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Pascoite


I'm older than your average brony, but then I've always enjoyed cartoons. I'm an experienced reviewer, EqD pre-reader, and occasional author.

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  • Thursday
    Pascoite gets bored and reviews anime, vol. 17

    A day late again, but I had to spend yesterday evening getting some things ready to enter in the county fair. I'm going to pick up a bit of a theme in the also-rans, but featured items this week are megalobox and Noein, after the break.

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  • 2 weeks
    Pascoite gets bored and reviews anime, vol. 16

    Too much going on today, so I saved my write up yesterday. As a plus, it means I can publish it at a reasonable time. Who knew being proactive could prove beneficial? Featured items after the break are Hell Girl and Mushishi.

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  • 4 weeks
    Pascoite gets bored and reviews anime, vol. 15

    Finally (almost) recovered from my business trip that I stretched into a vacation, but I'm still suffering jet lag two days later. Oh well, the Labor Day holiday is coming up, so I'll sleep then. Featured items this time are Michiko & Hatchin and Moribito: Guardian of the Spirit, plus the usual shorter reviews of other things in this neighborhood of the alphabet, after the break.

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  • 8 weeks
    Pascoite gets bored and reviews anime, vol. 14

    A day late, but not a dollar short! But before I get into my oh-so-witty intro, I'll say that this week's featured items are Last Exile and Magical Shopping Arcade Abenobashi.

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  • 10 weeks
    Pascoite gets bored and reviews anime, vol. 13

    My to-watch list keeps growing, but it's heavy with slice of life series at the moment. I usually like to watch 2 or 3 series of different genres at a time, but I might have to double up on the SoL just to even things out more. Not to mention all the things currently airing on Toonami or that I'm waiting for them to get new seasons of. (I say this as I'm halfway paying attention to a recap

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Aug
6th
2019

Post-BronyCon 2019 part 2 · 1:33am Aug 6th, 2019

Just a quick-hit one today. I was having a discussion with someone. I think it was Sharp Spark, but it might have been Octavia Harmony. I did another blog post once about how to receive feedback from reviewers. At least I think I did. Now I can't find it.

Oh wait, it was a forum post here. Editors often get lost in saying what's wrong with a story and don't take the time to say what's right with it, but I try to tell authors to look at all the things I didn't have a problem with. That's all either okay, low-level things we can deal with later, or something I think you'll catch on your own once you learn to spot the things I did mark.

But I also wanted to say that editors often give the most feedback to better stories. Also to ones we enjoy the most, but that's for obvious reasons. Why would that be the case? If I'm reading something by a really good author, why am I going to leave lots of comments on it? Well, for a story that's in really rough shape, it doesn't do that much good to point at detailed things, since a lot of that is going to have to be changed anyway. If I point out a spelling mistake in a sentence that needs to be rewritten, the new version may have a different spelling mistake. You have to tackle it in phases.

For a really good story, long feedback results from several things. One, I'm dealing with more subtle issues that take longer to explain. Two, I'm invested in the story's success, so I want to do the best job I can. And three, since I'm not dealing with low-level things like basic editing, I can take the time to think hard about the story and find all the little tweaks that will tune it up. Folks like GaPJaxie, CoffeeMinion, Blazzing Inferno, Miller Minus, Chris, and Bachiavellian can attest to the walls of text I throw at them. And together, we've made some very special stories.

When someone gives you lots of feedback, you can look at it as all the work you might need to do. Or you can look at it as someone caring enough that it was worth it to them to invest that amount of time in you.

And Raugos brought some freeze-dried durian. In that form, it doesn't have much of a smell, thankfully. My coworker from Malaysia has discussed durian with me before, so I had a little foreknowledge, but I didn't know exactly what to expect. To me, it tasted like French onions. Raugos said nearly everyone who tasted it compared it to something different.

Freglz also had some Australian food he brought. I knew better than to eat any Vegemite, but the Tim Tams he had were delicious.

OleGrayMane was making recordings of well wishes to send to Meridian Prime, so in a way, I'll get to meet him for the first time, too.

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I was able to snag the last TimTam. It was indeed fantastic.

Though to me, the durian tasted like car exhaust.

I have to say that durian is... an acquired taste. Then again, I'm German and probably have some strange acquired tastes of my own. It wasn't bad, though. And it was weird the way it shifted through about 4 flavors, 5 if you count what happened when I took a drink of Coke.

It doesn't like Coke.

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I hope this isn't anything like the Mentos reaction.

I learned that lesson about editing recently. I've found many resources to improve my writing, but few to improve my editing, so I've been learning the hard way.

RBDash47
Site Blogger

I was pleasantly surprised by the durian! Pretty tasty IMO.

PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

Two, I'm invested in the story's success, so I want to do the best job I can.

Oh yeah! This principle guides everything I do in proofreading, editing, hell in reviewing even. If something is good, I want it to be the best it can possibly be.

Also, seconded on the French onions. Once I got that image in my head, it was unmistakable.

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TimTams are great.
Marmite is better, vegemite does in a pinch.
I'm also partial to the "hard cunt" style. Bit of butter, thick glob of vegemite. I love the stuff.

Getting to speak with you was one of the highlights of the con for me. It felt good to finally get to thank you in person for your assistance and influence. I also very much appreciated your kind words about my work, which I see echoed in the sentiment of your post.

The name-brand Pascoite pascoite was also fantastic! :pinkiehappy:

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Had a bit as well.

I couldn't even finish it.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I tried the Vegemite, actually. While it certainly wasn't "good", it also wasn't the horror I'd heard rumor of. I did take a Tim Tam just to get the taste out, though. I do so enjoy those. A shame I missed the durians.

I had a piece of durian hard candy once; it tasted like some kind of fruity cheese.

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