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TPantyhose Warrior
Equestria Girls
Dark
Comedy
Drama
Wallflower Blush finds herself in a tight spot.
Fetish
Human
Sunset Shimmer
Wallflower Blush
Bad Dragon · 6k words · 13 27 · 453 views
TBad Dragon's Short Stories
MLP: FiM
Anthology
Got a minute? It will take you even less to read one of these unrelated short stories designed for instant reader’s gratification.
Spike
Bad Dragon · 10k words · 34 39 · 1k views
TZipp Wears a Furtight Bodysuit
MLP Gen 5
Romance
Drama
Zipp is forced to wear itchy, uncomfortable, clingy, entrapping, dumb fabric.
Second Person
Sunny Starscout
Zipp
Bad Dragon · 2k words · 40 16 · 1.1k views
EFlash Sentry Is Not a Hero
MLP: FiM
Comedy
Slice of Life
There comes a time when a Royal Guard can do more than just stand around. This is that time.
Pinkie
Celestia
Luna
Shining Armor
Flash Sentry
Bad Dragon · 4.4k words · 92 42 · 2.4k views
TForget Love
MLP: FiM
Romance
Drama
Tragedy
Despite being stripped of everything, the pony finds his true love and is about to marry her.
Sex
OC
Daring Do
Changelings
Bad Dragon · 2.6k words · 107 31 · 2.6k views
TSweetie Belle Gains a Soul
MLP: FiM
Adventure
Drama
Slice of Life
In her darkest hour, Sweetie Belle finds salvation, but it comes with a terrible curse.
Twilight
Rarity
Sweetie Belle
CMCs
Bad Dragon · 132k words · 178 45 · 6.7k views
TPrincess of Friendship
MLP: FiM
Drama
Tragedy
After Twilight’s stream of successes, she’s confident that nothing can go wrong. Is she due for a lesson?
Twilight
Spike
Main 6
Bad Dragon · 5.4k words · 290 46 · 7.9k views

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