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Why am I shipping Angel and Jack?
Amazing as usual! Though perhaps Angel uses the word "sweetie" too much (59 times this chapter)! Maybe use "dear" or something to add variety, though that's very minor :P
The "she" that was chased into the vally is rainbow dash it took me at least 2-3 seconds to figure out what you where trying to hint at.
"some of his nags and remove"
"some of his bags and remove"?
My enjoyment of this chapter was slightly sapped by me being sick. On the other hand, my anti-enjoyment of being sick was sapped by this chapter, so thanks. :)
Speaking of other stories, have I recommended Wasteland Bouquet to you before?
some of his nags and remove
So jack met my x?
Im not even a fourth of the way through the chapter and I can tell that jack is forming pony tendencies from the repaired part of his brain.
His brain is changing to become more like a pony.
Or actually wait no, I think I might be way off.
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Dunno, maybe because they have fun interactions, and there aren't many characters in this story with interesting personalities and interesting interactions between them flashed out yet?
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This may or may not be addressed soon ;p
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Dunno if that would be something Jack's great-great-grandfather could have dealt with, assuming we stick to FoE cannon that Rainbow hadn't been seen for 200 years and that griffons live about as long as ponies do; also, does Jack strike you as guy who would call Rainbow "bitch"? ;p
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Already corrected, thanks^^
Sorry to hear you are/were sick, hope you feel better now. Glad to hear this chapter sapped some of the anti-enjoyment you were feeling^^ Also I'm gonna assume your sickness impended your ability to spot mistakes, seeing how you only pointed out one ;p
Hm, it was in my "read later" list, so you might have; possibly before my over-a-year-long break between chapters 4 and 5, seeing how I don't really recall that... anyway, it looks promising, so I will definetly give it a read... after I find the time, finish Murky Number Seven and catch up with Heroes Anyway, thanks for reminding me of it
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Well, he did meet a lot of people during the year he spend in Equestrian Wasteland, so... maybe?
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Huh, interesting theory
Yes jack would
Hes that much of a badass
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"Already corrected, thanks^^"
You're welcome. :)
"Sorry to hear you are/were sick, hope you feel better now."
Mostly, aye! Thanks.
"Also I'm gonna assume your sickness impended your ability to spot mistakes, seeing how you only pointed out one ;p"
Possibly; sorry if I missed anything. :)
"Anyway, thanks for reminding me of it"
You're welcome! If/when you do get to it, I hope you enjoy it.
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I can't find the button for the next chapter....
Next chapter?
I do not really know any artists that could do a spritebot… But I do think that I know an artist that could draw our little blood Angel in a really really nice manner, and as things have it do I actually have a commission spot lined up at her... No promisses, but lets see what happens in the future!
I do still love the story as ever, and the only sad thing that I can mention is that there are only one chapter left, and that I know that I will be left with a giant gaping void in my soul that no doctor will be able to heal before the next chapter comes out
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OI! That is her trait, and would be about the same as asking Applejack to stop speaking in her accent. People do just speak as people does
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Lol, I was kidding with that bit in the author's notes Of course, don't let that stop you from comissioning anything Angel related, but it's alright if you won't be able to.
Aw, I'm sure Angel would offer you a hug if she'd know how you're feeling. After she'd ask about physical examination and exploratory surgery ;p
I dont know if she’s serious and that’s very concerning