• Published 5th Apr 2014
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Fallout: Equestria Unity - Shadow Fall



The wastes are a terrible place where many fall victim. Whether it is physical death, or the death of one's moral standing. This is something Destin has grown used to in the short while he's been out, but things are about to get worse.

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Comments ( 3 )

I think your class system is a little bit confusing.
I mean: E->A->C->F->Q?
Is there a reason for this "complicated" classes instead of A->B->C->D->Q?

Also, why does she barricade herself inside her room on her birthday and refuses to eat? I don't quite get that. I mean, she has this C-class friend and yeah... strange. You might clarify that.


Anyways, good chapter.
Great, another voice inside her head. Wonder how it will get along with Wrath and Pals. :coolphoto:

4280796 The reason it's like that is because (In my mind I was thinking this) E = Executives, A = Average (The normal ones), C = .... I don't remember why I used C, F = Failed (Essentially useless for anything besides test material), And I explained Q, quarantine. And he (It's still Destin) used to always get woken up early by his parents on his birthday so they could have a family breakfast before opening gifts. The absence of this early wake up is a reminder that his parents are dead. And his friend, Diction, is E class because he's a scientist. I think I may have edited out mentioning that, thinking that the later mention of Diction and his assistant would be enough to clarify. If you think the main character is a female, then I've actually succeeded in one aspect of the character. Destin is actually kinda feminine in a way. His body is more curvy like a mare's, and his voice is a little higher, though not too much.

well this gonna be intersting

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