The Magician King by Lev Grossman
This is the sequel to The Magicians, which I read back in January. Spoilers for it follow.
The combat in chapter 35 was...well there were a few minor changes to make. This one was less on combat and more on consequences though.
Didn't change much in chapter 36. A few typos, changed some wording is all.
This chapter is kicking my ass. I'm so close to being done with it. It tells another part of a very familiar story in the MLP universe but from a different perspective. I didn't realize until I got to it, that there are a lot of questions I have. I'm filling them in, coming up with how I imagined things played out and why. I REALLY don't want to rewatch the episodes since I've seen them enough. All in all though, this chapter should be fun! Thanks again for being fans! Chapter should be ready
Tempest Shadow - badass
Grubber - lame
Storm King - banal
Capper - cool
Capt. Celaeno - incredible
Princess Skystar - eccentric
Queen Novo - useless
Songbird Serenade - inspirational
Trying to spruce up the long description. The short description was a friggin' nightmare, but I'm rather set on it given its extreme limitations. The long description though, I got like three pages dedicated to different variations of it. Currently, it feels like I'm spoonfeeding the reader and I hate it. I tried switching to a letter like
Well, the canadian basket case decided to “react” to something I wrote, but instead of just focusing on whatever he decided to use it as an excuse for some “promo” to show how he is in fact totally owning me in some regard. All while also confirming by accident once more to me, that adults who enjoy Power Rangers are fucking mental.
Rating Scale:
12/10—a complete masterpiece; flawless and outstanding
11/10—Excellent, near-perfect film
And seven years of me watching MLP semi-consistently. I am celebrating accordingly.
My Birthday is also in four days hehe.
Scene Rating Scale:
9/9: Flawless! Outstanding scene!
8/9: Great scene! Totally Rewatchable!
7/9: Pretty good. Not as perfect as I expected though.
6/9: Decent. Doesn’t ruin the movie/episode.
5/9: Mid.
4/9: Pretty bad. One of the weakest scenes of the movie/episode.
Greetings!
Well, tonight is the night, for some, the night has already passed, but for some us, the night is only just now arriving. 
I wanted to send a to thank you for all the watchers I have gained in the few months I've been here. Also thank you to all my readers who have found some light entertainment in my stories. 
NSFW WARNING: The explanation of this daydream contains descriptions of oral sex.
It's about a muscular anthro King Sombra sensually dancing naked with his arms up in a swimming pool at night. I watched him gyrating his hips and noticed his glorious physique that was completely drenched from the pool.
Time to end the Siege of the Crystal Empire. It's been a bumpy ride, now will it crash and burn and achieve lift and soar majestically?
Welcome to our 42nd blog post! And to celebrate, our newest story, "The King's Mice" has been launched!
OK I REALLY need your help! A few months back I read a story about a human who was adopted by the griffon king and queen. He is in a relationship with Gilda and had sex with a dragon named Ellie. He has a best friend named "Rush" and he was part of some elite griffon army but was discharged. The main antagonist is named somewhere along the lines of "Alvonich" but it's a bit longer than that. I believe the human's name was Xavier or something. Despite knowing all this I cant find the story
Not much to fix here except once again I being way too many sentences with "I did this". I spruced up some descriptions and completely erased entire sentences that were just...kind of awkward. It's nice rereading everything. I knew how it all looked in my head but it doesn't always come across that way, but this is how we learn isn't it? The size of this chapter kept me from editing it for quite some time. So I took tonight and made a thousand words worth of progress here and there and took
Just finished my edits for chapter 5. Added in an extra scene and changed around some wording. I'm starting to notice fewer and fewer mistakes. This chapter didn't have as many past-tense mistakes as usual.
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