Finished the Cover Art. · 7:01am Aug 8th, 2014
Now before I put it up, I want your guys' opinion on it. If it doesn't look good, I'll try to find someone to commission it.
I'll draw Shining Star's character design next when I have the time.
Just a guy that does whatever comes to mind. Giving the D, trolling, cockblocking, and laughing maniacally may apply.
Now before I put it up, I want your guys' opinion on it. If it doesn't look good, I'll try to find someone to commission it.
I'll draw Shining Star's character design next when I have the time.
It looks very nice indeed, you can certainly draw better than me.
to be honest anthropomophic is not my thing but i do enjoy it alot it looks relly nice good job anyways i best be going to read more storyss b4 i lose my minde wiateing on others to update hehe. but flura de lus dose look sexyer that way won't minde it as the cover art
Very nice.
Oooo La la! Very nice indeed! Can't wait till you post an image of Shining Star!
Is this what she wore to the party? Anyway I think that this is perfect. Although I think the front arm need a little work, but it's still great.
might order a cover, do like this story
Hubba hubba *wolf whistles*
I hate to be "that guy," but there are some minor little oddities in the proportions of her hands and arms. Nothing horrific, mind, and a ton better than a lot of cover art some stories have.
Seems to me her left arm is too short, and her hand looks withered. I am glad, however, that you've made her torso understated. It makes her more suited to her show-accurate version, and is apt for a fashion model.
2353290 Nah, she wore something MUCH different compared to what I posted here. I just made up the dress at the time.
2353493 Yeah, it's been a while since I've drawn anthro characters, but with me taking drawing classes, I'm hoping to get even better with these than I did before. I probably could have done more with the coloring, but I got pretty tired last night. But anyway, any critiques is much appreciated, so I thank you for being honest here.
A lot better than anything I could draw, by an incredibly wide margin. The star designs are asymetrical though, which is causing the little Death the Kid inside my head to go into a nervous breakdown.
I like the design. Only problem, small one at that, is the proportions of the hands and arms. Aside from that, my only complaint somewhat is the background. It needs a bit more flair, know what I mean?
I think it looks great.
Not bad at all, although I would have put a slit on her dress, and moved her cutie mark down to where her thigh would have been exposed by the slit in the dress I mentioned. By far a lot better than anything I could have done. And I can't draw to save my life!
Also, thanks for favoriting my story; I'm going to assume that you enjoyed it.
2358302 There's another cutie mark where it should be in the pony world. It's just that in my universe they're also on the arms for the sake of not pulling down pants (or pulling up skirts) every time someone asked what their cutie marks look like.
I liked reading the first chapter, and I can't wait to find out what's next. Keep up the good work.