Smoothing the Knots: Addendum?

Despite the bangout success of my last fic, I'm tempted to add a tiny change.

I don't think I stuck the landing. I wanted to add something like this at the end:

In the middle of their embrace, the tiniest twinkle appeared in the tip of Luna's tail.

Should I?

Comments

[Flashgen]

Oooooh, I really like that as an ending, yes.

[iisaw]

That's very appropriate, given the tone of the story, yes.

[FanOfMostEverything]

Beautiful. Definitely do it.

[Harwick]

I think that would be a sweet addition.

[Reese]

Sounds good. :)

[The Oldest Brony]

The addition of that little extra line lifts it over the fence and out of the park. Well done.

[theRedBrony]

I like it.