bus station with a stack of 100 game consoles bearing GOBB’s name and insignia.
Veggie slumped down against a wall of boxes. She was lost. No, she was more than lost. This wasn't a basement, this was a storage unit if anything! This was more like a warehouse than a basement! It would take years for a group of the best explorers to make their way out of this horrid maze. Throughout her journey, Veggie found some interesting things. Antique weapons, old books from almost every era in history and artwork from some of the greatest artists Earth has seen. But all her
Here, the winners of the pre-challenge for the $50 dollar head-start will be announced.
XxX_Illuminati_XxX's Submission:
I, the almighty Thunderbolt Sentinel, was chosen to bat. Given my experience as a guard using polearms, athletic lifestyle, and most of all, my teammates loss of magic, I’m the team’s best bet.
That’s what I kept telling myself as I approached the diamond.
I'll let Carl take it from here.
Don't let a 97 year old reviewer keep you from reading By Blood, by me. GodOfBBQ.
Carl does not reflect my personal thoughts. Also I know he's talking about the movie, just roll with it.
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